Review of chapter "I could kiss you" from LeaFairy
Review:
Aw, what's up with Anya? I thought her and Vince were doing good?... too bad they're not :(( I can understand Anya's reluctance to start a relationship again after the whole thing with Xander and her dying happened. Hopefully they work it out though, I really do like the idea of them together. Especially with Vince and his idiotic possessiveness in this chapter =) I loved his short POV in this chapter too, it showed how much he really is into Anya. Call me crazy, but I just find him plain adorable :D I liked the part with the girl too and him sending her away...
I'm glad that Faith, Andrew and Anya had their big heart-to-heart talk and are on their way to repairing their friendship as well. Yay!! I would absolutely hate if they would lose the closeness they have found with each other. The would suck hard!
I really enjoyed the Faith/Letty bonding also. The whole exchange was hilarious and I *loved* the part with Faith playing diversion girl with her trying distract Letty from seeing Dom. Fucking brilliant! The dream in the beginning was spooky though. Does it possibly have some deeper meaning? Hopefully it doesn't mean that Letty dies in the future =(
Anyway, thanks for the fabulous chapter! Your writing is amazing like always!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [31 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I could kiss you" from HarmMarie
Review:
Liked this.
Review By [HarmMarie] • Date [31 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I could kiss you" from wizziewoo
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loved this chapter (even though i was hoping for some han!) cant wait for the next part as always
Review By [wizziewoo] • Date [31 May 11] • Not Rated
I wonder what happened with Anya and Vince since he clearly is still interested and she seemed to really dig him before. I know Xander hurt her but she can't let that affect the rest of her life. I also wonder about why Faith dreamed of Letty dying. I'm glad they had a convo about what is bothering them.
Yay, I'm so glad that you're back to this story! Thank goodness for Fast Five! lol. Anyway, this chapter was just incredible! I absolutely LOVED the Connor/Faith conversation. He was so sweet and perfect with how he reached out to her. I really don't think anyone else would've got her to open up the way he did. I am still really worried for Faith though :( Hopefully with Connor, Ayna and Andrew now knowing how far down Faith has gotten they will be watching more closely, and be there to help her.
Also along with the wonderfulness of this chapter, this line had me laughing like mad --- “we just erase their memories and lie to them, stalking them obsessively like a great big, giant foreheaded lurker, but we never get rid of them,”--- Fucking brilliant!!!
Thanks bunches for the update!!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [22 May 11] • Not Rated
so strange!! i was going to send you a message to see if you would be updating this anytime soon!! i got some pretty weird looks in college when i screamed as i got the message for the update lol!! loved this but gotta say i hope when you post more we have some faith/han!!
Review By [wizziewoo] • Date [9 May 11] • Not Rated
Joyful
