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Review of chapter "Little girls" from (Current Donor)Quindma
Review:
This is such an awesome story. I do hope you'll get back with more someday.
Review By [(Current Donor)Quindma] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Little girls" from Obsidian
Review:
awesome story! I am loving it. I truly hope you continue it!
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [6 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Little girls" from Yodes
Review:
Please update this story soon?
Review By [Yodes] • Date [4 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Little girls" from MedivhTheMagus
Review:
:-D i love it
Review By [MedivhTheMagus] • Date [16 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Little girls" from jgoodman
Review:
Great chapter, Love this story and can't wait to read more
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Little girls" from kaleecat
Review:
Xander's path of revenge is looking a bit. . . worrisome. I'll admit, I'm getting a bit twitchy about his finding his own support system that doesn't involve the inner-personalities.

Quite a surprise that he ends up at the volcano planet -- it will be interesting to see what his inner-data will make of what they've done with the shield. And is he early enough in the timeline to avert or at least give lots of warning time about what will happen. Intriguing.

And the visual of Xander holding his infant son for the first time just broke my heart.

Lovely update. :-)
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [11 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Little girls" from Blackdex
Review:
Very good. loved it. bit sad you killed off so many chars, but its your story, and if the plot needed it, the plot needed it. I just cant help but wonder why the healing ability kicked in when it did. oh yeah, did Xander remember the message from the genii woman about the plant, the last request to tell the genii?
Review By [Blackdex] • Date [11 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Little girls" from LadyFoxFire
Review:
So when do you expect the SGA team to make contact with Xander?
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [11 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Little girls" from Elleria
Review:
Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [10 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Little girls" from Myauzo
Review:
Great chapter
Review By [Myauzo] • Date [10 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Little girls" from qrm
Review:
Gotta say I love this story. More plese.
Review By [qrm] • Date [10 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Little girls" from efphrim
Review:
I really liked it! I'm already jumping up and down waiting for more ;P
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [efphrim] • Date [10 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "X+3babies=" from midnight
Review:
update soon
Review By [midnight] • Date [26 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "X+3babies=" from kaleecat
Review:
I re-read the story so I could truly appreciate the new chapter. I still get choked up every time Xander thinks about his son. Loved his time with Aree and the family & should have realized it would end badly. Poor Xander, for all that his mind is adult, he is also in a child's body with some child needs. I hope he finds real help soon, or at least a good home for the girls.

I'm also getting a bad feeling that Willow's obsession and meddling is going to end badly and re-birth the destruction that Xander's sacrifice unwrote. I also have to wonder how blind Giles & the others are not to notice the odd 'coincidence' in that the prophecy references a Burning-Tree and that Willow's name is for a tree.

Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm glad u like the story and find old child Xander interesting. 
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [5 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "X+3babies=" from Elleria
Review:
Love this. Does your muse like chocolate chip cookies? I make really good chocolate chip cookies I've been told...
Comments from author:
She loves chocolate chip! Thanks.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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