Xander's path of revenge is looking a bit. . . worrisome. I'll admit, I'm getting a bit twitchy about his finding his own support system that doesn't involve the inner-personalities.
Quite a surprise that he ends up at the volcano planet -- it will be interesting to see what his inner-data will make of what they've done with the shield. And is he early enough in the timeline to avert or at least give lots of warning time about what will happen. Intriguing.
And the visual of Xander holding his infant son for the first time just broke my heart.
Lovely update. :-)
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [11 May 12] • Not Rated
Very good. loved it. bit sad you killed off so many chars, but its your story, and if the plot needed it, the plot needed it. I just cant help but wonder why the healing ability kicked in when it did. oh yeah, did Xander remember the message from the genii woman about the plant, the last request to tell the genii?
Review By [Blackdex] • Date [11 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I re-read the story so I could truly appreciate the new chapter. I still get choked up every time Xander thinks about his son. Loved his time with Aree and the family & should have realized it would end badly. Poor Xander, for all that his mind is adult, he is also in a child's body with some child needs. I hope he finds real help soon, or at least a good home for the girls.
I'm also getting a bad feeling that Willow's obsession and meddling is going to end badly and re-birth the destruction that Xander's sacrifice unwrote. I also have to wonder how blind Giles & the others are not to notice the odd 'coincidence' in that the prophecy references a Burning-Tree and that Willow's name is for a tree.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm glad u like the story and find old child Xander interesting.
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [5 Apr 12] • Not Rated
great story very well written. a;so ;ike the limits you put on xander his hologram only can be used for a set amount of time being one of them usally writters make their characters allpowerful. stories like that get boring after page one. so keep up the good work looking forward to the next update
Comments from author:
Yeah I like limits on power too. Make him too powerful might as well make him god. Thanks.
Review By [kelvin] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
