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Review of chapter "X+3babies=" from kelvin
Review:
great story very well written. a;so ;ike the limits you put on xander his hologram only can be used for a set amount of time being one of them usally writters make their characters allpowerful. stories like that get boring after page one. so keep up the good work looking forward to the next update
Comments from author:
Yeah I like limits on power too. Make him too powerful might as well make him god. Thanks.
Review By [kelvin] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "X+3babies=" from leonamasha
Review:
Yay! An update!! I'm soo happy for this update that I present to you a batch of cookies for the Muse :)

As always, am loving the story and where you're taking it. Very realistic in that things aren't always easy; yet, at other times for him to have been sent to the crystal factory at all is a wonder.

Thanks and here's to hoping for another update some time in the future!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [leonamasha] • Date [30 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "X+3babies=" from kayron
Review:
I guess that the Wraith have become Xander's new enemy, but this is going to be so incredibly hard for him. When he began in the fight against the supernatural, at least he was a teen who would become a better fighter within a few years. He's starting in this new fight as a small child, who is taking care of three other small children! He also has no support to rely on other than the voices in his head. I look forward to seeing how things work out for the very young Xander. It DOES make an interesting story.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Xander's got a plate full.
Review By [kayron] • Date [30 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "X+3babies=" from efphrim
Review:
yay! I'm so happy for the update. As always I love the story and can barely wait to read more.
Review By [efphrim] • Date [30 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "X+3babies=" from LadyFoxFire
Review:
Good chapter even if it's a bit sad. Damned Wraith
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [30 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "X+3babies=" from lothlorien
Review:
Poor Xander... things are really not going his way. So, when are the SGA people getting involved? Are they even getting involved? Please continue soon
Comments from author:
They will be involved soon.
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [30 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wraith" from Muffie
Review:
Great to see an update! This is getting really interesting. I love what you've done with Xander.
Comments from author:
Thank u!
Review By [Muffie] • Date [27 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wraith" from Elleria
Review:
Very happy to see an update.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [23 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wraith" from LadyFoxFire
Review:
poor Xander. Is all that going to be left is Xander and a couple children?
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [23 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wraith" from SilentAddiction
Review:
Fantastic, as expected!! Poor Aree and Coba, I hope at least Hawka survives. Thanks for the excellent update, I'm looking forward to more! :)
Review By [SilentAddiction] • Date [23 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wraith" from wraithrune
Review:
Love this!
Review By [wraithrune] • Date [23 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wraith" from destructionsmistress
Review:
Very sad chapter. Poor Xander! This is a great story. Thank you for sharing it.
Review By [destructionsmistress] • Date [23 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wraith" from silvergaurd
Review:
Great new chapter. Can't wait to see more.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [23 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wraith" from lothlorien
Review:
An update! Yay. Poor Xander - things never go his way. I hope this turns out as well as it can. Please continue soon
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [23 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wraith" from kayron
Review:
Xander may have seemed like a strange kid to them, but they were really including him. The mother really seemed to care for Xander. It's going to make Xander feel terrible that he couldn't save her. I wonder what Xander is going to do with his new siblings.
Review By [kayron] • Date [23 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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