This story is amazing! I really enjoy how you weave your readers into a whole new world. Sure, a part of me wants to see the Atlanteans already, but at the same time I want to see how Xander evolves in this new environment. There are so many opportunities for this storyline...
One question: Are the timelines in sync with the Scooby gang and Xander?
Which reminds me, you've differentiated between locations and have done the flashbacks clearly and as a reader I'm extremely happy with that!
See, the reason for the question is that I get this feeling that maybe while Xander is growing up in the Pegasus galaxy then he could be doing it in the '80s like his original self did in Sunnydale and that way if everyone ever does meet they would be the same age. Um, see where I'm going here? Just curious.
Can't wait for the next chapter!! Thanks for what you've written so far (:
Review By [leonamasha] • Date [15 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I love this story! Good plot, it's true to the Xander character, and has some VERY dark parts in most of the flashbacks. Could still use a bit more spellchecking, but very good over all.
Review By [zanviller] • Date [15 Nov 11] • Not Rated
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