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Review of chapter "Wraith" from sosaith
Review:
That was sad. How is Xan supposed to take care of those little girls by himself?
Review By [sosaith] • Date [23 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wraith" from SuukiAldrea
Review:
awesome! Can't wait for more! Update soon please. Ja ne!
Review By [SuukiAldrea] • Date [22 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trust" from Duskie
Review:
This is great, I'm really enjoying it. I look forward to Xander eventually meeting the people from Atlantis.

I hope Aree doesn't freak out too much if she realizes that Xander can't be a child. But you named the chapter 'Trust' so I suspect she will.

Can't wait till you update next.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Duskie] • Date [16 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trust" from tals
Review:
I adore this story.
Review By [tals] • Date [15 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trust" from gaulty
Review:
great chapter, keep up the good work, byes
Review By [gaulty] • Date [27 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trust" from jgoodman
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Love this story and can't wait to read more
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [19 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trust" from leonamasha
Review:
This story is amazing! I really enjoy how you weave your readers into a whole new world. Sure, a part of me wants to see the Atlanteans already, but at the same time I want to see how Xander evolves in this new environment. There are so many opportunities for this storyline...

One question: Are the timelines in sync with the Scooby gang and Xander?

Which reminds me, you've differentiated between locations and have done the flashbacks clearly and as a reader I'm extremely happy with that!

See, the reason for the question is that I get this feeling that maybe while Xander is growing up in the Pegasus galaxy then he could be doing it in the '80s like his original self did in Sunnydale and that way if everyone ever does meet they would be the same age. Um, see where I'm going here? Just curious.

Can't wait for the next chapter!! Thanks for what you've written so far (:
Review By [leonamasha] • Date [15 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trust" from SuukiAldrea
Review:
awesome! Can't wait for more! Update soon please! Ja ne!
Review By [SuukiAldrea] • Date [15 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trust" from zanviller
Review:
I love this story! Good plot, it's true to the Xander character, and has some VERY dark parts in most of the flashbacks. Could still use a bit more spellchecking, but very good over all.
Review By [zanviller] • Date [15 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trust" from Vickzie
Review:
Cool story so far! When is Xander gonna meet the Atlantis crew?
Comments from author:
Soon. I want him to meet the Wraith first, The 24s, and the Brotherhood of 15, and cross hairs with the Genii. 3 chaps from now maybe?
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [15 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trust" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
I love this story more with every update!
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [14 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trust" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [14 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trust" from Lady
Review:
Oh more please. I really love this one.
Review By [Lady] • Date [14 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trust" from lothlorien
Review:
Briliant. I'm glad that for once the nice people are actually nice XD Please continue soon
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [14 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trust" from ShadowsFlame
Review:
I am soooooo happy you updated. I just can't get enough. Please wright more soon.
Review By [ShadowsFlame] • Date [14 Nov 11] • Not Rated
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