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Review of chapter "Hell" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Great start
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hell" from stasa
Review:
I agree, shame on you ;) Then again, I LOVE the first chapter, it was really addictive, and I really hope that you keep writing this story.
Comments from author:
I like the word addictive when it comes to my writing but I do know I leave a lot of rope for people to hang with. I hate it when that happens to me so I will make an effort to put more updates on the latest list. ^_^
Review By [stasa] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hell" from purrfus
Review:
Never say no to a muse. If the others find out they get mad.

More soon please.
Comments from author:
That's what I was thinking! ^_^
Review By [purrfus] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hell" from kizunakat
Review:
very cool. I cant wait to see Xander meet Jack and the gang. Kizuna
Review By [kizunakat] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hell" from kattz
Review:
Just the first chapter and already it's really intense :)
Review By [kattz] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hell" from kayron
Review:
I would say "Bad Muse!" for sending you off with a new plot bunny when you have some great unfinished stories (and you do have some great stories!), but this one is pretty good too!! INTENSE!! That whole scene of devastation that you painted in my head was horrifying! The 'beautiful fallen angel Lucifer' (what a terrible way to describe the leader of evil) leading the evil hordes to destroy Earth. The Angels coming down from the Heavens to try and defend the Earth. BILLIONS dead. The dead walking, and denied heaven. What a scary scenario!! Xander Harris was finally broken down from the fight, but still determined to do anything he could until the last breath left his body. Even though Willow didn't want to give Xander up, he accepted his own death so that the world could live. REALLY INTENSE STORY, but it is fascinating! It seemed as though the others forgot him though. It's good that the other timeline was destroyed. Maybe it would be better if they didn't remember him. If they remember him they might try to get him back, and his loss was the sacrifice required to save everybody. If they get him back the same destruction might happen all over again. Although, it seems really sad that they won't any memory of someone that was such a big part of their lives, and loved them so well. I guess Xander is somehow in the Atlantis universe now? I look forward to the next update.
Comments from author:
This whole story was inspired by a dream I had, the part with the red eye and the dead acting like normal people on a walk was my freaky dream. My gory little muse wanted something intense and a bit heartbreaking among my stories. Glad u like it so far. I wanted something that would make people say 'Yikes!' and 'More!' at the same time.
Review By [kayron] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hell" from LadyFoxFire
Review:
We don't mind you adopting another bunnie as long as you keep updating the other fics you already have posted.

Please update you Xander/Riddick fic along with all the others
Comments from author:
I'll see what I can do. I think my muses are like those digi-pet thingys. Forget to feed them and they die, was never good at those things. I'll do a reread and see if I get inspired. ^_^

P.S. I kinda wish I didn't look at ur challenges, I'm really tempted. I love the Stockholm syndrome idea and the Xander autobot. I've been thinking about doing a transformers cross I just couldn't think of a simple way to make Xan a bot. I'm tempted but I hope others look at ur challenges because some of them are real great.
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hell" from nightowl
Review:
I love this beginning but I'd like to see some more finished stories. Any way the muses want to go I'm happy. You write such awesome stories I'm just happy to see your name as the author.
Comments from author:
Wow, thank you. :)
Review By [nightowl] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hell" from lothlorien
Review:
i think it's brilliant. and you should work on finishing the other stories, but if you want to start a new one, who can blame you... especially if it's this great. so where is xander? atlantis? or somewhere else? and did he become young again? cause why else would willow be bigger than him? please continue soon and don't let this be another one of your WIPs.
Comments from author:
Hmm? What ya mean? Yeah Xan is a kid again.
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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