I like this. Time for Xander to puppy dog eye his cousin to guilty death. I would love to see that. Speed will obey his cousins every whim! Damn eyes are deadly. My cousin does it and I still can't block them!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [6 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Going to the airport" from calikocat
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So am I imagining things or is there pretext here? I feel that Xander is strong enough emotionally to support H. No one's ever needed to pick up the pieces for Horatio, but Xander would be perfectly capable of putting him back together again should he ever need to fall apart. So pretext?
So, Xan's gonna give Speed the lecture of a lifetime yes? Really drill it in that he needs to take care of himself, and that includes keeping his gun clean.
I'll keep an eye out for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Oh yeah Speeds even gonna get the Xander patented puppy dog eyes and the full Xander version of the resolve face, after all Willow helped raise him, he learned from the best!
Review By [calikocat] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Going to the airport" from healerweaver
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Nice continuation. Can't wait to see what the bunny gives you next.
Review By [healerweaver] • Date [15 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Going to the airport" from silvergaurd
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fantastic start. Hope to see more.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [15 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Going to the airport" from kayron
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I wonder if Speed, as Xander's cousin, knows the truth about Sunnydale? It sounds as though Xander might tell Horatio the truth about SunnyD. Horatio is a man that believes in science, following the evidence, and he is a great lie detector. It's very very very difficult to lie to Horatio. If Xander presents the facts to him, I think that Horatio will believe Xander. We will see.
Comments from author:
I haven't figured that out yet, but I think that if Speed has visited Xander in SunnyD then he probably knows about the nightlife there. It will tie into some elements in the future chapters I write.
Review By [kayron] • Date [14 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Going to the airport" from Kirallie
Review:
Good work! Will Xander be giving the truth about Jesse's death?
Comments from author:
Possibly a non demonized version of it, but I'm not to sure on that part yet.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [14 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forgotten Time" from CrystalBlaze
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This is a very good start.
Ironically, this afterthought on Xander's part (boy always did take better care of others than of himself) likely saved Rich a job as a bartender at a strip joint. And, given the vamp brothels, I'd avoid the Dale's strip joints like the superflu!!
Comments from author:
*giggles like only a cracked out bunny can make me do*
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [30 Jan 10] • Not Rated