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Review of chapter "Forgotten Time" from CrystalBlaze
This is a very good start.

Ironically, this afterthought on Xander's part (boy always did take better care of others than of himself) likely saved Rich a job as a bartender at a strip joint. And, given the vamp brothels, I'd avoid the Dale's strip joints like the superflu!!
Comments from author:
*giggles like only a cracked out bunny can make me do*
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [30 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Forgotten Time" from healerweaver
Very nice, hun. Also, if you need a beta reader, I'm just downstairs. You KNOW this. I'll even beta the next chapter for you. And I agree with you from one of the previous reviews; at least H only likes Hummers. I'd hate to see him tearing through the Everglades in a semi.
Review By [healerweaver] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forgotten Time" from kayron
Horatio loves his Hummers! That's kind of a nice idea, or at least a good idea, that Xander is able to break Horatio's reserve and help him get rid of some of his pain. Haoratio is always the strong one that never breaks. Others do and then he's there for them. Horatio never let's himself be helped. I look forward to seeing how Xander does in Miami.
Comments from author:
That was something that's always bugged me about H, that he never gets to break, he has to pull it together and be strong for everyone else, and Xander has a natural ability to get people to talk even if it's about something they would never tell anyone else. Scarily enough I have that ability too, I'm thinking of incorporating some of my own history with people confessing and the chaos that causes into the story. Hope you all like the next chapter, I think this bunny is gonna make me wish muses wern't so rabid.
Review By [kayron] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forgotten Time" from MistDragon
Thank you for the story, it is a very good start. Sorry I can't help with the beta thing. I tried it once and the author stopped emailing me so I guess I didn't do a very good job. Hope you can get someone to help. MD.

ps.. I love the 'rental Hummer', H would feel naked driving anything smaller. (snicker)
Comments from author:
Too true, and hey at least it's not a semi!
Review By [MistDragon] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forgotten Time" from Wyeth
I think this could turn into a novel length story if you try. Could you have Xander meet up with at least one main character from all the different CSI teams? One idea is to have Xander as a traveling troubleshooter for Supernatural Crimes that CSI teams find themselves in the middle of.
Comments from author:
Good idea but the plot bunnie that bit me has some definite ideas of where she wants it to go...and since I ended up staying up til 3 am for this and had to get up at 6:30, I'll let the bunnie run the show. Thanks for the suggestion.

Review By [Wyeth] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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