I continue to be impressed with your story. As I wrote earlier, you took something that sounds like it would be a sex comedy story and turned it into an emotionally wrenching story with some real consequences to the whole gang. I feel sorry for them all, but especially Buffy. I guess this changes Buffy's relationship with the undead pedophile so Angelus won't be showing up. I guess this means something good came out of the foursome, other than the babies. And I really look forward to seeing what happens when the babies show up. Thank you for a most engaging story and I hope you continue to tell the tale.
I like the way you have everyone reacting to what has happened. The Scoobies were at their best, I believe, when things were at their worst. Your story illustrates this very well.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're having your baby" from Dragonelf
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I am looking forward to see what the plot bunny will inspire you to do with this story.
::Gives the plot bunny a bowl of Borscht::
#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=# Mother Nature is not sweet. - John Shelby Spong #=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [14 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're having your baby" from ordieth
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Good to see more of this story. I wonder how much of Cassanova's fighting experience was retained by Xander.
Review of chapter "We're having your baby" from BrinLondofive
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After reading this chapter, I had to go back and read "Expletive Not Deleted" in order to catch up (missed it the first time around). You've put a lot of thought into the dynamics of this. I like that, since many authors don't. Now, hopefully, you can get this going and continued better than some of my other fave fics authors do.
Review By [BrinLondofive] • Date [30 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're having your baby" from CPTSkip
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When I first started reading the first story in your series I thought it was going to be some kind of simple sex comedy. I really like the more serious and realistic way you took your story instead.
I have no doubt that the CoWs would have offed Buffy in a split second if she had turned up pregnant. At the same time, what a letdown for the poor young woman finding out she wasn't. I wonder how she will react when both her female lovers start showing? Will she feel like she is having her face rubbed in something she will never experience or will she go all out "auntie" on the two, or more, unborn children?
And just to get off the doom and gloom train for a moment, will Jenny ever get her fantasy threesome with Giles and Joyce? Lol!
Comments from author:
Whether Jenny maneuvers Joyce into joining her and Giles will depend on whether or not Giles keeps her so thoroughly shagged that she forgets all about it or not.
Buffy will have to work through some tough issues before she finally obtains resolution to how to behave towards Willow, Cordelia, and Xander.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [29 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're having your baby" from twlight
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I love how this segways from the first story. I love this story so far and I eagerly await the next installment of this story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [29 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're having your baby" from ChiVayne
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Nice continuation. I am of the opinion that Cordy showing off her smarts means she is opening up to the others and letting them see a bit beneath the mask.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [28 Jan 10] • Not Rated