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Review of chapter "Realizations" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [13 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Realizations" from Gideon
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Xander is in a bit of a no win situation here. If he gets together with any of the girls the two others may feel angry with him or hurt and I'm sure he doesn't want to hurt any of them. If he doesn't get together with any of them then all four of them will be alone and two kids will not have a full family. We have seen some of Cordelia and Willow's thoughts so I guess Buffy is up in the next chapter. I would say she is likely the most confused of them all with the uncontrollable rage she is feeling. I hope she can separate that feeling from Xander, eventually, as it is really not his fault either.
I like how you have the characters being so honest and I hope that continues.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [13 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Willow and Xander" from Loatroll
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Interesting stuff! Looking forward to more. Thanks for the great read.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [9 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Willow and Xander" from Jess
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Great new chapter. I am happy that it hasn't been forgotten. :D
Review By [Jess] • Date [9 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Willow and Xander" from VillageOrchid
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An interesting chapter ending, and interesting that you decided that Xander was feeling angry... even if not acting on anger.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're having your baby" from VillageOrchid
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I still think that Buffy may have lied to protect herself and her baby.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Willow and Xander" from Gideon
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Well that last line was more forward than I would have expected from Willow and I bet more forward than Xander would have expected. I guess she really is still feeling some effects from her possesion :) Hopefully all good effects!
Good on her for finally talking to Xander honestly too.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Willow and Xander" from ordieth
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I like the ending, and I especially like the inclusion of the Cassanova remnants in Xander's considerations. I hope we see more of Cassanova left over, especially since it's been such a very short time since Halloween. Is Xander keeping much of Cassanova, or is this going to be all about the fallout?
Review By [ordieth] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Willow and Xander" from war
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good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trying to move forward" from lorwen
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wow...
:)
Review By [lorwen] • Date [8 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy Issues" from Gideon
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If I was Giles I would be very proud of how Buffy behaved in this chapter. She is putting the welfare of others ahead of her own, and taking action to safeguard the innocent. I hope you are able to continue adding to this story - I can think of some interesting directions for it. Maybe Xander goes with Willow and Cordy and they all live together away from the hellmouth. Or maybe they emancipate themselves and they all stay with Buffy. Either sounds like fun :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy Issues" from Kovac
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I'd really like to know what's going to happen next.

Seems to me that Xander and the girls have a rocky road to travel but, from your writing, they secretly long for something coming out of that night together. Casanova showed them the pleasure and warmth they could get if they allowed themselves to reach for what they want no matter how unconventional it is.

I hope they will.

Nice job.
Comments from author:
Thanks. It will be intersting.
Review By [Kovac] • Date [21 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're having your baby" from arinor
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A lot of drama and a decent plot-line make this into an interesting read. If it fits with your plot you may have one of them bring up surrogacy, or similar, which would at least provide Buffy with a bit of her dreams again. Regardless of the actual choice involved it could very well prove therapeutic as is the case for similar cases that exist in fact.
Review By [arinor] • Date [21 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy Issues" from (Current Donor)vladt
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very good read, thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy Issues" from ordieth
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bare-bear and his-him

I'm waiting for more leftovers of Cassinova. All this drama is interesting, and very Buffy, but I'm hoping to get back to Xander as Cassinova. Unfortunately, I'm not sure that's where the story is headed any more.
Comments from author:
I haven't forgotten about Casanova and his multitude of skills.
Review By [ordieth] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
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