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Review of chapter "Willow and Xander" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trying to move forward" from lorwen
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wow...
:)
Review By [lorwen] • Date [8 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy Issues" from Gideon
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If I was Giles I would be very proud of how Buffy behaved in this chapter. She is putting the welfare of others ahead of her own, and taking action to safeguard the innocent. I hope you are able to continue adding to this story - I can think of some interesting directions for it. Maybe Xander goes with Willow and Cordy and they all live together away from the hellmouth. Or maybe they emancipate themselves and they all stay with Buffy. Either sounds like fun :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy Issues" from Kovac
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I'd really like to know what's going to happen next.

Seems to me that Xander and the girls have a rocky road to travel but, from your writing, they secretly long for something coming out of that night together. Casanova showed them the pleasure and warmth they could get if they allowed themselves to reach for what they want no matter how unconventional it is.

I hope they will.

Nice job.
Comments from author:
Thanks. It will be intersting.
Review By [Kovac] • Date [21 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're having your baby" from arinor
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A lot of drama and a decent plot-line make this into an interesting read. If it fits with your plot you may have one of them bring up surrogacy, or similar, which would at least provide Buffy with a bit of her dreams again. Regardless of the actual choice involved it could very well prove therapeutic as is the case for similar cases that exist in fact.
Review By [arinor] • Date [21 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy Issues" from (Current Donor)vladt
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very good read, thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy Issues" from ordieth
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bare-bear and his-him

I'm waiting for more leftovers of Cassinova. All this drama is interesting, and very Buffy, but I'm hoping to get back to Xander as Cassinova. Unfortunately, I'm not sure that's where the story is headed any more.
Comments from author:
I haven't forgotten about Casanova and his multitude of skills.
Review By [ordieth] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy Issues" from burmafrdnow
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That bit about entries in a dusty Watcher diary is so terribly sad and so true. Buffy will be the most successful slayer of all time. And it will not mean a thing to the Watchers Council. The fact that the best slayer ever was not council trained would be covered up or no mention of her made at all except in Giles's watcher diary. No children, nothing left in a few decades when even all her friends are gone. The only sign that Buffy Summers ever lived is that the world is still there- and no one will know that.
Comments from author:
Even if Buffy has no children of her own, I do not foresee any of Xander's descendants being allowed to forget.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy Issues" from twlight
Review:
Hmm........... it looks like Buffy might want to continue what was started on Holloween. I love this story and I look forward to more.
Review By [twlight] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy Issues" from CPTSkip
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I continue to be impressed with your story. As I wrote earlier, you took something that sounds like it would be a sex comedy story and turned it into an emotionally wrenching story with some real consequences to the whole gang. I feel sorry for them all, but especially Buffy. I guess this changes Buffy's relationship with the undead pedophile so Angelus won't be showing up. I guess this means something good came out of the foursome, other than the babies. And I really look forward to seeing what happens when the babies show up. Thank you for a most engaging story and I hope you continue to tell the tale.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy Issues" from ChiVayne
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I like the way you have everyone reacting to what has happened. The Scoobies were at their best, I believe, when things were at their worst. Your story illustrates this very well.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're having your baby" from Dragonelf
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I am looking forward to see what the plot bunny will inspire you to do with this story.

::Gives the plot bunny a bowl of Borscht::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [14 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're having your baby" from ordieth
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Good to see more of this story. I wonder how much of Cassanova's fighting experience was retained by Xander.
Review By [ordieth] • Date [1 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're having your baby" from BrinLondofive
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After reading this chapter, I had to go back and read "Expletive Not Deleted" in order to catch up (missed it the first time around).
You've put a lot of thought into the dynamics of this. I like that, since many authors don't.
Now, hopefully, you can get this going and continued better than some of my other fave fics authors do.
Review By [BrinLondofive] • Date [30 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're having your baby" from CPTSkip
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When I first started reading the first story in your series I thought it was going to be some kind of simple sex comedy. I really like the more serious and realistic way you took your story instead.

I have no doubt that the CoWs would have offed Buffy in a split second if she had turned up pregnant. At the same time, what a letdown for the poor young woman finding out she wasn't. I wonder how she will react when both her female lovers start showing? Will she feel like she is having her face rubbed in something she will never experience or will she go all out "auntie" on the two, or more, unborn children?

And just to get off the doom and gloom train for a moment, will Jenny ever get her fantasy threesome with Giles and Joyce? Lol!
Comments from author:
Whether Jenny maneuvers Joyce into joining her and Giles will depend on whether or not Giles keeps her so thoroughly shagged that she forgets all about it or not.

Buffy will have to work through some tough issues before she finally obtains resolution to how to behave towards Willow, Cordelia, and Xander.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [29 Jan 10] • Not Rated
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