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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Loved this chapter - who'd have thought it would be so difficult to have sex with your gf in a hotel bedroom...? Nicely done - and very humorous :))
Comments from author:
Lousy wannabe superheroes and supervillains :-p
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from Addlcove
Review:
awesome chapter :) now I'm gonna go play FO3 again :)
Comments from author:
Strangely I tend to feel the need to *write* a chapter after I play Fallout. :-;
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [14 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Yay! Romantic interlude at last! - and just as awkward as I thought it would be :)
Comments from author:
Awkward is funny, I always like to go with funny ;-)
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from MistofRainbows
Review:
And once again I'm a bit blown away by your ability to weave the games together into something that doesn't feel forced but still dances between the games connecting things while telling a good story. I think it will be interesting to see where things go from here.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from (Past Donor)betascud
Review:
And what about the Coyle/Gauss Rifle ship, eh?
Comments from author:
His M72 is getting jealous :-p
Review By [(Past Donor)betascud] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from Addlcove
Review:
still enjoying this story, looking forward to their next objective.
Comments from author:
Bit more time in Canterbury Commons then it'll be off to new adventures.
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from NimRast
Review:
...Wow... This is the best fanfic I've ever read... it's truly amazing. I started reading it two days ago and it got me hooked. Now I've read it all. I love your explanations to the unconsistances of the game, well thought! Also the relationship between Allison and Coyle reminds me of Ranma 1/2.

Congratulations.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [NimRast] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
I love the way Dreamer is developing - and the girls are working together to mock Coyle; turnabout is after all fair play!

Keep it coming!

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Comments from author:
Glad you like my OC's :-)
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Addlcove
Review:
'bout time!

Awesome :) love this story it always makes me pick up FO and go play a while.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, always appreciated :-)
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Dragonelf
Review:
I like what you have done so far with the story and I am already looking forward to start reading any new chapters you might get inspired to add to this story.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Apple Fritters::

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...when you have eliminated the impossible, whatever
remains, however improbable, must be the truth.
- Sir Arthur Conan Doyle
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Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it. :-)
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [31 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from TachikomasUncle
Review:
One of the best fics I have ever seen.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [TachikomasUncle] • Date [31 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Wonderful as always!

It is nice to see explanations for some of the 'old' stuff you find laying about and still useable - bloodpacks, drugs, food. I can't imagine ever being so desperate I'd choose to eat 200 year old freeze dried apples!
Comments from author:
Not that appetising a prospect is it? :-p
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [12 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Godogma
Review:
I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit and even enjoyed the little quirk/point from the movie Aliens (or was I the only one who thought that white stuff you described seemed a lot like the android "blood" from that movie?) you threw in there. I also very much enjoyed the stories you put forth with the framework we had for several of the NPCs you had Coyle talking to in this chapter though it did take some of the focus off the "main" characters. I'd personally like to see more interaction between the girls and Coyle; I've been especially enjoying the back story plot moments even if some of them were rather sad for the character's in question. Dreamer's especially.

Some moments that I think wouldn't be amiss would be Coyle teaching Dreamer to shoot... As well as maybe teaching Allison to throw a spear or grenades effectively... Character interaction moments basically. I'm anticipating when Allison tells Coyle she's coming with him not staying at Canterbury Commons (that should be amusing one way or the other though it should be fairly obvious she likes him by now if he's not completely dense).

Are you planning on both girls hooking up with him? Or is Dreamer going to stay their comrade in arms/porter sort of person as they have their relationship? I could see it working easily either way though we haven't really seen any inclination on her part toward him. Working through her traumatized issues toward men could be good or it could be really bad for the fic depending on how you chose to take it.
Comments from author:
No the white synthetic blood is something I once saw in a documentary, I don't think they've got it to work yet though.

It's not going to be Allison/Coyle/Dreamer. I've got other plans for Dreamer ;-)
Review By [Godogma] • Date [8 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Addlcove
Review:
great chapter, love the way they are interacting.
Comments from author:
Thanks :-)
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [7 May 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from MistofRainbows
Review:
One could almost feel sorry for the super mutants, but I'm not going to... I've played the game. nice twist even if it's not a crossover. I can totally see Faith or Dawn racking up a kill count in the fallout world. Or having one of the dead doctors in one of the vaults being a Walsh. :)

Joking aside, thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Well there is a red-head named Willow in FO3... albeit she's a ghoul. ;-)
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [11 Apr 11] • Not Rated
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