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Review of chapter "May I Inquire Discreetly, When Are You Free..." from (Recent Donor)Luna
very interested Nessa's Granddaugher. I have a meeting with him sometime this week, acutally."—you mean ‘interested in’ and ‘actually’?

"Must be one hell of a lad in bed, then," Augusta chuckled.-- heehee
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [28 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Quiet Watch" from (Recent Donor)Luna
great chapter! Loved being able to learn more about Kasie and seeing Mac react plus Oz doing the Watcher thing.

'Maybe Buffy needed to show them how it was. Maybe the old Scooby Gang needed to go on a patrol with an audience.'--------------- YES, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [28 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Accept conditions as they exist" from (Recent Donor)Luna
This was bloody excellent! I am definitely liking all stories pertaining to these two.
More please!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [28 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who's the Boss?" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Draco said in a petulant tone. "Everyone likes you."—awww

"And you still pout. I haven't seen that look since Harry beat you at Quidditch. Again."--- hahahaha

I think his favorite food is ferret."--- ahhh hahaha
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [28 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Kiss is Just a Pleasant Reminder..." from (Recent Donor)Luna
Oh, this was *very* fun. I enjoy their bonding moments... and especially enjoy the moments they spend kissing!

Of course, I am worried now. I was thinking Blaise had hidden depths-- and he does-- but I am starting to worry that his main interest in Hannah really *is* because she's hard to get... and once he gets her he's going to break her heart. Of course, maybe after that he'll feel really bad and think 'oh god, i do love her' but then she won't take him back, etc etc.

And I do not understand why he cannot break up with bitch face???? why not???? He doesn't love her. He isn't obsessed with her glamorous lifestyle... So why stay with her??
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [28 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Kiss is Just a Pleasant Reminder..." from burmafrdnow
One of the most interesting stories I have read in quite a while. Normally not a big fan of HP crossovers because usually they are from the HP point of view and usually very arrogant about it.
Love the charactor interaction. Well here is my two cents:

The Council does need a wet works crew for intelligence gathering and to take care of Humans that work with evil demons. Slayers should never deal with Humans. So having Ian around is overall probably a good idea.

The Ministry. What a bunch of incompetant losers. If I were Buffy I would have a little meeting with them about their attitude towards the Council and Willow in particular and tell them this:

"You failed. For years you denied Voldemort was back or a threat. Then you proceeded to handicap and hinder most of those that were effective in fighting them. Then you let off with a slap on the wrist those like Malfoy who MURDERED for years. You have no moral or ethical authority at all. Now you want to pass judgement on a young woman who went through incredible trials while you sat in your offices and did nothing. If I forgave her then you have nothing to say about it. Try and move against her or the Council and see who has the power- not just magically but outside as regards the various governments as well. Who will they support? You who clearly failed and allowed threats and deaths to go on for years - or us who defeated two separate threats in Glory and the First who were much more powerfull then anything VOldemort ever could have been. And beat them in MONTHS not years. Keep this up and there will no longer be the Ministry of Magic; there will only be a Division of Wand Magic UNDER the Council."
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [27 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Kiss is Just a Pleasant Reminder..." from (Current Donor)liability
wow! that was brilliant, I lost a whole morning reading and didn't notice, thank you so much!

(one little thing, would he not have said brava, rather than bravo?)
Review By [(Current Donor)liability] • Date [27 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cast Away" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Oh very good, especially with Draco's announcement of being'ashamed'. Finally-- everything is out and about, well- more or less.

Thought it was good that Buffy reflected on Merrick. I always thought that must have been a big deal but after the first episode I don't think it was ever mentioned again- and barely ever in fanfic.

Really looking forward to more.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [26 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "If You Don't Understand How a Woman..." from (Recent Donor)Luna
After having only been fined for his part in the Dark Lord's affairs and changing loyalties in the last battle, the Malfoy charm had once again swayed those who would punish him.—ah, thank you for the explanation

th favor tenfold, sister or not.--- edit ‘the’

Wouldn’t Teddy be a pureblood? Even though Remus was a werewolf he was always a wizard…

I look forward to seeing Lucius sometime…
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [26 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Watcher the Wolf and the Wet-works Guy" from (Recent Donor)Luna
How CUTE that they are trying to make Draco and Oz bond!!

He knew that Summers somehow managed to pull people to her. Like a star in the middle of a solar system.--- Keen observation and nicely worded.

… calculated look in Draco's gray eyes. It was like watching Giles go Ripper. Only not as scary because Oz didn't know Draco as well, but the other man just wasn't there. It was all ice.------ Oooh. Good comparison to Ripper

The last thing he needed was to accidentally kill the werewolf and have Rosenberg go black haired on his arse---- HAHAHAHA. Nice to see the dude has *some* common sense

"Oh fuck that," Draco said, trying to sound unconcerned about the pain in his arm. "You know they'll send Potter because it's me, and I am in no mood to look at his scarred head today."--- Ok, I love it when you guys mention the off-screen characters so we can see a bit more. Now we know Potter is currently an Auror (which I figured, but wasn’t sure)

Oz frowned. He did not feel that was the appropriate response to this situation.—hahahahahaha

Oswald—don’t you mean Osbourne??

Freaking sweet chapter!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [26 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Watcher the Wolf and the Wet-works Guy" from Shanna
I'm really enjoying this series. One note for this chapter (71), I'm not sure if it was intentional that Ian got his name wrong, but Oz's last name is Osbourne, not Oswald. Keep up the excellent work. I love the combining of both worlds, and look forward to reading more, especially when Moody comes to visit. (Also adore Neville in this series.) Very curious to see what Willow does with the devil's snare as well!
Comments from author:
Thanks. It's intentional, though.
Review By [Shanna] • Date [26 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Testosterone" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Ah- fun male bonding time! Never could have imagined how a Draco/Oz convo would go, but this seemed pretty right on.

might want to edit this punctuation---'changing,.'

Enjoyed the belly growl and pleased that Draco is not a tool about the werewolf thing.

I love Oz in general-- maybe its thanks to the very pretty Seth Green ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [26 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't You Wish Your Grilfriend Was..." from (Recent Donor)Luna
He knew Hannah would have polite covered and Pevensie would get annoying. There was really no need for him to do much at all.---heehee

This is Ella Armida. Bitchface, this is Hannah Abbott. She has a real job."--- I love Draco :D

"Pevensie, do let's not break any legs in public," Draco said calmly. "Perhaps you can lure her into Knockturn. No one investigates screams there."---oh yes, thank you thank you thank you. HILARIOUS

Hannah was startled and shocked by the offer. She almost refused, but then she looked at Blaise. He had the oddest look on his face. Hannah did not know what to make of it----HMMMM… *grins*

Draco smirked and tucked Hannah's arm in his. She gave him an odd look. Then she looked at the way Blaise was glaring at them and frowned. Almost as if he were... jealous? No, that was impossible.--- Draco just got 20 points in my book for this bit of awesomeness

Draco would probably kill him for responding the only reason he was nice was because he wanted to shag Hannah silly. "There are reasons."—Dammit! No Blaise! Its because you like her, you idiot! *huffs* Ok, had to get that out of my system ;)

It was nice to see an appearance by Bitchface herself, btw.

Great job!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [25 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Warded Owl" from (Recent Donor)Luna
:D Thanks for the shout-out! I strongly believe in reviewing everything I read (unless its such rubbish that any review would likely make the writer sob in embarrassment;) Of course, I love this series so much that I completely think you deserve numerous reviews -- especially when there are 5 writers and it would be awfully sad if not every writer got feedback.

That sad, I particularly enjoyed this bit:
he's not changing his looks to appear like everyone around him, he looks a great deal like Remus. Has his mother's temperament, though.
--Ha! Her temperment. Nice.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [25 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Correspondence Too" from (Recent Donor)Luna
plant that would strange a person.
--- think you meant 'strangle'

loved the oz chapter.

Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [24 Feb 10] • Not Rated
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