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Original of the Species Part 4: Cell

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Review of chapter "Chapter 24 - Exit Music (For a Film)" from superbrutal
Review:
Wow, you know how to end a saga on one hell of a note don't you. :)

In a way, I'm going to miss the cell saga portion of your writing, It was such a joy reading each new chapter.

But the promise of something new upcoming, helps me get over that, and I can't wait for more.

Amazing job.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [10 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24 - Exit Music (For a Film)" from deusexsububi
Review:
Muadzin = winning.

Awesome chapter and series.
Review By [deusexsububi] • Date [10 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24 - Exit Music (For a Film)" from IsaacADrake
Review:
Oh...I see what you're doing here. Interesting!
Review By [IsaacADrake] • Date [10 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: The Saints Are Coming" from MistofRainbows
Review:
It should be interesting to see the next part of the story. Makes a person want to use the sangrel on all of the asscended and call it good. Nice collection of time displaced heroes as well. Though I fail to see why Trunks would want to go back. The only thing back there is another fight with Cell. Maybe some family if he left any there.. but blah heroes. Ah well should be interesting to see where the other Buffy comes in.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [10 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24 - Exit Music (For a Film)" from Cmiller
Review:
hmmm. What happens next?

Also will Faith ever reach the Super Sayian level or was the ruse for more like reaching level 2? Or will that be it for Faith?
Comments from author:
What happens next? My, a new story of course. ;-)

As for Faith, she will get there if she wants to, in her own time of course.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [10 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 23 - Reckoner" from blackmamuth
Review:
I just Hope that Tien and the Z fighters get a break and reach Super human mode. It's kinda sad that those guys with saiyan blood, with a year of training surpass people that spend their lifetime training to attain their strength. Hope Tien Succeeds, and in doing so, he shows the fellow humans how to do so. Obviously, the moment he Succeeds, the entire world would sense it. Also wonder why Krillin hasn't bothered to even enter the Chamber, when the cannon fodder military guys entered. He would probably benefited a lot more than the military cannon fodder.

Also, wonder how much it would be now until Krillin surpasses Tien. In canon Tien did not enter the chamber as I recall, so maybe he'd keep his lead in the Human-only ranking.

Krillin is the strongest human by the Buu saga, (As stated by Yamcha, maybe because he sparred a lot with his wife?) Personally I have my doubts he wasn't stronger by the time of the Androids. In the end, they are mostly evenly matched, Tien seems to have a slight advantage in power, but Krillin has the edge in Skill, especially after having spent a lifetime fighting guys stronger than him, and giving his life in the process, heh!) so who knows a fight between them could go.

Also, I do not like the repercussions of the US military knowing about the dragonballs one bit or the military and Asgard knowing about Kami's lookout. Chances are that it would become a new base for the military. Potential implications of this are very very bad. So how are they going to prevent it? Piccolo showing muscle Potentially kicking any visitor out without a parachute? Dragonball assisted memory erasing?

If I was Vegeta, or Krillin/Gohan, I'd go get a few and split them between them. Who knows what uses they could end now that the Government-SGC learns of the things. Not good at all. They are better kept a few between them to avoid some idiot politician hunting the dragonballs and making wishes. Or wishing for 10 ha'taks or something like that.

There is also the possibility of Yamcha joining the SGC. after the games, he gives up and becomes a baseball player, but after this, the SGC would have all of them on file, and maybe his unique skills are more valuable off-world? Where his power actually makes a difference?

Also, Poor Krillin stuck in a small island with master Roshi. If someone gets really screwed due to the "Satellites watching over people flying on their own power" he is. After all, he is in a island, so if he has to go grocery hunting, he has to take a boat, poor guy...
Comments from author:
I never liked it much either how the humans became more and more irrelevant as the Saiyans kept reaching for new heights. Alas, those are the restraints set by Toriyama. I know 3DMaster introduced Super Humans in his Buffy Z. Currently I'm open to the possibility.

As for Krillin not going into the RoSaT, he didn't bother to do so in canon. I know, neither did Tien, but I used his obsession with becoming Super as a distraction for the Slayer's true origin. The guy deserves something for his effort though. As for everybody picking it up, maybe not. After all, nobody picked up on Vegeta becoming a Super Saiyan either.

As for Krillin being the strongest human, with all due respect I wouldn't hold Yamcha's remark to Krillin's daughter in that high regard. Grownups say a lot of things towards kids and let's face it, after he said his goodbye to his rentree in the Buu saga nobody saw Tien again. Who knows how much stronger he had gotten?

The repercussion of the US military knowing about the Dragonballs and the Lookout are worrisome indeed. I'm not sure yet how I'm going to fix this but I feel it had to be done. At this point in the story they already know a lot and I doubt that Hammond would settle for a vague promise of 'leave it to us, we'll fix it in ten days'. Luckily Piccolo now lives on the Lookout and he can kick anyone's ass who is not a Saiyan or can go Super.

I'm sure that Yamcha if he plays his cards right can find useful employ or still be useful. As for Krillin being stuck on that small island, I'm sure the SGC knows who he is, where he lives and is not alarmed when he takes off. Otherwise it would be kinda hard for him to date #18, wouldn't it? ;-)
Review By [blackmamuth] • Date [9 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 23 - Reckoner" from janusi
Review:
Very epic chapter. I loved it all, though I figured pretty much right away that Faith's transformation was a bluff. Still, it was all great.

Can't wait to see what comes next.
Review By [janusi] • Date [4 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 23 - Reckoner" from superbrutal
Review:
OH, that was a very nice chapter, I was on the edge of my seat the whole time.

I'm guessing the whole head touching thing that the old lady had Xander do to help get Buffy to level 2.

The music selection was very nice too, thanks for that :)
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [3 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 23 - Reckoner" from CageFire
Review:
Yet another awesome chapter. Keep up the excellent work. :) Significant change from canon, made it interesting.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [3 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22 - Give Up the Ghost" from janusi
Review:
Now that was very surprising, I loved it!
Review By [janusi] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22 - Give Up the Ghost" from superbrutal
Review:
I figured that was his only course of action, looking forward to seeing what happens to buffy, and Maya.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22 - Give Up the Ghost" from CageFire
Review:
Awesome new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 21 - I Might Be Wrong" from RafMereC
Review:
Nice.
But the cliffhanger?

Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [20 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 21 - I Might Be Wrong" from janusi
Review:
Okay, did not see that cliffhanger coming.
Review By [janusi] • Date [20 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 21 - I Might Be Wrong" from superbrutal
Review:
Ohhhh, this should be good Bel isn't fast enough to save both of em.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [19 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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