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Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from Dragonelf
Review:
I hope you will get inspired to add more chapters soon.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Carrot Cheese Pie::

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An investment in knowledge always pays the best interest.
- Benjamin Franklin
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Comments from author:
took me a while to finish fixing this one up as good as i can, but here is (Hawklan)
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [21 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from grd
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Wow! Gotta come back to make Liz into a handbag and boots later. Excellent battle.
Review By [grd] • Date [4 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from Bobboky
Review:
very very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from superfan
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That was awesome.
Review By [superfan] • Date [11 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 23" from Bobboky
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very good idea
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from Netchka
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Wow cool story. Hope that more chaps are coming soon.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [3 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from superfan
Review:
OK this was very good, BUT...

You do not pass Half a gene, we all have two copies of every gene we have, & pass one of them forward to our children. other than that it was a very good explanation. from the little I know about genetics a better one would be that the X gene is a genetic memory gene that allow for a psychosomatic brake, like in split personality disorder, one Id is can be physically different that the others. If your parents were mutants you will likely be one yourself. It's just that, it's not that easy to turn a gene recessive.

Hope I didn't piss you off.
Comments from author:
No you did not piss me off att all.
the half a gene is a direct copy from one of the Marvel comix i have. :D in there there a guy that inherent half a mutant X-gen. I consider it so funny i stole it.
If the science in marvel universe allows people to inherent half a gen then they can do it in my fanfiction.
Review By [superfan] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from LostDragon
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from a caffine addict lmao
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from CrystalBlaze
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Gicen all the fun people have caffeinating Willow, I have to grin seeing that last part. Now imagine getting them going in joint Willow babble..
Comments from author:
O my the terror the terror. I think Giles head would spontanius combust if we did that.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [23 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [23 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [25 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Not Rated
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