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The Web of Xander

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Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Bobboky
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i think i read the same chapter twice...
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from ShadowKage
Review:
Nice chapter. Though I think you should know, you have chapter 7 posted twice.
Review By [ShadowKage] • Date [21 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Genericrandom
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Since the M2 universe is the one I have the least familiarity with, while still having knowledge of, this is currently the most interesting story you've got going in my opinion. Always happy to see more of it.
Review By [Genericrandom] • Date [5 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Bobboky
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awesome work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6-0" from CPTSkip
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I am finding your odd story quite entertaining. I'm not sure how the Scoobies will be able to stop an alien orbital bombardment, but that should prove interesting. I found a couple of spelling errors, but I'll only give you one. You wrote: "He really, really misted web-swinging" when I think you meant: "He really, really MISSED web-swinging". I look forward to more of your story.
Comments from author:
good you find it entertaining and thanks for pointing out that error. Fixed it asap and I wouldn't mind if you tell me the rest so that I can fix them. *g*
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [26 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6-0" from DarkFaerieYumi
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LOL He sure does Xander.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [23 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6-0" from DrDamage
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I'm enjoying this story, the storyline is interesting and the wordcraft is good. Except for the drooping bombs ;)
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [23 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6-0" from Bobboky
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awesome work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [23 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from IsaacADrake
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I really like your work. The plots are fairly well thought out and interesting. Your weakness would be grammar and the tone sounds unprofessional. But it's fanfiction, we're mostly reading for fun plots and concepts not grammar and tone so as long as those don't get in the way of the story it's fine. :)
Review By [IsaacADrake] • Date [21 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Bobboky
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good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from nemogbr
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Is Buffyverse Tara, the Marvel Tara's counterpart?
With space coming up as part of the story, will you be including works like Stargate?

I hope you will be limiting Xander's power level. Not so sure about lifting ten tons at a time.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [6 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vornae
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Interesting, I look forward to reading more of this.
Review By [Vornae] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from kayron
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I can believe that Xander saved the day. Even as regular human Xander would try to help if someone needed it. I'm just surprised that he exposed Spiderman to the public. I never really got into the Spiderman franchise, because I hated how unfairly he was treated by the press. Spiderman tried to help, but the press villified him like HE was the criminal! I can't see being in the news as a good thing. I wonder if Xander plans to stay in the BtVS verse permanently. Or, if his sister and girlfriend will convince him to come home.
Review By [kayron] • Date [25 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Bobboky
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very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [25 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from DarkFaerieYumi
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May we knew thee well. LOL
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [25 Mar 10] • Not Rated
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