Wonderful beginning to the story.

I'm normally not a huge fan of 'Buffy becomes a Time Lord' fics, tending to enjoy the 'Buffy as a companion' fics more, because the 'Time Lord' fics tend to be harder to pull off and still stay somewhat close to canon. (ie: "You want to know why if Buffy is really a Time Lady in hiding via the Chameleon Arch, then what's the deal with her having human parents?? - Oh, they're not really her parents, they just adopted her when she was 3. What do you mean, a three year old Time Lord wouldn't have started at the Time Lord Academy yet, wouldn't have looked into the untempered schism yet, and thereforebe couldn't properly be called a Time Lord, but would merely be a citizen of Galifrey? I mean they adopted her at the age of 8. No, I mean 9 after she finished one year at the Academy. *sigh* What do you mean, why doesn't she remember being adopted if she was 9 years old... She must have blocked it out, traumatic experience and all that, you know.")

But, I think you've managed to do rather well in this intro, covering all the bases, and I'm looking forward to reading more soon!

Daaay-umm! That was excellently long-winded and thorough. Thank you for giving the very detailed information on how Buffy becomes a Time Lady. Goodness knows that it's necessary. Great beginning so far.

Wow, this is awesome, and I don't even LIKE Doctor Who. Really looking forward to more, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

This is wonderful!! Beautifully done! It really dragged me in. I can't wait to read more! I like how you took the time to really explain everything and all of Buffy's reactions, it shows that you really thought this through. I can't wait to read about some of her adventures, and I can't wait for the meeting between her and The Doctor! Please, keep up the great work!

*squeal* I'm so excited! I'm beyond thrilled that someone took up my challenge ... I'm especially happy it was you as I love your work and I know you'll take it above and beyond anything my mind could have dreamed up. *grabs chair arms tight in preparation of a wild ride*

Neato. There were a few minor grammatical errors, nothing a good proofing couldn't fix. I enjoyed it. It's quite good. Which Doctor will you be using, if you don't mind my asking?

Her path may cross with various Doctor's, but my main Doctor will definately be the lovely Ten.

Can't Time Lords sense each other's existence over both space and time?
What will the Master's take on this be?
Will Dawn show up at some point, if not as Buffy's sister then why not as Faith's?

Please update again soon.

Excellent beginning. You made me feel sorry for your Buffy for just a moment. But she is now a frakking Time Lady with her own frakking TARDIS so I guess it all balances out! Lol! I do think it would be cool if she still gets sent Dawn as her 'sister'. Of course Glory is going to be really, really surprised when she runs into Lady Time. Lol!

Buffy or The Slayer, needs to go someplace nice and calm and civilized to chill out and relax for a bit. Of course if she is like The Doctor, something will come along and screw things up. Lol!

Could Buffy chose Xander, Willow, and even possibly Cordy as Companions? Even though I understand they don't know her now. She still knows them, after all. Just wondering.

I am very pleased to see a story which includes the "Looms" as well :)

Excellent start - and I second Marcus's suggestion about the Pyramids of Mars... perhaps some sort of tie-in with the "Sands of Mars" story as well? :)

I look forward to seeing where you take this. Is the companion going to be another cross-over or a human character from DW, TW or Buffy?

Wow, that's an awesome segway into Time Lord Buffy. I'm wondering how The Doctor will react when he meets The Slayer. Even despite all the things The Master did, The Doctor still wanted him around, but with a title like "The Slayer," that's bound to make him at least a little twitchy, right? Plus, what's she going to be slaying? For anything to be much of a challange at this point, wouldn't it need to be another time-travelling species? I'd love to see her up against some Daleks, but they're supposed to be (mostly) extinct.

Wow, this story should be fun! Looking forward to the next update.

Wow. This story has some serious potential, and I can't wait to see what you do with it!

The beginning was a bit confusing at first, but once you clarified what had happened the story developed very well (If nothing else, you definitely win points for originality for having the Hellmouth's energy being drained away to create Buffy's TARDIS).

Time-wise, if you're using elements from the classic series it might be interesting to see Buffy/the Slayer interact with some Osirans back in Ancient Egypt- see "Pryamids of Mars" for more information about that species-, and I wouldn't mind learning what happened to Angel in this timeline (He was always my favourite character), but that aside no other ideas are immediately springing to mind; I'll let you know if I think of anything else.

That said, keep up the good work; this looks like it's going to be VERY promising!

Wow. I'm captivated by this story. I can't wait for more. :) Nice work.