Hi! This is Chibi_Kachi from Livejournal - I finally broke down and got myself an account on Twisting the Hellmouth so I could follow your stories and do reviews here ^^
Just wanted to say I loved how you handled the princess this chapter. Off the top of my head I can't think of any author that released Ampata's spirit before so she could be free so that was just nifty and awesome.
I loved how well Kagome fit in with the group and Willow exploring her options!
Ad yay for Yuusuke showing up ^^ I like the brotherly interaction between the two. Now I'm all curious though about why Xander's ring changed colors (something to do with the hyena?) and I am curious how he's egg is doing! Keep up the excellent work!
Comments from author:
*waves* Hey hon. I would've posted on my lj before the day was over, but it's nice to see you here. lol
Yeah, the Ampata thing has always bothered me a bit. Figured at least one chosen girl ought to get the break she deserves. I mean yeah she munched on the guard dude, but he's kind of like the shadow men who forced destiny on the original slayer. So I don't feel bad about his death, but I wanted to save Rodney. Every kid saved now is one more to fight in battle against the Mayor in a couple of fics from now.
And showing scenes of Kagome hanging with the scoobies wasn't just fan service, them making bonds now will come in handy in the future. Especially for the next fic, which will start out as an angst and drama fest. But shh, I've said too much already. Hehe. ^^;
It is a crossover so I need to work Yusuke and the others in more often...which won't happen in the next chapter (Frat Party with giant snake). But it will in the Halloween chapter. XD The ring changing color was a combination of random 'hey let's do this' and 'hmm hyena connection'. I think I might have ingested too much pocky or wine at that point. I don't really remember. >>; And the egg will hatch soon-ish.
So yes, glad to see you here, there so many stories on tth that are most definitely worth reading and I hope you get around to reading more than just my stuff. Check out emw, she does a pretty cool job and I'm watching her for new fics, she gets chaps out faster than I do. lol
I absolutely love this series. Still waiting for Xander's spirit egg to hatch....
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. The egg should hatch soon-ish. ^^
Review By [RHatch] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Web of Mystery" from Celticchick
Review:
Yay new chapter. ok so the mummy episode is over there next one is about the snake demon under the frat house or are you going to skip that one and go to the Halloween one next. if you are doing the Halloween one might i suggest a list of costumes that the gang could become. Xander could be poison ivy from batman (read this in another story and want to see your take on it), Roger smith (Big O), Sanji (one piece), Ranma (Ranma 1/2), or any other character you can think of really it is up to you. though it would be really funny if Buffy, Willow, and Xander dress up as Paine, Rikku, and Yuna from Final Fantasy X-2 and i know Xander would realize that it is a girl outfit right but not if they were the white mage outfits and it would be really funny that at some point the gang goes back to their default outfits and to see willows reaction to being in a bikini top and a mini skirt. well cant wait till the next chapter ^_^ Edit: just had a really random thought if xander was turned into a girl even for a little while Big Bro would get crazy overproctive it would be really funny.
Comments from author:
I'm not skipping the Reptile Boy ep, though I have no idea when I'll be ready to post it. ^^
And I'm working on the Halloween chapter now. Sorry, I already have plans for it, plans that need to happen and are vital for future stories.
Thanks for the review. ^^
Review By [Celticchick] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Legend is the Lady" from DarkFaerieYumi
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If you only knew Spike.
Comments from author:
I know right! One would think that Spike would do a little research and ask around about a Prince with pouting eyes. *rolls eyes* But he's so focused on Dru that the obvious doesn't occur to him...thank god. Otherwise my series would end too soon. lol
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [25 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Legend is the Lady" from Omegaprime
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Poor Dru, she can see the future but she can't tell anyone about it. :)
So this is going to become a Spike/Xander pairing? Interesting, wonder how his big bro will react to that.
Can't wait to see what other things change because ofthe changes in Xander's life, for example Angelus's return.
Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I enjoy writing Dru and her seer babble-moments. ^^ And just cause she sees the future doesn't mean she necessarily wants to give Spike up...though she has no problem discarding him on her own terms. Personally I never got that. Spike is much more attractive than Angel, talks prettier too. (ignore the sleepy fangirl with the drool face over in the corner lol)
Eventually Spike and Xander will be a thing. Like in a story or two...or four...yeah, four sounds right. Gotta finish season two, have a filler fic of their summer break, then season three, summer break...and then season four.
However there will be hintage and slashy-type moments cause those are always fun. ^^ And other than initial threats I don't see Yusuke doing much cause by that time Xander will be an adult, and Yusuke is a demon king so...Just the basic 'hurt my brother and die' kinda speech. That's still a long way off though. x_x;
Angelus coming 'round is a whole 'nother can of worms. Since he knows Xander's secret he'll probably spend more time stalking Xander. Xander is creative though so some guerrilla type tactics may be in order...see this is why I shouldn't comment on reviews after midnight, especially when I've been up since 5am. I ramble terribly. Definately going to sleep now. lol
Thanks for the review/comment, I'm glad you're enjoying my story and your feedback means a lot. ^^
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Legend is the Lady" from silvergaurd
Review:
Love the new chapter. Can't wait to see more.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it! ^^ Had loads of fun writing it.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [17 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Legend is the Lady" from Kirallie
Review:
Great chapter!!! Are you hinting at future SpikeXander?
Comments from author:
Hell yeah! Spike/Xander = Awesome with a side of sexiness. lol
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [16 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Legend is the Lady" from lordamnesia
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Great new chapter, this story is going pretty well. Can't wait to see what kind of creature hatches for Xander, and what ends up happening to Ampata. Keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
I've always been conflicted by Ampata's plight ya know? Her situation sucked big time, but the killing was still of the bad. I'll try to keep it interesting. ^^ And thanks for reviewing, always love feedback!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [16 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Legend is the Lady" from Jaylynn
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Yay! Lovely new chapter. I can't wait for the second half of chapter four now.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [16 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Legend is the Lady" from Rivana
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Very nice. And I wish I'd seen Giles in proper British host mode sometime. Love the foreboding as well.
Review By [Rivana] • Date [16 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]