Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from TwoBlackDragons
John Clark from Rainbow Six, also by Tom Clancy. All though Lara Croft's father would also be interesting. I mean as the father of the current pregnancies.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons
] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from vladt
very entertaining read, thank you. if you stay within the current crossover, clark, head of rainbow, might be a candidate. it is a shame that immortals seemingly cannot have children, duncan or even methos would be en interesting father figure. or jack o'neill. bring in sg1 could be fun. doesn't matter. you write your tale your way and i'll read and enjoy it.
Review By [vladt
] • Date [14 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Dragonwolftiger
OK yes you are evil in a good author type way. I like Casey Ryback as the girls father. Great job, please continue as able.
Review By [Dragonwolftiger
] • Date [16 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from piecesofyourheart
Cragen!!!!!!! oh please be Cragen!!!!! Oh how I would to see the expression on his and the detectives' faces!!!! Please pick Cragen, just for the shock factor!!!
Review By [piecesofyourheart
] • Date [13 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Jezzibel
Awesome. Cordy and Paige are such a great couple. And my vote goes to Cpt. Cragen. I'd love to seem him explain it to SVU, and it would be amazing if Munch already knew about Slayers.
Review By [Jezzibel
] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from harcroft
interesting, and my vote goes to Don Cragen, though heaven only knows how he'll explain it to the rest of the SVU. (though Munch might know of Slayers... Elliott might be hard to convince though...) and immortality? interesting, but I kind of hope thta their partners become immortal too.
Review By [harcroft
] • Date [3 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from BarbarossaRotbart
Interesting story, but I would have used a different explanation for their pregnancies and I would have avoided immortality at any cost.
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart
] • Date [31 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from GypsyDruid
It's looking good. I vote for Casey Ryback.
Review By [GypsyDruid
] • Date [31 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from CaptainBoulanger
Callen. Or possibly Tony.
Review By [CaptainBoulanger
] • Date [17 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from bonnie
I really like this story and the pregnancy angle is definitely something different. And if my vote counts I'd go with Andy from NYPD Blue. He was a very complex character and the most unlikely choice but he showed himself to be a very concerned father despite his problems. And I'd really love to see a confrontation between Faith, Buffy and Andy.
Review By [bonnie
] • Date [4 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from BarbarossaRotbart
Stay in the universe of both shows (that includes Buffy, Angel, NCIS, NCIS: LA & JAG)!
Comments from author:
Remember I'm also using Tom Clancy's Jack Ryan series
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart
] • Date [4 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from FireWolfe
Make it someone wild like Hannibal Lecter.
Review By [FireWolfe
] • Date [28 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CPTSkip
I enjoy BtVS/NCIS crosses where Ducky is "in the know". You don't have to prematurely get "action" going as I am enjoying the slow build-up. I do look forward to more sisterly interaction.
Review By [CPTSkip
] • Date [24 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from SpinelessPunster
I have some issues with some of the development in this story, but I'm gonna bring up some new ones, rather than repeat some of the others your reviewers have raised. I somehow can deal with the BtVS changes, since that seems to be your focus (although Buffy using the term 'Babe' towards Faith just doesn't quite mesh no matter how many times i read it. Sweetheart, Hon, etc. are more B's flowery language). Nope, I'm gonna go with the NCIS's accepting of a totally different reality in ten minutes.
It's totally beyond my verisimitude level to see Kate not saying 'yeah, right, I was raised a good Catholic school girl, and I think you need some counseling. For aggravated assault, manslaughter, escaping maximum federal custody.
Abby seems a charicature of herself in some ways. Besides DNA testing takes a day at minimum, Ducky being able to not try to protect his freinds from the supernatural without feeling like the scum of the earth (and him being friends with Giles has been done a lot. Edinburgh is kinda far from London, and Ducky was in the foreign service for years).
Also, Faith's homelife was a wreck, why would she want to find her father?? Ever?
BTW, do they share fathers or mothers. If it's mothers, then Kate must have been dropped off at an orphanage. but according to canon, her homelife is great with 3 older brothers, so did they hide her adoption from her?
If they share fathers, then either Kate knows her dad (and he cheated on his wife big time with a real drugged-up skank), or she was adopted, and, in which case, how the hell would the Secret Service find out they were related. Did they do distant single parent related genetic checks on all thier former personel with the Slayers (and how would they get Faith's DNA anyway, Felons get fingerprinted, only I believe), or did they get an anonymous tip?
As a former SS member, Kate'd be calling to be sure that someone wasn't running a hoax or a con on the President or her.
And, not to be nitpicking, but why is Ziva on the team? She only joined because of guilt over Ari's killing of Kate, and if Gibbs hadn't been a man short, there wouldn't be a slot open.
Maybe you need to add a prelude, or something.
Review By [SpinelessPunster
] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from spk
Loving this so far. Really like stories that focus on Faith. Can't wait to see who ends up being the dad. :)
Review By [spk
] • Date [19 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]