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Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
So, they can shield their minds. Very interesting.

James
Comments from author:
It's the technology embedded in all soldiers.

Thanks for the review James.
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [18 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Energy signatures are hard to hide...

James
Comments from author:
I know.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [17 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Knew Janeway was in for some Skullduggery.
James
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review James.
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [17 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Nice to see the ST Federation not so smug with regard to technology.

Wondering what the AGF reaction will be to The Prime Directive?

James
Comments from author:
You're find out what the AGF reaction to the Prime Directive will be soon.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [17 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Getting the ball rolling, I see.

Somehow, I don't think that the Ori will be that easy to get rid of.

James
Comments from author:
Keep reading and thanks for the review.
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [17 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Your home galaxy is burning as we speak is a great way to get someone's attention.

James
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [17 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Nice work in with Star Trek and Stargate. Too bad we will not be seeing many characters from Stargate, but I hope to see some of the Next Gen, DS9 and Voyager characters. 2378 was during the Voyager series...

Really looking forward to finding out how Earth will handle the Ori.

James

You've been working on this for over 2 years now. Is the light at the end of the tunnel a twinkle or a steady beacon of "finishment"?
Comments from author:
The characters from Stargate are all dead, but they're new ones. As for the characters from Startrek, well you'll have to keep reading ...

I knew when I'll finish it, but I don't know how many chapter's it'll take.
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [16 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Nice start.

James
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [16 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 48" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review Morgomir.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [4 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 47" from banditdoz
Review:
I enjoyed this chapter very much. When watching star trek I always felt that they were a little week, Physically anyway :D Cant wait to see what General Argo has to say lol
Comments from author:
Starfleet Officers and personnel are not trained to fight. Some have martial arts training, but most don't.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [19 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 45" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review Morgomir.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [1 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 44" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review Morgomir.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 44" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter. Keep up the good work. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review CageFire.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 43" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
fascinating read, thank you.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying my story.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from michaelangelo
Review:
Brilliant story, the way you have twisted both the Star Trek and Stargate is very well done. I'm something of a 'bigger picture' reader and figure the gutting of Section 31 is going to lead to something big, very big. I feel that there will be vengeance served against the Dominion and the Breen. I also feel the Lucien Alliance will have a horrific discovery sometime in the future, history shows that the delusion of absolute power can lead to absolute overconfidence and absolute arrogance. Anyway, Great story and fantastic read.
Comments from author:
I'm honored that you like my story michaelangelo and thank you. With the Stargate Network, the Federation has to think and do things differently and their Intelligence Division will play a large part in that. The AGF is simply keeping an eye on the Dominion and Breen and passing that intelligence along to Starfleet (I hate to disappoint you on that). The Section 31 story is all but over and I'm going to wrap up the lose ends in a later chapter. The story will then switch to the Avalon System and their problems with the Oranian's in that System and other things.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [23 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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