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Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from Morgomir
Review:
Great to see the Ferengi get somwhere. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [18 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep u the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [16 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
Cool! It's easier to follow the characters with Starfleet. All the originals characters with Stargate was confusing.

Good chapter! I can't wait for more. I mean if you build it up, ya gotta have a nice war to tear it down. (Grin)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. The characters for the AGF were new. The next couple of chapters will have more new characters re: Starfleet.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [15 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Though you're using light-years when it doesn't make sense. [The habitable moon is parallel to your new Alpha site and it’s 18.8 lights years away and you share the same sun, as you can see] If they share the same sun the distance can't be 18.8 light-years. For instance the distance from the sun to Uranus is 9006 light-seconds.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'll change it.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [14 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Morgomir
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The federation doesn't like militaristic groups. But, coming so near to destruction by the hands of the Ori they have to realize they can't go on being naïve.
Comments from author:
They are a military, they just don't want to admit it.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I can always depend on you to review one of my chapters. Someone on another website (ff) thought the Federation would think the AGF are barbaric compared to them. What the Federation doesn't understand is that people and races out there are not like them. The Dominion for instance.

What do you think?
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Morgomir
Review:
Yes I did notice. But, I'm not familiar with much from the Star Trek universe. I like the universe but I don't know everything about it.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [20 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Did you notice how I took suggestions from people to mention the Kelvans, and other races that Star Trek had encountered into Stargate and what happened to the Iconians?
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [20 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from IcemanII
Review:
Great update, keep up the good work
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from (Past Donor)exiled
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The plot thickens! So are they going to take on the Dominion? try to have do a peace accord? Or attack first?
Comments from author:
They already signed the Treaty of Bajor after the Dominion War and have a peace agreement with them. The AGF are doing them a favor. There will be more in the other chapters.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Cheers!
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Darksnider
Review:
Your Agf seems like a human centric bore fest there's no diversity and the guy named Gabriel comes out like a cut out Gary-stu. Their culture feels stagnated and what exactly is up with them just barging in on Earth acting like their in command of something.
Comments from author:
There's plenty of diversity in the AGF. If you read the first chapter, I mentioned some of the members of the AGF and they will be introduced in a few more chapters. They had permission from the President of the Federation to enter Federation space and the Federation needed their help with the stargate and taking the Ori shields down.
Review By [Darksnider] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Yes, I saw the changes. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm going to re-post the other chapters this weekend.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [11 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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