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Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from Greywizard
Review:
Interesting beginning, and I can hardly wait to find out why Xander is there.

More soon, please?
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'll have more... errr... soon...ish... yeah, that works, soonish.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from Tjin
Review:
I will be watching this one, very interesting so far.

-Tjin
Comments from author:
Thanks, hope you like what's to come.
Review By [Tjin] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from Morgomir
Review:
Interesting. I'm more curious as to why Xander is sent there. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'll do my best.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from Rorschach
Review:
Cool I like it. Did Xander do something or was he framed.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it, but you'll have to wait for the answer to that.
Review By [Rorschach] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from tremerid
Review:
Interesting so far. I look forward to more. I wonder how Xan will fit in with the rogues. Given Anya, and his rather colorful dating history I see him getting along with Ivy and Harley, though that may or may not be a bad thing.

Looking forward to more. And I hope Bole gets what's coming to him.

EDIT: It's also gonna be fun learning why Xan was sent here. Knowing his luck he chopped Etrigan's head off, only for him to turn into Jason Blood lol.
Comments from author:
Thanks, and man, I never even thought about the Etrigan/Jason Blood thing, lol. Now I'm tempted to through it in at the end of the reveal chapter as an outtake.

As far as Ivy and Harley go, well I won't go into details yet, but he will run into both at some point.

And Boles, well Xander said it himself, he has to watch out for this guy.
Review By [tremerid] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from VillageOrchid
Review:
So the mystery is Xander there on purpose or was he caught up in something misconstrued?
Comments from author:
I'll be working up to the reveal for awhile, but you'll get a big tidbit in either the next chapter or the following.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from TheLaughingMan
Review:
You have me hooked. I eagerly await the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I tend to be slow to update, but I hope you like what's to come.
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from (Recent Donor)Dakaath
Review:
Interesting, can't wait to find out what Xander did that made him get sent to there of all places.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it so far.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Dakaath] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great writing that raises enough interesting questions about how he got there to ensure I will be back to read the next installment.
Comments from author:
Good to hear, thanks. Hope you like the rest of the story as well.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from Almadynis
Review:
Very well done...just have to ask...

What the hell is Xander doing in Arkham?!
Comments from author:
Thanks, and you'll have to wait a little bit for that answer.
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from Supershaggy
Review:
Very interesting concept.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Supershaggy] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from Hawkehunt
Review:
Hmm... I'd be interested to see what Xander has done to end up there.
Comments from author:
Thanks, you'll have to wait and see.
Review By [Hawkehunt] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from JasonBarnett
Review:
Arkham Asylum isn't a prison. The people there are supposed to get better. So that guy's speech is totally inappropriate. And it's hard to figure someone like the Joker wouldn't have killed him during an escape for being such an obnoxious stereotypical "screw"
Comments from author:
From what I've read and seen Arkham is generally portrayed as part asylum and part maximum security prison. Particularly in the two sources that inspired this idea the most: the video game 'Batman: Arkham Asylum' and the mini-series 'Arkham Asylum: Living Hell'. As for Boles' speech, you're right, it is inappropriate either way. It's supposed to be and it won't go unnoticed. You'll find out how that plays into things in the coming chapters. Anyone who recognizes him from the game probably has a pretty good idea of what lies in Frank Boles future. Funny you should mention Joker...

Still, I appreciate your comments even if our opinions differ. Look forward to seeing what you have to say about future chapters.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from LanceAvalon
Review:
So far so good, but I can't really rate this until we get some backstory.
Comments from author:
Understandable. I'm glad you like it so far though.
Review By [LanceAvalon] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from DrDamage
Review:
well this is interestingly dark. I look forward to being horrified and terrified by turns as I follow Xander through his little sojourn into Gothams darkest place
Comments from author:
Thanks, this is heading down a darker path then I generally go in my stories and that's actually turning out to be part of the fun.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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