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The Child of Rao: Book II

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Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from Rubel
Review:
Good to see an update. Nice work.
Review By [Rubel] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Good chapter. Looking forward to seeing how things develop. Since the backers and people who approved of Cadmus are gone then the mandate they had may go the way of the dodo, thanks to more honest politicians who get wind of what they are up to.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from LFW
Review:
Very glad for more of this fic
I do like how you are mixing DC and Charmed TV in to this but I do think that you are cutting out a lot of Xander and Cordelia, Faith and Karen dating, kissing and hugging time. Even if you do not list how awesome it is to have sex floating in air and how kinky it can get . . . they could get in a hot kiss before you fade out.
Thanks
Hoping for more
Review By [LFW] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
I'm still wondering how Lex a criminal could run for president. I scratch my head at that one every time I read it or see it.
nice to see this one again, a kick you muse a little harder or bribe her whichever works.

going back to re-read COR 1 now, so as always keep up the good work
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from Elleria
Review:
Happy to see an update. Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from (Current Donor)nerfherder
Review:
And Again, still lovin it!
Review By [(Current Donor)nerfherder] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from Fayari
Review:
Finally gotten around to reading this on this site. I read it in Xanderzone.
Review By [Fayari] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
I wonder how the fans & producers of their show will react? The Update made my day, it has been worth the wait.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from LordCorwin
Review:
Whoot! .. .an update... sweeet!
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from Genericrandom
Review:
Ah, more of this one. Yay! I always liked this particular fic/series. Seems more solid then a lot of "Xander with the power of Krypton" stories. Not quite sure solid how, but there ya go.
Review By [Genericrandom] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from atticus
Review:
Oh boy did I miss this. So glad to have this back.
I also find myself in the same pickle you find yourself in. With DC throwing everything out the window and shaking it all up I don't know whats what or whos who. And with all that going on I find myself loving the Timmverse all the more.
Review By [atticus] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from (Moderator)JoeHundredaire
Review:
You could chalk up your ranking in Hits to the fact that the first story in this series (among other popular stories of yours) were posted in an era before the hits system was recalibrated to something more realistic; I believe Jay said to take something like 25% off of hits earned before mid '06 and 40% earned before an earlier point. I'd have to double check if you really care.

Or you could chalk it up to writing better stuff than Greywizard. Because you do.

Honestly, not sure about this chapter though. It's half again longer than usual, but could probably have been split into two or three chapters had even half of the scenelettes been fleshed out more. It felt kinda like watching a series of five minute web cartoons packaged together for airing on television when I thought I was sitting down for an episode of an hour long program. Then again, you can always tinker with them again in the future as your muse returns. :)
Review By [(Moderator)JoeHundredaire] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from DarthBill
Review:
Hey, I'd thought this was abandoned. I'm glad it isn't. It'll be interesting to see Xander and company's response to Luthor running for president.
Review By [DarthBill] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from TheStonerGuru
Review:
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFinally! I been waiting years for this. Glad to see an new update at last. wb.
Review By [TheStonerGuru] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from roninx
Review:
Thank you! I've read this story about three times and I'm happy to see you continue it. Keep up the excellent work and for the love of all that is good in this world, please keep the chapters coming.
Review By [roninx] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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