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The Child of Rao: Book II

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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from stargatefan
Review:
You are an awesome writer. I seriously hope you weren't kidding about adding Galatea to the harem because that would make this fic so amazing. He only needs wonder woman in the harem now to make this fic truly fantastic. Well it could use some smut but otherwise it would be perfect. I like how he killed all the scurge. Thanks for not making him to scared to kill enemies that need a good killing. I like what you're doing with the kents. One thing that has always bothered me about smallville is that they bring new kryptonians into the show but end up killing them soon after. It's really annoying. I'm so glad you are making life better for the kryptonians. Could you perhaps mention something about how long Xander and the other Kryptonians will live (I think it would either be over a millennia under a yellow sun or forever) and maybe find some way for Cordelia, Faith and maybe some of the other friends to live that long as well. I'm sure they would have the technology for it in the near future to stop aging but it would really add to this fic. Thanks a lot for updating so frequently. You are truly one of my favorite authors.
Review By [stargatefan] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Robby
Review:
Oh my God!!! Where do you get this stuff? Oh man, my sides hurt!!! Keep up the awesome work!!! Can't wait to see how this turns out!
Review By [Robby] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from animesam
Review:
keeps getting better and better.
good work
Review By [animesam] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from darthridian
Review:
ohhh, will the boy be named connor? :)

great update and hope to read more soon.

keep up the great writing.
Review By [darthridian] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Dhampyr
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Dude, did you just add the talking Krypto the Super Dog into the proper JLU universe? The line between genius and insanity is indeed thin.
Review By [Dhampyr] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from annararen
Review:
This was an excellent chapter :)
Good fanfiction is incredibly addictive. More please!
Review By [annararen] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from cjcold
Review:
Great chapter.

Surprised that Xander didn't loot any of that Thanagarin gear.

Love what you did with Galatea, always thought she got a bad deal. Nice work with giving her a chance, and experience the usual teen road trip to give her some identity. Also giving her the opportunity to learn from Xander first about her heritage should lessen the conflict with Kara.

Though that was mean of Rao with that joke about being a brunette. Maybe Xander's prayers are influencing him. Though the 'harem' scene was funny. It does seem to be with the fact that both girls seemed to be sharing a room with him.

Can't wait for Clark's reaction to his expanded family.

More soon please.
Review By [cjcold] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
This? Is very awesome. I like how Xander fled after taking out the Scourge and Rao taking care of the clones like that. I know very little about Galatea from the cartoons so it'll be interesting to see if she sticks around with Xander and them. Also, with the Mayor shielding Sunnydale, would the Initiative still go there? Hmm
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from frankocsic
Review:
Great chapter! Loved it. Good job with this series.
Review By [frankocsic] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Toras
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Nice chapter. Loved what you did with Galatea, always thought she got a raw deal. Though I suspect she will find dealing with Xander and crew to be... educational. :)
Review By [Toras] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Genericrandom
Review:
"Come on everybody! Let's sing the Epic Doom song!"

Another spectacular chapter(s). I'm so thrilled to see more of this coming along. I can't wait to find out how you get where you'll be going next. You've sent me to a (lesser) happy place now. Great job.
Review By [Genericrandom] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from musiclover
Review:
ok an interesting new one keeps my atention
Review By [musiclover] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from HolyKnight
Review:
I can see Superman going for the SUPER-Excedrin after learning of the latest "novelties".......

Galatea, just on the hands of Cordelia, and Faith, as her teachers on the fine art of womanhood.........Xander its screwed, no?

And i can see "Gala" going to Smallville, if only to yank the chain of Kara......and prove that she's the better gal.....
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [22 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from DarthPayne
Review:
Oh man, i am loving this so far.

It's funny as hell in places.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [22 Feb 10] • Not Rated
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