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The Child of Rao: Book II

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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
"Maybe they can give me a name."

Great line!
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Past Donor)kruen
Review:
Very good stories so far. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Review By [(Past Donor)kruen] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from baneblade
Review:
you are a god most high


very funny stuff
Review By [baneblade] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Markelo
Review:
I got a name for the talking dog- Benji! LOL just kidding. So is the former clone known as Bizarro going to be called Conner here or are you going to be more creative? As to the other two girls I would name them Lana and Lois.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
This is.. delicious!

And, as for the name--

"So," asked the boy, "We got changed into this by the guy who made Krypton?"

Johnathon nodded, "Yup, that about sums it up."

The boy looked at the still self-admiring dog. "Since you like his workmanship so much, your name is Krypto."

Kara just groaned and went in search of aspirin, glad it works for her species.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from stargatefan
Review:
You are an awesome writer. I seriously hope you weren't kidding about adding Galatea to the harem because that would make this fic so amazing. He only needs wonder woman in the harem now to make this fic truly fantastic. Well it could use some smut but otherwise it would be perfect. I like how he killed all the scurge. Thanks for not making him to scared to kill enemies that need a good killing. I like what you're doing with the kents. One thing that has always bothered me about smallville is that they bring new kryptonians into the show but end up killing them soon after. It's really annoying. I'm so glad you are making life better for the kryptonians. Could you perhaps mention something about how long Xander and the other Kryptonians will live (I think it would either be over a millennia under a yellow sun or forever) and maybe find some way for Cordelia, Faith and maybe some of the other friends to live that long as well. I'm sure they would have the technology for it in the near future to stop aging but it would really add to this fic. Thanks a lot for updating so frequently. You are truly one of my favorite authors.
Review By [stargatefan] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Robby
Review:
Oh my God!!! Where do you get this stuff? Oh man, my sides hurt!!! Keep up the awesome work!!! Can't wait to see how this turns out!
Review By [Robby] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from animesam
Review:
keeps getting better and better.
good work
Review By [animesam] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from darthridian
Review:
ohhh, will the boy be named connor? :)

great update and hope to read more soon.

keep up the great writing.
Review By [darthridian] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Dhampyr
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Dude, did you just add the talking Krypto the Super Dog into the proper JLU universe? The line between genius and insanity is indeed thin.
Review By [Dhampyr] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from annararen
Review:
This was an excellent chapter :)
Good fanfiction is incredibly addictive. More please!
Review By [annararen] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from cjcold
Review:
Great chapter.

Surprised that Xander didn't loot any of that Thanagarin gear.

Love what you did with Galatea, always thought she got a bad deal. Nice work with giving her a chance, and experience the usual teen road trip to give her some identity. Also giving her the opportunity to learn from Xander first about her heritage should lessen the conflict with Kara.

Though that was mean of Rao with that joke about being a brunette. Maybe Xander's prayers are influencing him. Though the 'harem' scene was funny. It does seem to be with the fact that both girls seemed to be sharing a room with him.

Can't wait for Clark's reaction to his expanded family.

More soon please.
Review By [cjcold] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
This? Is very awesome. I like how Xander fled after taking out the Scourge and Rao taking care of the clones like that. I know very little about Galatea from the cartoons so it'll be interesting to see if she sticks around with Xander and them. Also, with the Mayor shielding Sunnydale, would the Initiative still go there? Hmm
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from frankocsic
Review:
Great chapter! Loved it. Good job with this series.
Review By [frankocsic] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Not Rated
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