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Review of chapter "Xander and Anya on Tour" from Selias
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Hey, they'll even learn how to survive undead serial killers! Which is actually a pretty useful thing to know in the Buffy-verse.
Review By [Selias] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and Anya on Tour" from Bobboky
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awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and Anya on Tour" from LadyFoxFire
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Oh please! Please! Write more of this!! I'm begging you. This kicked ass and didn't bother to take names!
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and Anya on Tour" from KrisB
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Great chapter. Nice premise, good development and setup of aditional cast. I liked them teaching life skills.

With this being Crystal Lake as well as Xander and Anya, I can see this going any where. Them teaching all the kids how to really professionally strip, bar tend, causal required demon hunting to survive the night life, real home ec/accounting/how to run a small business.

You could go several directions with this. The best part is watching the details of the camp and the kids learning various things and such, but what would be really fun is jumping ahead 5-10 years and Xander and Anya running a massive summer camp that has thousands of older teens attending it.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strange Love" from KrisB
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This one demands another chapter. You really need to have the next day with Giles, Buffy's and Joyce's reaction. Joyce will basically save Xander from Buffy at that point.

I'd love to see Xander actually being not an Order Lord, but a Chaos Lord for that dimension with basically the skill set that he inhireted. For a real sequel, you might have the actual Steven Strange show up to make sure that reality is doing well.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sandman Slim Shady" from KrisB
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This one is great. You know I could see this happening where Xander goes through the portal rather than Angel. Xander didn't have construction experience at that time, so you'd have to have another event of a similiar nature some time during the college phase.

I would love for you to be able to basically make this into a basic linking chapter for something a bit grander. Maybe instead of an actual hell, make it to a netherworld and by the time he actually makes it back to Sunnydale, he has leveled up with some impressive titles, job skills, favors owed, and a very impressive and loyal work force.

What would be really fun though is that you can have all this happening during "the college years." The girls have basically been trying to cut Xander out of their lives at that point and know that he has been busy with a construction job outside of Sunnydale so aren't worried. They only really met back up after college and the girls have a degree and Xander has a small construction empire.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and Anya on Tour" from AnFan
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What, no update on FF.net? ;)

Love the chapter! Great dialog. The reason for the review is the AN: And that reason is, wouldn't America need lots of Lysol?

Sorry, couldn't resist.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and Anya on Tour" from (Past Donor)ridert
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Xander and Anya at Camp Crystal Lake with a group of teens that they seem to actually like I could almost feel sorry for Jason but only almost. keep up the great work.
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and Anya on Tour" from Omegaprime
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Camp Crystal Lake?

Xander and Anya are going there?

Why do I see them teaching the campers the finer points of killing an undead creature by using poor Jason as a training dummy?

Keep up the interesting work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and Anya on Tour" from greysh
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lol this one's great :) I can so see xander and anya doing this! ^-^
Review By [greysh] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and Anya on Tour" from CPTSkip
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Glorious characterizations and what a sweet setup! Lots of room for lots of laughs. But I really feel for "Jason" if he does show up. I don't think Anya would see a homicidal maniac, she'd see an unkillable slave who she could make work for her forever. And for free!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and Anya on Tour" from ovid
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YES! YES YES YES!!!
These oneshot begs to be a full story. do it! do it do it do it!

Seriously, I haven't laughed or smiled that hard in a while. I'd love to see more.
Review By [ovid] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and Anya on Tour" from Typhonis
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And hopefully Xander and Anya are offering America lubricant while they are doing her.
Review By [Typhonis] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and Anya on Tour" from Niklarus
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Camp Crystal Lake? Uh oh.
Review By [Niklarus] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and Anya on Tour" from TTrunks
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OMG, please add more to this. The idea of Xander feeling home sick when an eight foot tall murdering Zombie busts up the fun is hilarious. Bonus points if you have him mention common sense so everyone lives lol.
Review By [TTrunks] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
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