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Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from Lotusja
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“Oh,” the kid murmured, frowning. “Think I can get her number?”

Is it me, or I think this kid is going to get his "you know what" kicked. LOL.
Review By [Lotusja] • Date [13 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from Netchka
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More please! Love this story and the series. Hope to read more soon. Thanks.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [11 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from Blackett
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Loved the update.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [10 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from RevDorothyL
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Love that last line, particularly! :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [9 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from liferscove
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Nice. I always enjoy your updates. The kid who asked for dawn's number probably just got dirty looked from Gibbs and Tony.
Review By [liferscove] • Date [9 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from spk
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You made my day with this update because I just love this story. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [9 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from (Past Donor)morgyair
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Very exciting to see you back...and yes I'm looking forward to the next part...I hope that real life is treating you kindly!
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from Eureka
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Over a month? :(

"Oh,” the kid murmured, frowning. “Think I can get her number?" LOL Like Gibbs is gonna give her number out! Surprised if Gibbs doesn't try to bite his head off! So when IS Gibbs going to treat her as an Adult since I am pretty sure that Dawnie is waiting for that to tell him about the rest of her life and who Angel is!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from mariegilbert
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I love the "re-interview" of the guys Dawn & Angel talked to, Gibbs just can't handle not knowing. So glad you updated :)
Review By [mariegilbert] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from BillieBog
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Great story. More soon I hope.
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from eset
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Another great addition.

I wonder if Gibbs will ever be comfortable letting Dawn be an adult--because it's pretty clear she'll never let him in all the way until he does. I hope it doesn't take too long.

What happens when they do find a case that overlaps with their jurisdiction? or a case that doesn't with a DitM witness? I doubt Gibbs would accept "I found the crime scene because I could smell the blood and anger from three decks up."

...What happens if Angel gets shot?

There are so many great places this story can go. Please update soon!
Review By [eset] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from Bouquet
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A new chapter !!! So happy you updated :) I wonder how Tony will react to someone wanting Dawn's number ;)
Review By [Bouquet] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from JoeB
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Really enjoying this story, it's a high point when you update.

One thing. E-1s in the navy, unless they are Marines, are called Seaman (for those that work outside of the Enginerooms and support postitions.) Fireman, for those that work in Engineering, and Airman for those that work in around aircraft of one sort or another.
Review By [JoeB] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from AriaDragoncrest
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Excellent! Ironically I was re-reading this story earlier today cuz it's so awesome and as a prize you updated it. :D
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from Angelskuuipo
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This is a really great read. I love Angel & Abby together and Tony & Dawn. I hope they can work things out. I like how you manged to weave NCIS and Buffy together and still explain how Dawn could be Gibbs' daughter. I'm looking forward to when the team finds out about the supernatural. :)
Review By [Angelskuuipo] • Date [3 Nov 11] • Not Rated
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