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Review of chapter "In the Car, I Just Can't Wait, to Pick You Up..." from (Recent Donor)Luna
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"You be nice to my Gram or you'll wake up on fire."-- haha sweet

Shoddy? Nice word use

‘Control of Magical Creatures Department.. don't consider her or the slayers human’ -- whoa. Interesting take on the ministry-buffy relations. Never read that one before

"Only the early ones," he responded. "I got better at dodging."-- ahhhh hhahahahaha!
I tend to allow myself... Certain liberties -- nice way to phrase that… : )

Overall, very cute chapter and their ‘voices’ sounded right on target :D
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [21 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Peek-a-boo" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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"I hope when he goes out on that patrol that will nearly kill him and his little slayer, that I am wrong. I hope he gets finished off before he sees what's going to happen to you because it will probably kill him anyway"

---eeeeep! What's going to happen????
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [21 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Unexpected Visit" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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ABSOLUTLY LOVELY! Loved the surprise granmother visit and all the things she said. Extremely happy that Hannah almost fell down the stairs and pleased to better understand the inner workings of Blaise.

(funny~ I went out the other night for some intoxicated dancing and a friend of a friend grabbed my hand, kissed it, said I was beautiful, and that his name was Blaise! My first drunken thought was 'oh my gosh, he is just like Scriptificus' Blaise!!' ahhhh hahahhaa~ thought you'd find that amusing ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [19 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Craftiness Must Have Clothes" from burmafrdnow
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The Ministry is really pushing this: had to laugh at the thought that they could put Willow anywhere without Buffy and company opening up their insides to the outside. They have no concept that they would get totally wiped if they tried anything. Not only would Buffy dance on their graves, but they would have no support from any outside organization since the slayers are much more important to the world then the Ministry is.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Craftiness Must Have Clothes" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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VERY CUTE. Liked what he said about trying to change people- a bit of honesty from him is a welcome change when it comes to her.
more please :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wickedness is a Myth Invented by Good People" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Huh. No Buffy/Draco. Did not see that coming-- but I guess that's alright considering you have a million other pairings going on. Now I wonder if they will find new people or just not have any shipping fun...
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There are 4 kinds of Homicide" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Hot damn-- does the scale go any higher than 10??? This was exciting and sexy fun, with murder no less!
Both of them are very twisted but I love them.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I'd Like to be Under The Sea" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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What a wonderful thing for Moody to say!
How lovely for him to make Neville's day!

Back to back Moody chapters equals three
I do wonder what it all means.

I'm dissappointed to not see more Hannah and Blaise
They have a way of putting me in a happy daze.

Oh well, maybe that will be the next one up?
If not, you'll find that I'll never shut up
Because I want to see them have some smoochies please!
Honestly, sometimes you are such a tease ;)

Hope you enjoye each rhyming review,
For now it is time for me to bid you adieu!

:D
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Do You Mean, We're Under Surveillance?" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Interesting rapport between the two,
hey! Its fun to do a rhyming review!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In which Alastor Moody finds out what's on..." from (Recent Donor)Luna
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It seems this girl Verity
is quite the mystery

Much more I want to know
for instance, does she use a crossbow?
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Actually Not Too Late" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Draco and Blaise sitting in a tree
K-I-S-S-I-N-G

Oops, never mind, my bad,
A ‘bro-mance’ is all they had

Which was much to Pevensie’s relief,
When she saw her watcher almost in his briefs.

I gotta say, this chapter was one of the tops,
Not that any of them are ever flops.

I think its safe to say on all readers’ behalf,
You 5 really know how to make us laugh.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "My Pet Monster Book of Monsters" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Nice link with Luna and moon~ good reasoning for Oz to want to talk to her.
Him growling at the book & making it his pet was awwwwwesome : ) I want one as a pet!
I enjoyed how Luna like them- Willow with her babble and Oz with his growling
"One of them she called her boyfriend once upon a time," Oz said.-- teehee

I love that you’re beginning to feature Luna~ she is lovely. I know this will never happen -- nor do I think it should -- but wouldn’t a Willow/Luna pairing be trippy as hell? They are both so… odd. Haha. I will have to look for that now-- would be quite interesting ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [13 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shared Spaces" from anyanka
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I like this last chapter so much! Nora seems like a fun girl. And I can't wait to read about Hannah meeting the family.

What are your plans with Willow's character? Wouldn't the Ministry of Magic be on her case more? She seems to be walking the razor's edge of things with dark magic. I'm surprised they haven't at least threatened her or something.
Comments from author:
Why would the MoM be on her case yet? She'd not doing anything worse than Hogwarts students.
Review By [anyanka] • Date [12 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shared Spaces" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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yay!!! This is far to fun :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [12 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fetched" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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ooooh, I like this turn of events with Blaise and Hannah, plus the Blaise/Draco displays are always great-- as well as Pevensie's simple 'I'm bored'. haha
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [12 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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