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Review of chapter "Why is the alphabet in that order?" from anyanka
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I have no idea what Luna is doing here, but I'm willing to play along. Thanks for the update! Hope there are plot points that move the story along soon!
Review By [anyanka] • Date [10 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Why is the alphabet in that order?" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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when a voice an aisle over caught her attention. She froze instantly. She'd never known the wizard's name, had only seen his face a couple of times, but she knew his voice.

For a split second she was back in that cellar, poor Mr. Ollivander laying near her feet, shivering. The unknown wizard's voice could be heard above them, harsh, demanding. And then the screams started.
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WHAT? Who???? HUH??? Who could it be? Especially if its someone she doesn't know, so it couldn't be a Malfoy...

You 5 are evil. Evil, evil, evil.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [10 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Erin Go Braugh" from Shanna
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The dynamic with these three (Oz, Mac and Kasie) cracks me up. Can't wait to see what adventures they have together. The cursed flowers were funny too. At least they like a tidy space and dust around themselves. Could be worse. They could be slacker fake, cursed flowers. Can't wait for more!
Review By [Shanna] • Date [9 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Erin Go Braugh" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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The Grindlewald book and background was a *very* nice touch and so was the Celtic book. Nice little bit with the flowers and the thin/curvy reportaire ~ amusing and helps me picture them better.
Loved the place Kasie lived in too.
Liked this chapter a lot :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [9 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Accept the Things to Which Fate Binds You" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Oh Anya. I loved that touching moment.

Excellent quote, by the way.

Now Buffy can't hide when she'd pissed at me. Oooo! And when she gets all wiggy and starts calling me Will after every sentence, I don't have to guess why--- LOL

something flashed in her mind - a snake coming out of a skull's mouth, and instantly she knew something had happened.—OMG I immediately got the shivers that something bad had happened!

Her hair was solid white—WHOA.

Freaking creepy, excellent chapter.

Clearly something is happening in the Death Eater world… But what???

(Ps: you folks are evil to toy with us readers! ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [8 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Swords and Stakes and Getting Older" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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The library shushing bit? GENIUS. Only Willow would want to ensure the newest slayers had a *real* library.

Stonehenge and Russian Hellmouth rederences? VERY Nice :)

Okay, I cracked up at Randy Giles Jr hahaha

"There, there," Giles said, opening his book back up. "I'm sure that you'll get over it."—Nice way to end it. You guys end your chapters with the best lines :D

Although, the only thing that was weird was Giles saying ‘ditto’, seemed un-Giles-y
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [8 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Pray You Learn to Trust" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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If her were lucky, no fights would break out that night.--- typo ‘he’

She was off her game tonight because if her episode,-- think you meant ‘b/c of her ep’

Snape was one of those people that you never wanted to think about that way. Right up there with Mad-Eye Moody and Professor McGonagall.—haha ;) Although thanks to the movies, I do have a crush on Snape… It’s the voice and ‘bad-boy misunderstood-ness of him’ haha

to absolutely not think about what Rosenberg said about Greengrass's kinks.—HA

She was rewarded with a direct hit to his arse.—how playful ;)

Didn't he realize she flourished under his attention?--- WOW lol she definitely reminds me of a kid acting out. But it totally makes sense

Sure, he'd wanted to thrash her, but she'd have bruises on her wrist she could look at and be reminded of him with.--- That is f’ing twisted.

This was a WONDERFUL chapter. I love how you delve into her eradicating mental stability, just lovely how you wrote it.

And all the sexual tension –ay de mi.

I *do* hope Marcus bloody gets over it. Chasing is fun, but I’d like her to catch him- even just once :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [7 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "They Live Inside Us" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Her friends being upset or hurt seemed to be her trigger these days. She tried not to, but it was easy to let out. Draco was frightened and angry. It was bleeding into her. His emotions magnified within her.
---trippy.

Athena did to Medusa. Tell me... how many jobs do you think you'd book with snakes for hair?"--- NIIIIIICE ONE!

"I think there should be a punishment for lying," Willow said, touching a lock of Ella's hair in a manner befitting her vampire counterpart.--- OH MAN! Freaking LOVE this!

I am pretty close to the vampires known as Angelus the Scourge of Europe and William the Bloody. They were all about torture to the pain instead of to the death. I'm sure either or both of them have lovely ideas to share with me on that front."—I am pretty much a huge freaking fan of whenever Willow or someone name drops these guys :D

Bitca--- SCOOOOOOOORRRRRE! ;)

"Bored now," Willow said as she flicked her hand a chopped off a giant chuck of hair from the side of Ella's head.—yay yayayayayayayyayayayay! So many fun BTVS phrases all in one chapter!! :D

That viper had seduced him when he was all of fifteen because she'd been in a snit at his parents, and she was never gonna let Draco forget it.—OH. MY. GOD. Omfg. Ahhhh, gross? Ahhh, weird?

Not to mention the quote? Wicked awesome :D

This was a redic awesome chapter. YOU RULE!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [7 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Telegram" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

How old is Kasie supposed to be, anyway?

And very cute. I am quite curious about this mysterious man, though...
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [7 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wookin Pah Nub" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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he'd swear shew as stalking him --- *typo*

Her excuses for being where his best mate happened to be were always so solid and uttered with such exasperation and disdain.--- She WOULD do that! Haha

Draco knew they were all wrong for one another, a part of him wanted his best friend to notice how she looked at him, to like it.--- yay! Draco is a Blaise/Hannah shipper ;)

Draco was oddly touched by how genuinely upset she seemed that Blaise had not checked in.--- Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

"Yes? Pick a sentence and commit, please."--- Sooo snarky ;)

"Once again we have issues with using our words."--- Snarkiness galore; I Love It ;)

Draco suddenly felt awkward.—Aw, he’s uncomfortable with compliments :)

Hannah was left with the odd sensation that she had just somehow impressed Draco Malfoy, and she was not exactly sure how.--- yay!! I want them to be friends… just so Blaise/Hannah will happen sooner :D

Excellent!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [6 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Apologize" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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and I'll be quoting a lot of green puppets in our journey.—yes! Love star wars!

Females with tempers—well said ;)

He wanted to say that Giles had gotten band candy drugged and had sex with Buffy's mom on the hood of a cop car, and he was still plenty cool, but he didn't think Giles would appreciate that information getting out.—probably not… LOL

And WHOOOOA! What are you saying about Oz/Willow? He IS still carrying a torch but she’s all confused and decided to take a year off from romance… Soooo… What’s gonna happen???????????????

I hope not a broken-hearted Oz :(
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [6 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Greenhouse Effect" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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This is one of the CUTEST chapters you have written. With Mac being protective and their overall banter-- plus, kissage! yay!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [6 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dreams" from POTENTIALlyAwesome
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I enjoyed the 1st one and so far like the 2nd. Good job!
Review By [POTENTIALlyAwesome] • Date [5 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Greenhouse Effect" from Shanna
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I think Mac and Neville are adorable together. It's nice to see him written as a more confident adult, and the way Mac lets her "softer" side out around him. Keep up the excellent work. It's so great to have so many of you writing. We're spoiled daily with updates. It makes me giddy!
Review By [Shanna] • Date [5 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "If You're Looking For Trouble" from imperailjadefox
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I've been reading and enjoying this story so much. Love it.
Review By [imperailjadefox] • Date [5 Mar 10] • Not Rated
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