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Review of chapter "If You're Looking For Trouble" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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I saw Coyote Ugly. .. "Though I don't see any ugly here."—ohhh, snap!
And enter clueless Marcus again. Heehee.

She always did get thirsty after some violence--- don’t forgot about being hungry and horny! ;)

And I *love* that she’s venturing into interior decorating now :D

and Xander would love me even more than he already does---- hahahahhahahahaha!

*great chapter*
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [4 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Ultimate Test for a Relationship" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSssssssssssssss!

Whew. Fan-freaking-chapter!!!!!!!

I loved that bit about the wards recognizing him- that was a cool point.

Love it! love love love it!

:D
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [4 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Belladonna's" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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This was cute- I like how Draco offered to help and enjoyed their conversation.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [4 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Barbs by Bird" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Belladonna’s-- This was referenced in another HP story I read so I'm assuming its a canon location. Could you tell me where its referenced? I really need to re-read HP :(

And Draco's parting words?? Fucking hilarious ;)
Comments from author:
Pure coincidence. Not canon. Belladonna's is actually the name of a restaurant in Hawaii.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Truth or Consequences" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Willow is precious. So is Blaise.

But having Astoria to track him? Huh. Never saw that one coming...
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Truth or Consequences" from anyanka
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Great chapter! I'm not sure which one of you wrote this last bit, but it was very good! Can't wait to see what happens next and thank you for the constant updates. This is a very fun story to read!
Review By [anyanka] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Past is a Foreign Country" from Maxine
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Oh just so awesome and just getting better every chapter. Love Draco and Blaise with Hannah just awesome.
Review By [Maxine] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Past is a Foreign Country" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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husk. her eye never left the wizard.--- typo

Voldemort could probably return and she'd say hi, I'm Pevensie Karlsen and step forward with her hand out.-- heehee.

"I'm sorry if I offended you, but if you wouldn't insinuate that my watcher is a bad guy then I wouldn't get offended myself and have to make rude comments."--- excellent apology ;)

Interesting little convo with Moody and Draco. Poor Draco : (

Love love love Pevensie :D
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Crush" from WriteTheGoodWrite
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BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Oh, poor Pevensie. And cripes, poor Marcus. He does not need to be looking like a pedophile in the bar or in the ministry. Poor guy...
Review By [WriteTheGoodWrite] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Crush" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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She'd come shopping with Rona and Chao-Ahn and a few of the other girls. They were supposed to be after books. The older slayers knew what she was doing and would cover for her. Vi had not come along today. She'd not have agreed with this. Chao-Ahn had even loaned Pevensie some lip gloss.

--hahaha this is awesome. I always think of Vi as the more straight-edge character as well.

she flipped her hair. Rona had told her to do that.—ha. Ha. HAHA.

Or maybe we could persuade Draco to just let us go. I'm sure you could do a good job of watching my back."--- oh my God this is HILARIOUS

He frowned in confusion. The kid made absolutely no sense.--- Wow. Marcus is *so* dense. Ha

This had to be the strangest conversation he'd ever had. Stranger even than one with Greengrass.—aw. Poor Marcus, he doesn’t know what its like to have a friend!

He also couldn't tell her that he thought obsessively over Greengrass and what her skin felt like.--- :D yay. Amusing.

Not that skull-cracking isn't a fine hobby to have.--- Okay, you are HILARIOUS. I am loving everything

Poppet.--- yay I
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Crush" from irialonso
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*Circus arena with ringmaster in the center*
"Ladies and gentlemen I present you ... "
*percussion*
"Marcus Flint the most clueless guy in the world!!!"

Marcus clueless is so funny!
Review By [irialonso] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Crush" from Tempi
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Marcus = clueless!

Great story so far. I look forward to reading more.
Review By [Tempi] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Learning as I Go" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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"Fock off a'fore yer th'one I hit!"—haha. I’m n expert, but I think you do a good job with the accent

She lunged, headbutting her brother--- ouch, what with the slayer strength and all. Ha

Well, it seems everyone is paired up just about… cept Kasie… But is that gonna change?? Hmmm, I wonder…

By the way, congrats on getting 20,000+ hits on Volume I! :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [1 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Between the Lines" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Nessa mad eme wear them."—typo

Ha. Giles got a small bit ‘o’ his own medicine ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [1 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Getting to Know You" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Draco's friend the Man Whore—Hee. Oh Anya. Have I mentioned how damn happy I am that you brought her back???

We do not currently have access to our Gringott's accounts; The goblins are being slightly troublesome in this matter.—That’s curious. Why would that be? Golbins afraid the Slayers will kill their kind? Or is the Ministry interferring?

Amusing meeting. Although it is a bit odd to imagine Giles meeting with Blaise and Neville just to threaten them properly. I guess it makes sense- perhaps its my rebellion against authority that dislikes it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [1 Mar 10] • Not Rated
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