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Review of chapter "Your Chip on Shoulder Technique..." from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Both had toenails painted black. She had done his, and he rather liked them, so he kept them.--- Draco is really FAR too cute. *grins*

While she had no idea what a Beckham was or how it bended, she imagined it was torture for Draco------- heehee

Kennedy lunged for Pevensie's back, and Draco hexed her.--- YAY! DRACO! I also think its real cute how all the Slayers wish they had him for a Watcher :)

I enjoyed, btw, seeing Pevensie take on Kennedy ;D
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [28 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Fit" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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He was digging himself a bigger whole----- *hole*

Draco was sooooo cute with all his crazy comments to Buffy!

"I don't want to," Draco protested. "It suggests I have feelings."- awwwwwww :)

It was not the most pleasant thing ever, but Willow could beat is Occlumency.---- heh?? Confusing sentence.

"Yes. It's better not to admit you care about things. Those things can be used against you. Those things can be used to hurt you."---- awww, just like in his Sixth Year :(

"Blaise likes to play with knives and shop.--- hahahaha Such an excellent pair of hobbies! ;)

"We won't go on a Tuesday or my birthday. You'll be fine."--- teehee. Yay! I want them all to go out dancing!! ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [28 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There are five major torture groups..." from (Recent Donor)Luna
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OK SERIOUSLY, I laughed crazy loud at reading this chapter title. Mwhaahha :D

"But that would mean that there will be no answers to questions we have, and you know how thirsty for knowledge Giles is.---- bahahahahhaa!

Though, I must say that Willow was very fetching when she had herself all done up as her vampire alter-ego."---- Oh. Ohhh…. Ewwww hahahaha

"Here. I think you're shoulder's displaced. Let me help you with that."---- hahaha I do love a Helpful Buffy!

YAY FOR KATHY’S CDS!!!! hahahaha
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [28 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stay and Gloat" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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"You used to whip him? Why won't Marcus share? Your hidden wickedness is absolutely delicious."---------- hahahaha

Love Astoria, as always ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [28 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Family Party" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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It was funny how a small thing like him liking her favorite dress on her could bolster her confidence so much.----- this is very true for most people… Its comments like these that make this story seem so realistic and charming.

He refused to pout because Draco didn't include him on the shopping trip.----- hahahah that’s so silly :D

"Draco's given me strict orders not to hit anyone tonight. It's a pleasure to meet you all."-------- Pevensie + Family situations = Hilarity!

"I feel the need to guard the goods here for Blaise."--- awwww :)

Pevensie can take down a grown man with very littl effort.--- *little*

Sabrina and Gia shared a look over Hannah's head with a smile.--- *cheers* Yay! Hopefully his family will approve of her!!


"He does not enjoy gatherings too much, but there is less tension in his face. I suspect it is because of your presence."--- AWWWWWWWWWWWW + AWWW to him holding the baby and Hannah liking that sight!

"In about seventh months, we'll be doing this all over again, so you'll have plenty of more children to coo at."------- I like this. This is a very telling statement that Blaise plans on having Hannah around in 7 monthes *grins*

So... everyone looked awkward at the word dating.---------- She is such a teenager!!

"I see you've traded up."--- See, from this statement it took me a moment and a second reading to get that Addie was referring to Blaise trading up with his girl… This, like several other times in this story, is an example of how difficult it can be to figure out who is speaking. I LOVE this story but it can be irritating to get confused and have to re-read something because it’s not clear. It would be wonderful if you could clarify who is speaking and even, when necessary, to what they are referring. Ya know?

"Draco's set her jacket on fire once… I LOVE Pyro Draco ;)

LOVED THIS CHAPTER! Damn, I am a sucker for Blaise/Hannah ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [28 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Your Chip on Shoulder Technique..." from RebeccaAshling
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Hmm. I take it that you're all members of the We Hate Kennedy Fan Club. 'S funny, I must be one of the few who doesn't dislike her. Though I liked Tara better, who wouldn't?
Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [28 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Fit" from slmncpm
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hahahahahaha not on tuesdays or my birthday. *hands you scones* i love these. draco having a hissy is just the best. i can't wait to see him and luna on a date! heh.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [27 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Fit" from RebeccaAshling
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I'm getting more and more intrigued by Theo's nasty little secrets. Anya thinks he's off. Draco thinks he's off. And both of them have good insight. What does he do? Couple with corpses? Liked the Draco-Buffy conversation/interaction. That's one of the best things about this story - the dialogues between characters.
Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [27 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There are five major torture groups..." from RebeccaAshling
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Two sterling chapters! A very nice treat this sunny Sunday morning in the UK. And I haven't even had breakfast yet.

I really enjoyed reading more about Blaise's family and the Draco-Pevensie double act was a delight as always. Pevensie is definitely my favourite OC in this fic. I do wish Blaise would display more tact. His blunders with Hannah make me cringe.

Aha! Tori finally caught that bastard, Ethan Rayne. Shame that he took such precautions against physical torture. Poor Willow! I think I will like the chapter where you subject him to the vile horror that is Kathy's CD collection ;)
Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [27 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I'm Going to Take my Time" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Good for Mac & Nev :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [26 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I'm Going to Take my Time" from RebeccaAshling
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I do believe that that was the world's first sex scene starring Neville Longbottom. Unless someone knows differently, of course.
Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scar" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Anya was dealing with yet another transfer request from, oh, everyone in Cleveland wanting to leave because of Andrew. Tough shit. He was their problem now.---- this cracked me up. I love anya and I love this off-page issue you have presented with Andrew. Hahaha

She remembered this part though. "Thank you for asking."--- heehee

Besides that, it would be no good for what he intended.----- ?????? whoa, what does he intend????

"Note to self," she dictated out loud as she wrote. "Miranda was looking for Giles. Also not a lesbian."------ AHHHHHH hahahahaha

What is his scar? I can’t remember if that was mentioned or not. Problem is, with a long story like this read over several months I can’t remember everything. Speaking of that, thanks for mentioning again where Anya went when she died- I forgot how cool that was.

Aaaaand… now potential Theo/Anya?

Also--- is Xander *ever* going to show up? I can’t believe that he wouldn’t *not* see Anya. I’m not one of those crazy Super Xander readers but it is weird to have everyone – even Oz – but not him. It would be nice to have Faith too but I can see her staying put. Anyways, just curious if you guys dislike Xander or he doesn’t fit in the story or he is just appearing later… ?

Gracias :)
Comments from author:
Theo's scars have been mentioned, but vaguely. That will be addressed later. As for Xander, the writer who was going to do his bits is sort of AWOL right now. I, personally, would love to have Xander there, but it's just not working out right now. He does know Anya is there, but had issues with it, so he's off roaming. Sort of like Oz did. But probably with less hair issues.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scar" from RebeccaAshling
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I always thought Anya was funny and she still is. You managed to capture her voice without falling into the trap of mentioning "orgasm" in every other sentence. What does Theo need a working resurrection spell for? Does he intend to bring back his parents, or even Voldemort, so he can give them all a bit of grief?
Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Hermit Intervention" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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not bad chapters, short though. Glad to see Mac and Kasie have projects. Interesting that WIllow is still hermit-y...

Wow it wasn't until these two chapters that I realized what really makes me love this story are the Syltherins and anyone involved with them. Ahhh! I never saw that coming. But they are all just so awesome! Y'all have made me a Slytherin gal now ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [23 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Hermit Intervention" from RebeccaAshling
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I love the Willow/Oz interaction. He really does care for her. Are you planning to bring the two of them back together? I'm more with Willow being with girls but I wouldn't object to her re-smooching and re-snuggling with Oz. Please keep Andrew in Cleveland. He is *so* irritating unless he's being romanced by seven of nine Nazgûl ;)
Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [23 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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