Review of chapter "Busy Work Slayer Style" from RebeccaAshling
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I keep forgetting how *young* Buffy is. This story is set in, what, 2004 so she would be 23 at this point. The job of safeguarding the exhibits is something of a poisoned chalice, yes? I could imagine some in the Wizarding World are considering this to be an opportunity to discredit the Watchers' Council. And hey! More Kasie and Mac shenanigans to come :)
Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [23 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
She decided to help out, because if the date went well, there would be second dates, and Pansy was feeling vindictive of the fact that Draco wasn't here to entertain her. --- mwahahaha ;)
Enjoyed learning a bit more about Theo. Good chapter.
So what are Theo's less innocuous hobbies? Building people out of miscellaneous corpses? Necrophilia? That would explain his attraction to Buffy. Guess I'll have to find out when I find out.
Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Accidental Something" from Luna
re: Pevensive being badass and Draco being protective re: Buffy/Theo
Review By [Luna] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Accidental Something" from RebeccaAshling
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Yay! Buffy has a date! Now go and find a nice girl to hook up with Willow. Ah, rivalry between the trainee Slayers. They're turning into a high school clique, no? And Pevensie was unaware that she held the Cordelia spot. Draco really doesn't like people messing with his things. Will we get to see Giles give Williams a bollocking? And maybe a little more plot in future updates? I do like reading your dialogue and the romantic intrigue but I want to know what's the what with the Death Mark reactivations.
Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [19 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "My Life Gets Kinda Boring" from RebeccaAshling
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Astoria has a...unique...approach to matchmaking, doesn't she? Let's hope Diagon Alley is still standing when the dust and rain of blood settles down.
Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [17 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "My Life Gets Kinda Boring" from Luna
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Possibly lunch, but knowing Pansy, there would definitely be drinks.--- hee. I like Pansy, that’s my kinda girl!
Pansy was a bit disappointed that Marcus didn't want to share. He had excellent wrapping on the outside.--- haha, I really adore that you’ve made Marcus Flint = sexy in my mind now… lol good job
If this continued, they were all well on their way to being drunk out of spite for each other.--------- haha. My friends and I have often done that ;)
And I can’t WAIT to see Astoria’s wicked plan!!!!!
Review By [Luna] • Date [17 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It's no ball, but it is a party" from Luna
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I love all the references to Strange Alice ;)
"Get back to the greenhouses. Willow doesn't pay you to roll about on the grass with my slayer. And wrestling had better be the only thing you're thinking about. Otherwise, come the next full moon, I'll shove a silver blade right through your heart."---- hahaha! Rowan is a boy so I am suuuure he has naughty thoughts… so this was well needed and hilarious!
Plus, she likes puppies and kitties. I think anyone like that probably likes babies too."--- hahahaha
Pevensie kissed Draco's cheek and hurried off.---- awwwwwwwwww they are soooo cute!!!
"I think she's got your kids' names picked out."--- hahaha … & Hannah’s reaction was great!
Blaise and Hannah FTW!!!!!!!! Ahhhhh so freaking awesome! Well played on writing both of their parts!
Review By [Luna] • Date [16 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "She Called Out a Warning" from Luna
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Well well, good for Mac & Neville. And I forget -- Pevensie just turned 15 and Rowan is 17? Hmmm 'spose that's not a bad age difference ;)
It really seems like Theo is a good guy! I really don’t get why Blaise is so pissy; and Draco too
Salazar Slytherin had made a great many of them handsome and charismatic.--- *grins* Yummy Syltherins, so pretty ;)
"You don't even know what you have, and if you're not careful, someone could take it away before you fucking figure it out."--- So. Theo’s making it clear he wants a pass at Hannah – but she’s not into him so I’m not worried. And I bet he’s just doing that to make her jealous.
Blaise/Mac thing is nice, even if it is odd. But I'm glad for them :)
Have I told you lately how much I love this series? Probably, but I’m sure you enjoy reading it ;)
Thanks.
Review By [Luna] • Date [10 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
"Rue the day" is up there with "this isn't other, Slayer" as one of a number of really prattish things to say as you run off with your tail between your legs while pissing your pants. Terry Boot sounds really misogynist, another happy character trait which he shares with the late, unlamented Warren Mears. Can we expect more trouble from Mr Boot, then?
Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [10 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You Say It's Your Birthday" from Luna