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Review of chapter "Storyteller" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Marvelously done! Though a bit more on Andrew's killing of Jonathan would have rounded it out quite nicely, let us not forget that he HAD been influenced by the First Evil, some expression of guilt on having allowed such influence to occur would probably give it the strong emotional overtone it needs...
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Wand Via the MAX Line" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
So did Dawn actually die and resurrect or did that unholy wanker's curse rebound? Way to throw everyone for a loop...

And a grief-maddened Slayer...almost as terrifying as Darth Hera!

Oh, as an aside I noticed you wrote a female voice into the MAX line...bit of a Star Trek guy so I immediately thought Majel Barrett-Roddenberry. Sound about right?

All told, Max Kudos!
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Wand Via the MAX Line" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Way to throw everyone for a loop, huh? Now the Niblet has a mark of destiny...she and Potter gonna be in on it together when they finally tangle with the First?

Oh, as an aside, bit of a Star Trek fan, and when you wrote in a femme voice forthe
AX I immediately thought Majel Barrett-Roddenberry, you know, "authorization not recognized"?

And a grief-maddened Slayer? Almost as frightening as Darth Hera!

Max Kudos!
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Summers Half-Way House for the Formerly Evil" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Okie doke, good on you girl. Loved it, still licking crumbs from last cookie.

One detail though, we Yanks/Colonials/whatever you choose to call us Americans do not refer to Cabinet level positions as Ministries, nor the heads of such agencies as Ministers, they are Departments and the heads of same are known as Secretaries.

Thusly, the arm of the American Executive branch that would purportedly deal with all things magical would be known as the Department of Magic or Department of Sorcery, and we love our acronyms here too, so calling it DOM or DOS would go over quite nicely.

That having been said now, moving right along, bring on the First!
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [1 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy Summers, Counselor Extraordinaire" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Still making with the warm and fuzzies over chappie numero 28, to use a Luna-ism if you'll permit me...

Indeed this is a very important chapter for Willow in terms of defining her sexual identity. Buffy was most deff a big help there with The Talk.

Liked it very much, bloody well done! Oh and thanks! *munches cookie* :P
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [1 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Everyone’s a Little Bit Crazy, From Time to Time" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
I have a name for your "Dark One". She is a Dark Lord of the Sith named Darth Hera. Reference my stories Rise Dark Sisters and Balance of Powers.

reply: Exactly. Darth Hera is Willow. Or rather, she is Willow's Sith alter ego. I invite you to read the above referenced stories
Comments from author:
Hera is a good name, especially since I've always enjoyed that particular greek goddess.

Of course, the "Dark One" in this story is Willow.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [30 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You Taste Like Strawberries" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Goodness, her Darth Hera self must truly be terrifying if she could stun Lucius Malfoy, a known Death Eater, into politeness and submission...
Comments from author:
Well Lucius can easily sense the dark evil emanating from her being :)
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [30 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discovery of the Thief" from mysticdreamer
Review:
You people who pretend that Willow isn't a Lesbian piss me off! What's your deal?
Comments from author:
You people who leave angry reviews after reading only 1k words without knowing what the story actually discusses, plus who have never posted work of your own but tend to leave negative reviews for most writers, piss me off! *insert eye roll here*

Listen mysticdreamer, I have a pretty high tolerance for cabrones, but not today.

If you were to continue reading, you would see how things unfold - and how Willow's sexuality is discussed. It gets discussed in the story especially in chapter 29.

Don't be a puta and just lay down a slamming review. If you have concerns, act reasonable, please.

Now, if you excuse me, I have some Black Friday shopping ahead. *slathers on the war paint*

Good day.
Review By [mysticdreamer] • Date [24 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Olympus
Review:
Just finished this awesome, huge, gargantuan, and epic (did I mention awesome?) story. And absolutely loved every single bit of it.
Your writing style is amazing, the story flows really well from scene to scene and the characterizations of each character is spot on. Not to mention that the dialogue was witty, sharp and made me laugh so many times during reading it. It gave me the thrills. Both worlds were expertly blended to perfection and all your OCs were great.

Really looking forward to reading more of your stories - damn, you are quite possibly one of the best writers that I have encountered - kudos to you for all your hard work. :)

I truly enjoyed reading this story - and I am sure to re-read it again some time soon. Luna, you are a very talented writer - and I really mean that with utter sincerity. :-)

Regards, Ollie. XX
Comments from author:
Hi Ollie :)

Sorry I missed responding to this earlier!

Thank you very much for finishing the story and leaving such a nice review. You pretty much have my cheeks burning with your words *grins* Completely made my day. Reviewers like you is what makes writing so much fun!

Have a wonderful day :)
Luna
Review By [Olympus] • Date [6 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Odin
Review:
After starting your "Curiosity Killed the Key" story, I decided to check out some of your other stories and settled on this one. Wow! I agree with the previous reviewer in that your writing improved as the story progressed. Well done. I picked fairly early on that Kennedy was the leak, but I could not decide if it was Malfoy on polyjuice or Kennedy herself. Personally, I was hoping it was really Kennedy (never have liked her character). Either way, it was a great twist. I also can't believe you wrote that in just eight months. This story definitely gets a recommendation from me. Thanks for all the work. I'll be starting the sequel tonight.
Comments from author:
*waves* Hi Odin! It's so nice to hear that you wanted to check out on of my fics and enjoyed this one. I love hearing the feedback :) This story really elevated me to new levels of writing and I am so glad that I decided to write it in the first place! (originally Willow and Sirius met at the cottage, then went their separate ways, only to find each other a year later to help with Order of the Phoenix stuff; this path was much more interesting and I am thankful my muse is insane and likes to change storylines!)

Thank you for reading!
Review By [Odin] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)fluffymuskateer
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Hey, finally finished this gigantathon of a tale! It was 'Sirius'ly wonderful. You know what I loved best? Watching how much your writing improved over the course of the fic. It was good to begin with but just got better and better. The epilogue was fantastic, so sweet. It was nice to see Willow and Sirius having a proper relationship... in a lot of romance fiction people just stop at the HEA, but this continued afterwards. Loved the whole darn thing. Well done!
fluffy x
Comments from author:
Awww, thanks fluffy!! I'm so excited that you finished and left such a nice review :) Hearing that you thought my writing improved over the course of the fic felt good -- I really learned a *lot* over the 8 months that I wrote Willow's Thief. Ah, I love this fic. I've even been thinking about the sequel that'll take place during HP Book 5....

Thanks for reading! :D
Review By [(Recent Donor)fluffymuskateer] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The British Invasion" from (Recent Donor)fluffymuskateer
Review:
Hey, I've only as far as chapter 39 but I thought I'd just say I'm loving the story so far. Your Sirius and Willow are so cute together, and I love the way the worlds are meshing. Looking forward to the rest of the story! On with the reading...
fluffy x
Comments from author:
*grins* Thank you for the feedback fluffymuskateer! (heehee, I remember Blue's comments on the forum regarding your name- tis a good name:)
Review By [(Recent Donor)fluffymuskateer] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
I just finished reading this, having only recently become a member.

A magnificent epic with memorable villains. I never did like Lucius Malfoy...too often is he depicted, not as the evil individual he is but as some flawed person. His choices were clear and merely running around in fear of one's son is hardly enough for redemption. Neither is having supposedly cool hair.

Very well written and the universes are interstingly woven together. I also like the fact that Buffy ends up with a living (sort of) Spike. I look forward to the HP cross sequel and will now start on the Excellent Journey.

Thansk very much for the great read!
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the challenge of reading this incredibly long story! Your review is much appreciated :)

Yes, I agree with your thoughts on Lucius. His wife was helpful to Harry but the father did not deserve such leniency. Thank goodness for fanfic that has the ability to deliver cruel deaths! (although, I admit, I do love his hair in the movies...haha).

Glad to know you like Spike being alive and (sorta) with Buffy! During the writing/posting process I received quite a few reviews calling for his death or at least asking for them not to be together. It's nice to know someone approves!

Thank you for reading!
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Score Another One for the Yanks" from bookworm
Review:
Another good chapter - money, reunions, and a beat-down for Fudge (even though, in this case, he really didn't have anything to do with those Unspeakables). One thing that niggles at me though; wouldn't an older vault have a /lower/ number than a newer one, with Vault #1 presumably having been the first vault ever, and then adding on from there?
Comments from author:
Thanks! I enjoy that chapter a lot, especially the Fudge beat down ;)

Common sense dictates that an older vault would have a lower number BUT in doing research for the story I discovered that (when comparing the vault numbers of Harry, Sirius, and the Weasleys, and the Sorcerer Stone) older did not mean lower. So that's why I gave Anya that vault number. Personally, I feel like it'd be different but I thought I'd follow what canon seemed to indicate.

Thanks!
Review By [bookworm] • Date [19 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Wand Via the MAX Line" from bookworm
Review:
Haha, I love Bartholomaeus. I can hear him in my head, if that makes any sense to you. I assume Dawn woke up in the morgue, but what's with all the leaves, then? Hmm...
Comments from author:
*claps hands happily* Oh goody! I'm so glad you like him. It can be tricky when writing an original character, regarding if the reader likes them or not. The leaves are from when Sirius covered her with pretty flowers and such as they carried her body to the morgue.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [bookworm] • Date [19 Jun 11] • Not Rated
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