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Review of chapter "You Taste Like Strawberries" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Goodness, her Darth Hera self must truly be terrifying if she could stun Lucius Malfoy, a known Death Eater, into politeness and submission...
Comments from author:
Well Lucius can easily sense the dark evil emanating from her being :)
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [30 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discovery of the Thief" from mysticdreamer
Review:
You people who pretend that Willow isn't a Lesbian piss me off! What's your deal?
Comments from author:
You people who leave angry reviews after reading only 1k words without knowing what the story actually discusses, plus who have never posted work of your own but tend to leave negative reviews for most writers, piss me off! *insert eye roll here*

Listen mysticdreamer, I have a pretty high tolerance for cabrones, but not today.

If you were to continue reading, you would see how things unfold - and how Willow's sexuality is discussed. It gets discussed in the story especially in chapter 29.

Don't be a puta and just lay down a slamming review. If you have concerns, act reasonable, please.

Now, if you excuse me, I have some Black Friday shopping ahead. *slathers on the war paint*

Good day.
Review By [mysticdreamer] • Date [24 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Olympus
Review:
Just finished this awesome, huge, gargantuan, and epic (did I mention awesome?) story. And absolutely loved every single bit of it.
Your writing style is amazing, the story flows really well from scene to scene and the characterizations of each character is spot on. Not to mention that the dialogue was witty, sharp and made me laugh so many times during reading it. It gave me the thrills. Both worlds were expertly blended to perfection and all your OCs were great.

Really looking forward to reading more of your stories - damn, you are quite possibly one of the best writers that I have encountered - kudos to you for all your hard work. :)

I truly enjoyed reading this story - and I am sure to re-read it again some time soon. Luna, you are a very talented writer - and I really mean that with utter sincerity. :-)

Regards, Ollie. XX
Comments from author:
Hi Ollie :)

Sorry I missed responding to this earlier!

Thank you very much for finishing the story and leaving such a nice review. You pretty much have my cheeks burning with your words *grins* Completely made my day. Reviewers like you is what makes writing so much fun!

Have a wonderful day :)
Luna
Review By [Olympus] • Date [6 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Odin
Review:
After starting your "Curiosity Killed the Key" story, I decided to check out some of your other stories and settled on this one. Wow! I agree with the previous reviewer in that your writing improved as the story progressed. Well done. I picked fairly early on that Kennedy was the leak, but I could not decide if it was Malfoy on polyjuice or Kennedy herself. Personally, I was hoping it was really Kennedy (never have liked her character). Either way, it was a great twist. I also can't believe you wrote that in just eight months. This story definitely gets a recommendation from me. Thanks for all the work. I'll be starting the sequel tonight.
Comments from author:
*waves* Hi Odin! It's so nice to hear that you wanted to check out on of my fics and enjoyed this one. I love hearing the feedback :) This story really elevated me to new levels of writing and I am so glad that I decided to write it in the first place! (originally Willow and Sirius met at the cottage, then went their separate ways, only to find each other a year later to help with Order of the Phoenix stuff; this path was much more interesting and I am thankful my muse is insane and likes to change storylines!)

Thank you for reading!
Review By [Odin] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)fluffymuskateer
Review:
Hey, finally finished this gigantathon of a tale! It was 'Sirius'ly wonderful. You know what I loved best? Watching how much your writing improved over the course of the fic. It was good to begin with but just got better and better. The epilogue was fantastic, so sweet. It was nice to see Willow and Sirius having a proper relationship... in a lot of romance fiction people just stop at the HEA, but this continued afterwards. Loved the whole darn thing. Well done!
fluffy x
Comments from author:
Awww, thanks fluffy!! I'm so excited that you finished and left such a nice review :) Hearing that you thought my writing improved over the course of the fic felt good -- I really learned a *lot* over the 8 months that I wrote Willow's Thief. Ah, I love this fic. I've even been thinking about the sequel that'll take place during HP Book 5....

Thanks for reading! :D
Review By [(Recent Donor)fluffymuskateer] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The British Invasion" from (Recent Donor)fluffymuskateer
Review:
Hey, I've only as far as chapter 39 but I thought I'd just say I'm loving the story so far. Your Sirius and Willow are so cute together, and I love the way the worlds are meshing. Looking forward to the rest of the story! On with the reading...
fluffy x
Comments from author:
*grins* Thank you for the feedback fluffymuskateer! (heehee, I remember Blue's comments on the forum regarding your name- tis a good name:)
Review By [(Recent Donor)fluffymuskateer] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
I just finished reading this, having only recently become a member.

A magnificent epic with memorable villains. I never did like Lucius Malfoy...too often is he depicted, not as the evil individual he is but as some flawed person. His choices were clear and merely running around in fear of one's son is hardly enough for redemption. Neither is having supposedly cool hair.

Very well written and the universes are interstingly woven together. I also like the fact that Buffy ends up with a living (sort of) Spike. I look forward to the HP cross sequel and will now start on the Excellent Journey.

Thansk very much for the great read!
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the challenge of reading this incredibly long story! Your review is much appreciated :)

Yes, I agree with your thoughts on Lucius. His wife was helpful to Harry but the father did not deserve such leniency. Thank goodness for fanfic that has the ability to deliver cruel deaths! (although, I admit, I do love his hair in the movies...haha).

Glad to know you like Spike being alive and (sorta) with Buffy! During the writing/posting process I received quite a few reviews calling for his death or at least asking for them not to be together. It's nice to know someone approves!

Thank you for reading!
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Score Another One for the Yanks" from bookworm
Review:
Another good chapter - money, reunions, and a beat-down for Fudge (even though, in this case, he really didn't have anything to do with those Unspeakables). One thing that niggles at me though; wouldn't an older vault have a /lower/ number than a newer one, with Vault #1 presumably having been the first vault ever, and then adding on from there?
Comments from author:
Thanks! I enjoy that chapter a lot, especially the Fudge beat down ;)

Common sense dictates that an older vault would have a lower number BUT in doing research for the story I discovered that (when comparing the vault numbers of Harry, Sirius, and the Weasleys, and the Sorcerer Stone) older did not mean lower. So that's why I gave Anya that vault number. Personally, I feel like it'd be different but I thought I'd follow what canon seemed to indicate.

Thanks!
Review By [bookworm] • Date [19 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Wand Via the MAX Line" from bookworm
Review:
Haha, I love Bartholomaeus. I can hear him in my head, if that makes any sense to you. I assume Dawn woke up in the morgue, but what's with all the leaves, then? Hmm...
Comments from author:
*claps hands happily* Oh goody! I'm so glad you like him. It can be tricky when writing an original character, regarding if the reader likes them or not. The leaves are from when Sirius covered her with pretty flowers and such as they carried her body to the morgue.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [bookworm] • Date [19 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When Pigs Fly" from bookworm
Review:
Actually, I think 'equine' rhymes with mean, not mine. I could be wrong though, or it's a regional thing. At any rate, obviously no-one else commented on that at the time, so it's not a major problem.

I just found this story yesterday, and I'm really enjoying it so far. Onward!

Scott
Comments from author:
Huh, perhaps it is a regional thing. Now I need to talk to my roommate because she owns a horse, haha.

So glad you just found the story, have read so much, and are enjoying it! Thank you Scott for reviewing! :)
Review By [bookworm] • Date [16 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Eureka
Review:
I am so glad that I finally found the rest of this story. I love how you ended this and LOVE the new one too which I am hoping has a new chapter soon. LOL
Comments from author:
heehee :) Hopefully.

So glad you got a chance to finish the story! Thanks for reading, dear! :)
Review By [Eureka] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from firedrakegirl
Review:
Amazing, absoluetly amazing!
Comments from author:
*blushes* Thank you!

EDIT: And I just noticed you left a rec. Many thanks!!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I *Knew* Dark Witches Didn’t Use the Word ‘Neato’" from mimijikazananyi
Review:
I liked the "bitca" reference, but you turned Ron into a Rob. ^_^
Comments from author:
eeeeeeeeeep! I didn't have a beta in the early chapters. Thanks for pointing that out! :)
Review By [mimijikazananyi] • Date [16 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from flyawayblue
Review:
Brilliant story, I loved how you brought all the worlds together and made it flow really well. I could really see Luna in Sunnydale she just fits :)

Looking forward to the sequel and more HP action.
Comments from author:
:D Thank you very much!

Yes, I love Luna's character and she seems like the best fit for BTVS out of all the HP folks :)

Thanks for reading & reviewing!
Review By [flyawayblue] • Date [8 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from ladyvisionary
Review:
Ah! I finally sat down and finished Willow's Thief! *waits for applause* And I'm almost speechless - I really enjoyed the final chapters - the battle! ice! shrinking solution! Anya not dying! Sirius coming to the rescue! Sirius' magical kiss! Devil's Trap! Salt! *tips hat to SPN verse* I'm really looking forward to the 5th year sequel as well - now, I'm off to read the Luna & Spike spin-off! *rubs hands excitedly* Excellent job!
Comments from author:
*applauds*

Yay! I'm glad that you got a chance to finish it. It's always nice to have more free time during the holiday season :)

So glad to hear the parts that you liked - you know how happy that always makes me :)

Luna & Spike's tale uses quite a bit of SPN characters so I'm thinking you'll be liking that if you enjoyed the Devil's Trap.

Thank you for reading!!
Review By [ladyvisionary] • Date [26 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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