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Review of chapter "Discovery of the Thief" from kayron
Review:
So it looks like this is set around the time that Hermoine and Harry used the time turner to help Sirius escape. I think that Sirius should tell Willow about everything. Once he gets to know her a little, he'll find that she is trustworthy, and maybe she can help him. She and Hermoine Granger are alike in a way. He has let a few little things slip. Willow is going to start demanding answers soon. What's a muggle? What's muggle studies? What kind of animal is that? What kind of magic do you use if it isn't Wiccan?
Comments from author:
Yup, this takes place the summer after he escapes, late summer actually.

And Willow will definitely be going research girl on him thanks to all those little slips.

Eventually they will trust each other :)

Thank you for commenting!
Review By [kayron] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discovery of the Thief" from Waverly
Review:
Though it was a little sudden for her to invite him into her home, I love this story so far! Please continue soon, I'm really enjoying this!
Comments from author:
Perhaps a bit sudden, but Willow is a softie :)

I am very happy that you're enjoying it thus far!

Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [Waverly] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Discovery of the Thief" from lamusicalady
Review:
"And maybe right now more of the ‘less’ was taking place."
that may be my favorite line ever. :D
Comments from author:
*heehee* yay! I really like that line and I'm glad you like it as well.

Thank you for reviewing :)
Review By [lamusicalady] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discovery of the Thief" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Interesting start!

Kind of bland, as far as it goes, but lots of potential.
Comments from author:
Thank you!

I admit, it is a bit bland so far, it was late and I just wanted to explore and not 'think' as much as I should when writing. But I plan on continuing it and when I do it'll have more to it.

Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Discovery of the Thief" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Great start
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Discovery of the Thief" from Shanna
Review:
I don't think I remember ever reading a Willow/Sirius pairing before, but I'm very excited to read more. Willow was my favorite BtVS character, and the charming and playful Sirius might be just what the girl needs to help her through that period of time. Please continue!
Comments from author:
It is a pairing not often done, as far as I know, so I'm happy to give you one for your reading pleasure!

Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [Shanna] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Discovery of the Thief" from AllenPitt
Review:
Great idea... so neither has any idea really of what the other is. He thinks he knows...but he really doesn't. heh. Meanwhile there's a whole world she's unaware of. One has to wonder if Willow could use a wand (with the whole 'hellmouth energies obscured her so she didn't get a letter' thing?) or if not, could she make potions? ie a few books on potions & the like might benefit her a lot, she might still be able to do quite a bit. She can certainly transfigure / charm / etc.
He'll be amazed at how powerful she is, without a wand... one wonders if he knows about slayers & hellmouths. I get the impression that vampires have some social standing in the wizarding world ( Slughorn invited one to one of his parties, I think?)..what do the watchers know, what does Giles know, yadda yadda. I doubt Willow would take kindly to Aurors invading her house, out to get Sirius Black...
Comments from author:
Thank you AllenPitt! I think it will be a fun meeting of worlds. Willow in the HP world is always one of my favorites.
I can go either way on having her be able to use a wand, but she can definitely make potions. I'm not sure how informed I'll make him on the 'underworld' of the mystical world but he will know about vampires- besides Slughorn there was the Gilderoy Lockhart who claimed to have dealt with a vampire.

So many possibilities :)

Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Discovery of the Thief" from Almadynis
Review:
I love this. Please keep going!
Comments from author:
yay :) Thank you!!
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discovery of the Thief" from Greywizard
Review:
An interesting beginning here,Luna, and one I'd like to see more of.

Haven't seen many Willow/Sirius pairings written, and you make it sound quite plausible under the circumstances given.

Will he be going back to Sunnydale with her? I would live to see the Scoobies giving him the 'Shovel speech'! Especially Buffy, when she picks him up with one hand and tells him she'll remove some of his favorite parts without the assistance of medical equipment if he hurts Willow in any way. ;-)
Comments from author:
Thank you Greywizard! I appreciate the comments.

Yes, the Willow/Sirius section did look a bit bare - especially compared to Snape's - and it struck me as a fun one.

To be honest, I haven't thought ahead very far. It was just nagging my brain and I wanted to write a cute-ish, romantic fic since I've never solely pursued that. Of course, knowing me, it will probably become something I didn't expect.

Heehee, the shovel speech would be awesome! I'll have to see where my writing takes me - can't say for sure right now if he'll be back in Sunnydale (especially because that means I may have to include him in Season 7 which is not one of my favorite seasons to write about).

Thank you for reviewing!!
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Discovery of the Thief" from lillyb
Review:
I like it, keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
yay :) Thank you lillyb!
Review By [lillyb] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discovery of the Thief" from Dmitri
Review:
That was a very nice story and both characters were, well, in character - I liked that. Thanks for posting the story, Luna.
PS: And nice to see that Buckbeak was present as well - he is usually forgotten by most authors.
Comments from author:
Thank you Dmitri :) I appreciate your comments!

And poor Buckbeak. I mean, how can you forget one of the coolest pets, ever? ;)
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discovery of the Thief" from (Past Donor)Methos
Review:
very interesting...

It's a novel way of introducing Willow to the Wizarding Community, not to mention the idea of a relationship between Sirius and Willow is a very interesting ship... Having Willow around could actually save Sirius' life, not to mention having a stable home if the relationship works between Willow and Sirius would negate the blood magic on Harry forcing him to stay with his aunt and give him options.

This one's definitely going on my tracking list, certainly one that i'll be watching grow :D

M
Comments from author:
I haven't read as much HP fics as I would like - there are so many of them, after all - so I was unsure of all the different ways to introduce Willow to the Wizarding world. I'm pleased that you found my way to be novel. Having Sirius die was probably the worst thing I found about the books, so I'm all about saving him in any way ;)

Thank you for tracking and reviewing- I appreciate it Methos!

~Luna
Review By [(Past Donor)Methos] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Discovery of the Thief" from MistofRainbows
Review:
lol could be a cute fic :)
Comments from author:
thanks :) Thats what I'm hoping for!

Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Discovery of the Thief" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Interesting start with some promising plot potential; if nothing else, I have to wonder what Giles would think of Buckbeak...

And that's before you factor in the personal issues Willow and Sirius are each dealing with at this point, of course; with Sirius wanted for a murder he didn't commit and Willow dealing with SERIOUS guilt issues it might be interesting to see how they come together from this point...

Keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
Thank you. 3am plot bunnies can be nice surprises ;)

I thought their personal issues might be very interesting as well.

Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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