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Review of chapter "Nothing you can possess... Part 1?" from trouvera
Review:
Bwahahahahahaha!!!!

Yes! Please continue!! Because Indiana Xander needs to meet up with Jack.
Comments from author:
I might, but I really would like to do this as a collaboration. I just think it's more fun that way.
Review By [trouvera] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nothing you can possess... Part 1?" from Ghostrider
Review:
First, the first part, doesn't seem to flow too well, imho. The whole 'fray-adjacent' part doesn't mesh together well. Thing is, I can't really see how to change it.

Now, the latter part...

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*sound of body falling to the floor, accompanied by wheezing laughter*

Ahem! Yes, well, can I say AWESOME?

Poor Danny, going up against Indiana Harris. What we now need, is a scene where this is reversed. Danny and Co taking something from Xander and he's going after them and takes it back. Preferably, using the whip to get out of their clutches. And Jack saying 'No fair! I want a whip like that!'
Comments from author:
I'll be honest, I just don't see Xander really using a whip more than once. Oh, I imagine he'll try, but that's a difficult thing to master. He will use everything else at his disposal.

As for the first part, I don't know. I think there's a certain amount of "you're just human" that will always be around, at least this way he gets to do something.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nothing you can possess... Part 1?" from rmoni
Review:
Loved the beginning. Please continue.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it. I'll try to keep going, but it won't be for a while.
Review By [rmoni] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nothing you can possess... Part 1?" from KzintiKiller
Review:
ROTFLMAO! Halfway through I thought Giles was pitching "Larry Croft". I love it! The thing is, is Xander Indy? Or his nemesis? Let's hope he doesn't steal a canopic jar with a sleeping snake in it.

KK
Comments from author:
I suppose it could be a combination of the two. Xander isn't Indy, he just gets to pretend he is. It's his basic job, going out, finding relics and artifacts, and returning them to the council for use and occasional disposal.

And you never know what he is going to find...
Review By [KzintiKiller] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nothing you can possess... Part 1?" from FariaLyton
Review:
Oh. Oh wow. My sides hurt. Xander quoting Raiders of the Lost Ark and wearing the hat and running all over the globe with Slayers and... Wow. Please write more.
Comments from author:
I'm glad people are amused by it. I do hope to have more, but I don't know when I'll be able to get more. One of the many reasons I'd like to collaborate with someone.
Review By [FariaLyton] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nothing you can possess... Part 1?" from nightowl
Review:
LOL I can so see that happening. I imagine tho that if daniel gets too frustrated and jack gets fed up with danny's whining they may try and recrut zander. or they could find writings/people who relate to the slayer mythos. great job. so many ways to turn I can't wait to see whats around the bend.
Comments from author:
Actually, I was really hoping to keep the two worlds separate as much as possible. I'd prefer to keep this from becoming a "superfriends" kind of fic. Maybe the occasional team up, but generally adversarial.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [nightowl] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nothing you can possess... Part 1?" from LallaBelle
Review:
Poor poor Daniel. If it's not Jack trying to prevent him from going to Atlantis, it's Xander taking away the shiny artifacts he's just found.

I think it's definitely got potential.
Comments from author:
I'm glad people like the idea. Of course, that's all it is right now. I'm hoping to expand on it, but I don't have the time right now, which is, of course, part of the reason I'd like to collaborate.
Review By [LallaBelle] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nothing you can possess... Part 1?" from Shulik
Review:
What were you thinking in terms of collaboration??
Comments from author:
I think I answered in your last review, but people coming together to work on the larger story. Swapping ideas, brainstorming and perhaps alternating chapters. It's gotta be fun.
Review By [Shulik] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nothing you can possess... Part 1?" from Shulik
Review:
What were you thinking in terms of collaboration??
Comments from author:
People working together to make a longer story, perhaps alternating chapters, or some such. Bouncing ideas off each other and trying to figure out something for the basic storyline. Nothing too long.

It has to be fun, or else it becomes work.
Review By [Shulik] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nothing you can possess... Part 1?" from (Current Donor)tammin
Review:
ROTFLMFAO. A great drabble. I look forward to reading how you will go forward and how you will keep SG-1 from breaking out the snakes. (not Goa'ud)
Comments from author:
I'm glad people like it. I'm hoping for a collaboration. I think it would be a lot of fun. If not, it might either be very short updates, or longer updates with long intervals between them.

I am hoping to add some more.
Review By [(Current Donor)tammin] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nothing you can possess... Part 1?" from WolfWriter
Review:
Oy vey!

Funny! Groan and eye roll inducing, but funny!

The thing is, I can actually SEE Xander taking away Danny's latest acquisition/device/thingamabob!

I can't wait to see what else you come up with.
Comments from author:
It might remain a one shot if I don't get some other people involved. I had the idea, but I'm up to my armpits in other projects, some are fanfics and some are real life stuff, so I don't have that much time. If it's just me, it's going to be very long between updates.

I'm really glad people like the idea, though.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Not Rated
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