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What Cannot Be Undone

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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Leilani2
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Sooooooo.......when are you going to update?
Review By [Leilani2] • Date [4 Apr 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from scoobydoowitch
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As much as I enjoy reading all of your fan-fiction I must say your Anita Blake crossovers are my favorites. I really like how you are having Willow struggle with what has happened to her. The struggle makes it more real, than if she was fine with what has happened. I am looking forward to the next part.
Review By [scoobydoowitch] • Date [1 Mar 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from LisaZ
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This is good Jinni....but then again, all of the fic of yours that I read is *G* I can't wait for more of this.
Review By [LisaZ] • Date [8 Feb 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Norwegianne
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Great story. Serious, but funny. And I think it's good that Anita likes Willow, it's nice that you're not trying Anita-bashing... ;) It makes it more real. Or as real as a story about these universes can be.
Review By [Norwegianne] • Date [14 Jan 04] • Not Rated
Review of story "What Cannot Be Undone" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Poor Richard. Soon he'll (hopefully) get over Anita with Willow. Can't wait to see how Willow and Anita react to each other *lol*

~Nakita~
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [12 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "What Cannot Be Undone" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Oh Jinni
your work is always a delight to read, and I am loving the latest story. If I don't leave feedback enough I'm sorry, but the quality of your writing is so consistant that I feel redundant in my verbiage...

Poor Willow - heck, poor Paris when a black eyed, black haired Were-Witch Willow gets back on even footing, there will be bits of Paris fur spread far and wide, and she will have not earned it in her minds eye. Paris' part in this is a beautiful justiposition of doing wrong because you think it's the right thing to do.

CR
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [6 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "What Cannot Be Undone" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Oooh, I'm really really liking this. I haven't seen the plot line before (forcible infection) and I think Anita's reaction is completely plausible. And the fact that Willow will be an alpha-- definitely right. I'm looking forward to seeing the meeting between Anita and Willow. They'll either love either other or hate each other, imo. And what will her friends at home think? Obviously, eagerly awaiting more! :)
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [5 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "What Cannot Be Undone" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Oooh, Anita meeting Willow.

There are a few ways this could go, I'm keeping my fingers crossed for one particular way, but I'll just wait to see.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [5 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "What Cannot Be Undone" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Really great story. Hope to read some from Richards prospective, he puts Angel to shame in the brooding department. Love it please write more.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [29 Nov 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "What Cannot Be Undone" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Very good start... amazing how a simple misunderstanding can lead to so many different consequences. Please keep writing on this one!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [25 Nov 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "What Cannot Be Undone" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Like the extra space formatting, and Willow thinking about how Sunny-hell is different from St.Louis.
Don't know the AB characters well enough to say anything other than you're doing a good job
of showing a world where more than the main characters exist.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [12 Nov 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "What Cannot Be Undone" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Ooh!! Ooh!!

I'm really excited about this.

I can't wait to see what you do with the Anitaverse characters, it's always fun to get other people's takes on them.

And I would honestly be the president of the Paris is a Bitch club if it existed. Stupid cow. Er...wolf.

Now I'm going to have to reread the AB series. I've been wanting to lately.

I can't wait for Jean-Claude and Anita to make a show. That's always fun to see unfold.

So, keep up the good work!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [11 Nov 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "What Cannot Be Undone" from Anonymous Reviewer
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ouch.... poor Willow. She's only trying to help someone, not even thinking about dating the guy, and then that happens. Ouch. I hope to see more soon.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [11 Nov 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "What Cannot Be Undone" from Anonymous Reviewer
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more ... more ... more please. Can hardly wait to see what is going to happen next.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [11 Nov 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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