The plot holes are driving me insane NCIS would only be called in after a crime scene was looked over and if there was military involvement so why the heck were they in Salem with no body and no other law enforcement involved? NCIS is a crime investigation unit not protection detail that is FBI. Buffy and co aren't in military so that shouldn't have even gone to their desk yes Abby and Ducky were involved but everyone else didn't know that until it was randomly brought up in a convo. They should have been interrogated on what they know so that isn't plausible. Even though Abby and Ducky are involved they aren't dead and aren't military they may be Federal Agents but again that should have been taken care of by the FBI not NCIS and that doesn't even take into account the conflict of interest that would be involved there. In response to another review yeah they might go by car but it would have to be a refrigerated van because the body would need to be put on ice because of it being a military investigation if they were going to take the body back to DC instead of just using local facilities it's more likely they would have military transport and used either helicopter or a military plane to the base in DC then taken the body by refrigerated car back to the station. Good story but the plot holes just drive me nuts, and I've only read a few chapters so far.

Alot of the plot holes get filled in later but you did point out some things I never took into account. I just assumed that those things were understood. I shouldn't have assumed. THANKS! I'll try and find any others that I missed. I hope that you continue to enjoy what portion of it that you can. This is one of my first true full story works and it started out as a birthday present one-shot.

Just stumbled across this great fic. Love the crossovers. Gotta worry about what the threat is that calls in so much. Anti-monitor level threat? (DC verse ref.)

interesting idea. Musy is being overly secretive on what the threat is and isn't giving up ^any^ hints what-so-ever. *shrug* that's the muse for you. I'm glad you like my work. You might also like my Insane guide, the first in my Insanities series. Check it out.

interesting aftermath...
can`t wait to see what happens next ^_^

I'll see what I can conjure up. ^v^

Snicker snort. Definatly Daniel and Jack's kid

that's what I thought. *snicker*

i truly, truly love this series. heh. *hands you scones* blessed full moon!

*snicker* I'm glad that you're enjoying this. Come to think of it this really is more of a mini-series than a proper book, ah well. Enjoy! *munch!*

Edit: when this is complete would you like a copy for your computer? if you want you've got my permission to keep a copy on your computer. That way you'll always have a copy!

Very unusual for me to pick a story and read all of the chapters available at one sitting!. Excellent combination of events that blend together so well. you took the impossible and actually made it seem reasonable. Love the story--hope you make it s STRONG focus for your work! :)

*huge grin*

How do you think I can not only argue on the same level as someone with a doctorate(regardless of my own knowledge of the field) but out argue people with doctorates in their own fields unless a vital or pointed concept or theory I'm unfamiliar with comes up? My dad can do it to. He's done it in court for his job a number of times.
You follow the logic and make sure that there aren't any conflicting(or at least a conflict at a reasonable level and point judging from everyone and everything involved) rules of society, reality, and law; and voila! I think that its fun.
I can draw a teacher or an expert into a discussion on one subject or another learn something from the discussion and see what flaws there are when put up against hard reality, societal rules, and what might go kablewy if I toss in metaphysics and/or magical aspects or even just tweak it a bit. Of course I tend to play with such concepts on my own any way but *shrug*.

I'm glad that you don't find my jumps to much. A number of people do and just can't follow how my brain works. This is a basis for my life and it shows in my work. Its difficult to remove so I stopped trying. I can take the incredible and see how its all put together. I apply those weavings, sometimes with changes, to my work and its no less incredible to me but I still try to make sure that others can see the weavings. Doesn't always work out that way but they tend to enjoy the final pattern so I just put it down to a different point of view. I'm glad that you're enjoying this and I hope that you continue to enjoy.

I also have several other stories with a similar combining focus, my: "Basic Insane Survival Guide" and "Magical Hacks" as you've expressed an interest you might like them.

please continue to create chapters with "very little sleep." thank you for the fun read.

I can make the attempt. I only started it on very little sleep and finished it ^verrrry^ much later but I agree they turn out to be far more entertaining. I'm glad that you had fun.

a very interesting story withe many surprising twists...
looking forward to a new chapter ^_^

I'm glad that you're having fun. Unfortunately this has been sidelined. I'll try to get a new chapter up before I loose musey's attention again!

So is it now abandoned? You haven't wrote since Jan. I hope not. I can think of soo many pranks to pull on Kinsley! Like make him grow a tail and ears of a jackass! Or turn him blue like was originally planned, but add different swirls and such or change the colors periodically! Or make it to where he can only speak the truth! Ohh he would HATE that one! Or better yet...Make him have to tell the truth or he turns colors and his nose, fingers and toes grow! how cool would that one be!

After having caught your latest story I just had to check out what else you have wrote.

Ack! No, not abandoned but you just spawned more plot bunnies! Musy just wants to pay attention to something a little less convoluted. Thanks for the reminder!

Totally addictive. Love Ziva's place in this. I always thought she would make a kickass slayer. I will keep reading and commenting throughout the day. You rock.

Cool. You might try my "Insane Guide" one next I'm just updating it since my muses are ^finally^ letting me post. On the upside it means 4 new chapters or so in quick succession on the down side it was a ^very^ long wait period. Stupid muses and murphy.

First off I am totally pissed. I waited to let to start reading this and now I have to work. No worries though cause I am putting it on my kindle.


Now for actual review of the chapter. I freaking love Tony. Now he is all magical and they have seen Willow and Bufffy. Im hooked. Damn I might have to read one moe chapter.

I'm gonna have to re-read this one before even attempting to add more. I'm glad that you're enjoying it. It started out as a one shot.

I am really enjoying this story!!! It does tend to jump around a lot and lose focus at times, but it's wonderful and addicting. I love the idea of McGee being Max from hocus pocus!

Glad you like it. For the time being its on hold though. As to the Jumps.... That's my brain, sorry if its confusing, at least its fun!

So the other biological parent is *Daniel Jackson*. Yeeks.

From your comments I'm starting to think you have many ideas for the continuing of this story while my muses want me working on my insane guide for the time being... Would you be adverse to sharing them with me? I need more inspiration and I need to develop some more stuff going in the NCIS direction. Its been to long since I've last seen an episode. Wanna help? Might even ask you to write a chapter or two....

Quentin Travers; you *idiot*! Your overweening hubris nearly got the whole *planet* dead, you moron! Meanwhile, the Scoobies+Task Force Gibbs wind up at the SGC - further, Xander finds out he is the biological son of one Col Jack O'Neill, commander of SG-1.

Yep - definitely Gibbs+Hyena. *Xander* gave an order to Giles - that scared *Ripper* witless. And there's definitely more primal spirits looking for cloanspersons; some *could* get multiple affiliations out of this (the Hyena and Shark alpha primals have already spoken of exactly that). This could get *real* interesting.