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Review of chapter "Are you there, Eywa? It's me, Neytiri..." from Kumoatsu
Review:
ok how the hell did Cordey not choke and die in a minute in our atmosphere. their lungs don't run off of oxigen and don't even try to claim physiology not being changed not unless you aren't going to have Andrew actually able to absorb yellow sunlight for power, if you do one thing somewhere you have to do it for the rest. so seriously I dare you to come up with a realistic reason that encompasses he entire group of people affected by it, other wise you had some really poor planning, and just forgot that the atmosphere on thier planet is poisonous to use and on ours it would be poisonous to them.
Comments from author:
I didn't forget. With all of the many critters that wandered around on that Halloween night, I assumed that Ethan put in a proviso allowing them to defy the "natural" laws of magic so that they could be on our plane of existence. Example: Willow dresses up as a ghost, but doesn't follow any of the "ghostly rules" that are later evidenced later on in the series. Also, her body neither decomposes nor suffers from any sort of atrophy while it is "dead". AFter the spell, she just gets up and walks away.

So, in a word, why did Cordy not "choke and die"? Magic.
Review By [Kumoatsu] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Are you there, Eywa? It's me, Neytiri..." from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "'Bargains' usually aren't." from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Quality and freshness are in great abundance in this story. Please keep it coming.

Peace
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Are you there, Eywa? It's me, Neytiri..." from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Halloween fics are always welcome. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Are you there, Eywa? It's me, Neytiri..." from banner
Review:
I'm delighted that you are writing a Halloween fic. They can be pure gold when done right - and your storytelling never fails. I'll be waiting eagerly for the rest of it...
Review By [banner] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Are you there, Eywa? It's me, Neytiri..." from eriktheviking
Review:
Well written Cordelia and confusion.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'Bargains' usually aren't." from eriktheviking
Review:
Great teaser for an opener.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Are you there, Eywa? It's me, Neytiri..." from MissE
Review:
Very interesting. Will you be having Cordelia stay as Neytiri? And will she have problems breathing? (Like humans do on Pandora.)
Review By [MissE] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Are you there, Eywa? It's me, Neytiri..." from CPTSkip
Review:
A Helloween with Cordy?
And she's nearly naked and blue?
I love your premise so far
But where is your story going to?

I'm guessing there will be fallout
From your changes to Buffy's tale
Of course you have my attention
Because I love a woman with a tail.
Comments from author:
LMAO!

Epic... win... review! You just made my week.

*wanders off chuckling*
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Are you there, Eywa? It's me, Neytiri..." from JediKnight
Review:
Love your work so far, I hope you'll add more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Are you there, Eywa? It's me, Neytiri..." from CJNyfalt
Review:
Well, a good start, so far. At least Neytiri is interesting, the other two will be a greater challenge.
Review By [CJNyfalt] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "'Bargains' usually aren't." from Morgomir
Review:
I'm sorry to say I can't rhyme to save my life. Great start and keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'Bargains' usually aren't." from ChiVayne
Review:
I'm always up for a Halloween fic,
And with Cordy in it, it's sure to click.

Wow, that was bad
It makes me sad
So I'll just pad
And hope you add
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "'Bargains' usually aren't." from Musicalife
Review:
This is a great start to the fic, mate
I wish you would post the rest soon, mich (hey, it's hard to rhyme with wish ~_^)
Review By [Musicalife] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "'Bargains' usually aren't." from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
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