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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Pearlmegan
Review:
That was GREAT!!!! CONTINUE PLEASE!!!!!!!
Review By [Pearlmegan] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Neqs
Review:
Cool idea, and an awesome start!
Here's my thoughts on the first part:
Loved Xander's musings, but I'm not sure
how well his careful plans will endure.
As for his name, how about something silly
to match Buffy's, who was named very 'valley'.
Or maybe Alex, wasn't that Scott's brother?
So he can have the X-Men-name bother.
(Or maybe even keep the nick 'Xander'.)
Sorry my rhymes aren't any apter,
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Comments from author:
Alas, despite your wishes, I must say
T’wil be no second chapter
For the rest of the continuing day
I must work for the almighty dollar.
Review By [Neqs] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Thewander
Review:
I really love this. great job. I could see more of this done. Jumping a few years at a go. Xander's first day at day care, and what if one of the kids there was a demons kid. then first day at school . dealing with Buffy as she grew up. and don't forget her friends from LA. teen Xander alone in a home with the cheerleaders while mom and dad go out on the town for the night.
Review By [Thewander] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ferball
Review:
Sorry, can't rhyme (intentionaly anyhow)...

"The Sunnydale survivor, New Council veteran, and possessor of emergency chocolate for the Slayers in his charge, then quickly analyzed his situation, and he at once performed the most fitting action in response to this supremely absurd event.

Xander immediately howled at the top of his infant lungs."

LOVE your writing!

jen
Review By [ferball] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TristramShandy
Review:
A question asked, an answer becks
Oedipus Summers, middle name Rex
Review By [TristramShandy] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Garmorn
Review:
More? Please???


Pretty Please??
Review By [Garmorn] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
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