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Review of chapter "Schools" from VillageOrchid
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Okay, so it could be "that" Diane Chambers from Cheers. I had been wondering. Meanwhile, on Posy. She was fairly taciturn for a house-elf who has been master-less for 11 years. She could have her own quirks. The other house-elves might be a bit more fawning and express gratitude for having been given "direction" and purpose once again... or the Potter family elves might be slightly more independent, have more of a sense of self -- and maybe even weird hobbies... that they would have cultivated to an almost extreme level (levels of expertise) during their directionless period.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Break-in" from VillageOrchid
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Is Bella a crossover character?
Comments from author:
Bella's the brunette from the third season of Supernatural. Her first appearance is in 'Bad Day at Black Rock'. You might not recognize her because I spelled her name with 2 L's instead of one, which is how the show spells it. So, yeah, she is.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Schools" from twlight
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I love the house elf part. You did a wonderful job with her. I am looking forward to the next installment.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. I'm grateful that all of you have been patient with me.
Review By [twlight] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Schools" from ChiVayne
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It was very nice to see this continued, glad you got past your block.
Buffy is doing a great job with Harry. I am looking forward to seeing how you have Buffy deal with her fellow slayer.
Comments from author:
Thanks for being patient with me.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [14 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Schools" from mithrilandtj
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Cool!
It sucks that Faith got killed so soon though.

I like the house elf.

BTW How the hell did Kinsey get elected President?
He didn't make it past VP in SG1, the Pres at the time threw him out for his crimes.
Comments from author:
That's where Azael comes in, and that's all I can say without giving too much away
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [14 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Break-in" from slayerslittlesis
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Damn, this whole series is amazing. This is one of the best stories I have read in a while. Just, WOW!!! Please update soon.
Review By [slayerslittlesis] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Break-in" from nightshadowlife
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woah!! AWESOME start to the second story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [9 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Break-in" from (Past Donor)athenewolfe
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ohhh intriguing beginning to the sequel
Review By [(Past Donor)athenewolfe] • Date [27 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Break-in" from mithrilandtj
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Kinsey needs to die.
So Jack's a General now?
Comments from author:
Yeah. SG-1 followed the canon timeline for the most part. It might become more clear later on in the story. I don't know how much I'm going to mess with Stargate.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [16 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Break-in" from immortalsilence
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loving this fic more please
Comments from author:
I'm working on it. I'm happy you like it.
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [16 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Break-in" from twlight
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You killed Faith and created an different evil slayer? (sigh) It's a pitty that Kinsey is presadent. I just realized something, I thought Buffy's house was unplottable and has muggle repelent charmes on it, if that is true how did Bella and co get in? I love this story so far and I eagerly look forward to more.
Comments from author:
The answer will be revealed soon, trust me. Thank you for your review.
Review By [twlight] • Date [16 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Break-in" from Valkyrie
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Someone's gotta get shanked for this. Just so you know, I wouldn't be against it if president Kinsey woke up with a knife through his throat.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Break-in" from mmooch
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Holy sh*t! They've got a Slayer coming after Buffy and Harry now? Man, really can't tell who the good guys are anymore. I mean, we already knew Kinsey was a piece of crap - and too bad that he managed to kill Hayes - but I'm still a little heartbroken to hear that Dumbledore has fallen so far. Not to mention him and Travers turning a Slayer into...whatever it is that Bella is.
Comments from author:
I'm glad I can keep you on your toes. Bella will be explained later, I promise.
Review By [mmooch] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Break-in" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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This Bella's being awfully chatty - quite stupid of her. I vote for kill her (and her companions), vanish the bodies, make preparations to move, and above find out how she managed to make it inside of an unplottable location. If that status is compromised, they need to move ASAP.

Oh, and then make immediate plans to assassinate President Kinsey.

And Dumbledore.
Comments from author:
Just because something is unplottable doesn't mean that it can't be found. Even though Hogwarts is disguised as a dangerous ruin doesn't mean that the rare muggle hasn't stumbled onto the grounds.

Don't worry, Buffy's got a plan.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Break-in" from kayron
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Poor Buffy and Harry! What a convoluted mess they're in!! The American public just proved to be as stupid as the Wizarding people (and THAT is a mighty insult!!) by electing that nutcase Kinsey as president!! Now a SLAYER is working as a mercenary for Kinsey!! Dumbledork still wants to mold Harry into his weapon, for 'The Greater Good' of course. Kinsey has secret plans to make Harry into HIS personal weapon, all under the guise of 'Doing God's Will' of course. They are surrounded by meglomaniacal crazy people!!! How are they supposed to get out of this mess? If either Dumbledore or Kinsey get their claws (they are demons of course, they're certainly inhuman) on Harry, he'll never see his family again or have a decent life. A convoluted mess! I look forward to seing how the Summers/Potter clan works their way out of this mess.
Comments from author:
Now that I've set up high expectations I hope I can live up to them.

As to the American people being stupid, I can only point to President Bush. He placed the US in a war with no clear way out, placed ridiculous standards on schools and punished schools for not preforming to set standards instead of giving them money to get better, and set up the nation for a huge recession that we're still trying to climb out of. And he was elected TWICE!!!!!! But enough of that. I'm done venting my frustration with bush.

Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [kayron] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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