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Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from Currchan
Review:
Excellent story. I'm looking forward to reading more. The only concern I have is that you not write SuperSmart!Harry as I feel it is out of character. An eidetic memory is a good reason for him *knowing* many things and learning languages easily, but being able to recall everything you read is not the same as understanding it. But it is, of course, your story.

"I decided to try and make a story that had a good Dumbledore, let’s see how it goes"
But I like _bad_ Dumbledore! ;P
Review By [Currchan] • Date [22 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from spacey
Review:
im very interested in both harry's first manifestation(s) of magic and how the whole altered citizenship thing will be handled
Review By [spacey] • Date [24 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from mithrilandtj
Review:
I love this story! Can't wait to see what you do with it!
Who's after Gibbs this time?
Also can't wait to see how Dumbles reacts to a missing Harry.

Update SOON!

PS: BTW (A desk, amour and a chest of drawers where scattered around the walls of the room,)
The word you needed was ARMOIRE
Amour means love (French, I think)

Anyway, more please :)
Comments from author:
I had a feeling I had gotten that word wrong... DAMN IT!! :P glad your liking the story!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from shinysolace
Review:
I absolutely didn't expect to ever see this crossover, and certainly didn't know what to expect from it. So far it's really interesting! A friendly Ziva (thank god! I love her but she normally gets spun in a negative light), a helpful Jenny (so far anyway), and a good Dumbledore apparently... Really going against the grain eh?! Really looking forward to the next update- please keep writing this!!!
Review By [shinysolace] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great writing of an unusual pairing.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from AllenPitt
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works for me--Dumbledore put Harry with the Dursleys for what he thought were good reasons... how he'll react to all this is anybody's guess. On the whole I think he'd be ok with it, the lack of blood wards would be the only problem. And even with that...they'll collapse at Privet Dr. anyway, as HP doesn't consider it his home anymore.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from dazzlar
Review:
Good story. Looking forward to your next chapter. So much fun to be had with a photographic memory, so many possibilities. I'm interested to see which direction you take that.

cheers
Dazzlar
Review By [dazzlar] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from AzrielSunHawk
Review:
i like this. nice to see harry get a somewhat good start in life...
Review By [AzrielSunHawk] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from JediKnight
Review:
Pretty interesting so far, I hope that you'll post more soon.

-Also, I think Harry needs a haircut if his hair is so long, get it back to the style it is in the books.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from Emeraldiceus
Review:
Great story, love how harry teases tony. Can't wait to see more! Oh and this is set after Gibbs loses his memory and goes to Mexico, right?
Review By [Emeraldiceus] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from Bluesnowman
Review:
great work.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from CPTSkip
Review:
Nice start. I like seeing how having loving parents would have effected Harry's battle with Moldy Shorts. I had no problem with how 'unusually' quick Gibbs adopted Harry. Gibbs is one of those guys who not only knows who is the correct power behind the various bureaucratic thrones but how to trade favorers to get what he wants done done. I look forward to more of your story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from DuskyDushku
Review:
I really really enjoy this so far :]
Review By [DuskyDushku] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from morgannac
Review:
Great beginning and I love the crossover. Do you need a beta reader? There were a couple of miss matched words.
Review By [morgannac] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from kayron
Review:
Great! If the story has a good Dumbledore, then he won't be trying to take Harry away from Gibbs. He'll let the adoption stand, and maybe he'll even let Gibbs and Harry know about magic so that they can prepare. The stalker that was thinking of Harry as Gibbs' new weakness was disturbing. Would this be the same man who murdered Gibbs' wife and daughter? Harry noticed that Gibbs likes someone, but they act as if they DON'T like each other. Would this person be the director (Jenny) or Ziva? I certainly can't imagine it being Abby. She's strikes me as more of a daughter to Gibbs.
Comments from author:
I'm glad your liking the story! You will find out who the stalker is soon enough :P as for the person Gibbs is interested in ... Who ever said it was a girl :P
Review By [kayron] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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