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Review of chapter "Mending fences and making enemies" from PenelopePendragon
Review:
i loved the dean/angelus interaction would love more of that...kicks angelus poo head...awesome chapter overall looking forward to more :)
Comments from author:
lol I liked writing that. wasn't sure I got Angelus quite right but there will be more encounters, Dean has to get his knife back some how right? Keep reading and reviewing!!
Review By [PenelopePendragon] • Date [31 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mending fences and making enemies" from (Past Donor)Angellia
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Lol IMing. I'm not a big fan of it myself but I guess it works for the chapter

I think you have Dean's reaction down great - not happy but still willing to help. That's so like his character.

Good chapter (though I winced a little at the shot to Angel's head, that's gotta be messy :s)
Comments from author:
He didn't actually *shoot* Angelus so much as knock him out long enough to get away. But there will be more encounters, just keep reading. I wasn't sure about the Im'ing either, kinda came as a split second add-on, but it worked :) And I think I got Dean down pretty well, thanks!
Review By [(Past Donor)Angellia] • Date [31 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mending fences and making enemies" from spk
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I'm definitely intrigued. I like what I've read so far. Can't wait to see where you take this. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [spk] • Date [31 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secrets" from (Past Donor)Angellia
Review:
I adore Joyce, she's like, my favorite character. Ever :D I'm very glad you involved her. It makes me laugh how oblivious she is though, "Willow read something out of a book, and now he can't come in anymore." Bless her in denial cotton socks.

Nice chapter, though Dean was a bit of a punk though lol. Can't blame him really, sucks to be kept out of the loop. I wonder how Buffy's gonna explain things to him. I really liked the line about how she made him someone he didn't realize he was (or something like that lol, I've forgotten hehe). That was very sweet.

The only other thing I can say is that you seemed to slip into present tense a couple of times in the beginning and the middle. I don't know if you did it on purpose or not.

Anyway, great chapter
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback, I've started working on Chap. 10 but that won't be done till tomorrow probably. I'll have to re-read it to see what you meant by the present/past-tense. but I liked Joyce, was sad when she 'died'.
Review By [(Past Donor)Angellia] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secrets" from PenelopePendragon
Review:
yay u updated very good and now that Dean knows how will this affect thier blooming relationship.
Comments from author:
Well there's stormy seas ahead but I have high hopes for the pair :)
Review By [PenelopePendragon] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A different kind of knight" from PenelopePendragon
Review:
very pleased with developement of the story can't wait for more plse.
Comments from author:
Yay thank you!
Review By [PenelopePendragon] • Date [28 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A different kind of knight" from (Past Donor)Angellia
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Uh oh, Dean's not gonna be happy when he finds out people have been keeping secrets from him :s

Loved all the affection between Buffy and Dean - the hand holding, kissing on the cheek etc. It's little things like that that make it really nice.

Great chapter
Comments from author:
Thanks! I wanted to show a softer side of him and the song is one of my favorite, they just meshed together nicely.
Review By [(Past Donor)Angellia] • Date [28 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What's a Slayer?" from PenelopePendragon
Review:
totally loved the handglide on a dorito lol-more pls i demand more pls nowish
Comments from author:
Lol yeah, my friend Pariah is always telling me short jokes and I threw his favorite in. I have 2 more chapters written, just have to type them up! They'll be posted Monday I'm hoping!
Review By [PenelopePendragon] • Date [23 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What's a Slayer?" from (Past Donor)Angellia
Review:
Ooh Angelus is so evil lol

Nice chapter, yay for Dean finally knowing :D
Comments from author:
Hehe yep, I don't know which is more drool-worthy: Angel or Angelus lol. And I thought it'd be funny to have him find out that way and ask that question
Review By [(Past Donor)Angellia] • Date [23 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What's a Slayer?" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Uh-oh, Dean's in danger now. Angelus is getting possessive. Still wish they could stake him for Buffy.
Comments from author:
Sorry, lol I want to play with him a little bit longer
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revelations" from (Past Donor)Angellia
Review:
Nice chapter, it'll be interesting to find out how the Winchester's react to learning that Buffy is the slayer
Comments from author:
Lol you'll like Dean's reaction :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Angellia] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Bronze and Sam's retribution" from PenelopePendragon
Review:
lovely more please
Comments from author:
Thanks! I got two new chapters written and will be updating today! Also wrote the first 2 chapters of the sequel so check it out!
Review By [PenelopePendragon] • Date [20 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Bronze and Sam's retribution" from (Past Donor)Angellia
Review:
Lol I liked how Sam danced with Buffy to annoy Dean, funny stuff

Great chapter
Comments from author:
Thank you! I was going to push Sam and Buffy's meeting back but had that idea of Sam asking her to dance to rattle Dean and couldn't pass it up. Was just too much of a Sam thing to do :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Angellia] • Date [20 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Bronze and Sam's retribution" from chaosrachel
Review:
I can only imagine whats to come when Angelus pops up. Love the interaction with Buffy and Sam. More please :P
Comments from author:
Yup it'll be lots of fun!
Review By [chaosrachel] • Date [20 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Invitations" from PenelopePendragon
Review:
how did i miss this loved it -want more immediately :)
Comments from author:
thank you! I worked on this chapter and the 4th most of the night, and hope to have at least 2 more posted by the end of the weekend.
Review By [PenelopePendragon] • Date [19 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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