quite good so far, though I don't know much about Supernatural to comment on that. and Pennywise?
Comments from author:
YES! I couldn't remember his name for the life of me! But yes, that is exactly who I had in mind LOL, though obviously he won't be a huge godlike thingy like in IT
Review By [fitzthrawn] • Date [6 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I enjoyed this a lot. I felt your story structure and characterizations were both good. I, personally, would have enjoyed seeing some of the angst and growing pains that such a relationship would entail. You have done a great job with the story.
Next up, maybe her dad can see the scar she has ? (from being stabbed in S3 by Buffy)-- could start a 'conversation'. There's still a lot about her past that he doesn't know and won't be happy about---same for Dean as well, possibly.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Apr 10] • Not Rated
I am loving this story. I have never watched Sons of Anarchy before, but like many of the fics on this site it makes me want to get my hands on the first season and check out the show. So thanks for something new.
Side note - isn't the last half of chapter 8 and the first half of chapter 9 the same?
Review By [willowbee] • Date [6 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from starshinedown
Review:
I'm not at all familiar with Sons of Anarchy, but it doesn't really matter; the characters from that show are written well, and the personalities of the characters I do know are written well, reacting to new situations more or less how I imagine they would.
So, yey! I might even check out SoA. :)
Thanks for the entertainment thus far!
Review By [starshinedown] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Not Rated
VERY good, just stumbled onto this fic. Love that Clay and Gemma were so welcoming of Faith, and that the secret of Faith is out....will be waiting for the large drama to unravel when Faith admits to killing another person, I can see Clay being forgiving in that area easily, along with the other crew. Tig would prob congradulate her! also, she'd get to hang up her mugshot! lol
Review By [Drusilla] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Not Rated
I can tell that Clay really wants Clay to stay with the family. For all that the SoA are amotorcycle club that's on the road a lot, they seem to be homebased people too. Clay is a dad who wants his daughter close to home. Luckily for Faith he's the type of guy who may not like her leaving, but he'll understand and support her. Gemma's right, now that Faith has a family that she feels a part of, she'll always come back.
Review By [kayron] • Date [3 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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