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Snippets of Insanity, or Xander's revenge

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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Pardryll
Review:
this is an AWESOME drabble-set! Despite the lack of knowing EXACTLY what's going on, it manages to be hilarious. Actually, it makes it even funnier >.> Rock on!
Review By [Pardryll] • Date [23 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from xman
Review:
"You've made me wonder at the story around those ideas and then more insanity came to mind and I threaten to stabe my brain with a Qtip."
Review By [xman] • Date [23 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from nightowl
Review:
Twisted. You just made my day with this one. Thank you
Review By [nightowl] • Date [23 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from twlight
Review:
I love these snippets of insanity, I look forward to more.
Review By [twlight] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great fun read, thanks.

My comment about the amount it was about what happened in-between the snippets. The thought of Xander actually rising to Major just begs the question of how many times he has saved people on the promotion board.
Comments from author:
Ah, I understand, this is all done in good fun for the sake of insanity, so reality doesn't really come into play... Thanks for enjoying this despite its shortcomings.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from spacey
Review:
maybe i'm mentally ill [maybe?!] but 16, Haloween, had me actually howling with laughter
Comments from author:
glad you enjoy this.
Review By [spacey] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from nightowl
Review:
I'm loving this. I so want to know what the deal is with each snippet. I'm greedy. I want to know what lead up to each one. I know there's a story there but I can't quite see it. Oh well. I'm gonna just be happy with what I get. Great writting.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much, and regarding what the deal is with each snippet: easy, insanity and a vivid imagination, remembering the hijinks O'Neill and Tea'lc got up to in "Window of Opportunity" helps as well, there is nothing in this story O'Neill wouldn't do himself given the chance, and we all know Xander would have no reservation about any shenanigans.
Review By [nightowl] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ferball
Review:
Weird, but I liked this one best:

Dr. Frasier to the Stargate Room, Dr. Frasier to the Stargate Room, oh and bring the big needles; Major Harris had a date.

jen
Comments from author:
Even though it is the shortest of them all?

Thank you.
Review By [ferball] • Date [21 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great fun read that would have got a 10 if filled out.
Comments from author:
Thank you.

Are there restrictions to how filled out a chapter has to be, I tend to have this weird but awfully short ideas.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [21 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MissE
Review:
snicker... snort... cool!
Comments from author:
Thanks for that snicker. *grin*
Review By [MissE] • Date [21 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
Xander as a part of SG1 would frighten anyone. I certainly enjoyed this though and am looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks and be afraid, be very afraid... *evilgrin*
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [21 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dreameralways
Review:
Fun, love the concept, but have to give you a fail for the military stuff. It's a minimum of 6 years to make Major (if you are fast tracked, but usually takes about 9). You have to have a college degree to become an officer, therefore even if Xander were taking college classes on the side that weren't depicted in the show, he still wouldn't be eligible for joining as an officer until 2003 (assuming standard 4 year graduation). Then add 6 years to get to Major (2009), and Sam is either a Lt. Colonel or a full bird Colonel by then and has commanded Atlantis. (It should be noted that until Sam made Lieutenant Colonel, she was actually being promoted very slowly for how important her position was. We pretty much assume that she wasn't promoted because of a lack of available higher ranking slots, and if there's a lack of slots, Xander's not likely to get promoted quickly.)
On the enlisted side (which you made Spike and Angel) you can't join as a Corporal, not to mention that there is no such rank in the Air Force, so we're assuming a different branch for them (unless you meant Senior Airman). Therefore being so lowly ranking and in a different branch it is highly unlikely that Xander would be in their immediate chain of command. Therefore it would be very difficult for him to boss them around since their first line supervisor would get very upset over someone stealing and improperly using their soldiers. Then, to note, it's also against regulations to make someone that you outrank run your errands for you.
Don't get me wrong. It's funny and entertaining, but military aspect and time line don't work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the love...

about that military stuff; I did not really take this into consideration, so just imagine this being a universe in which this kind of stuff is necessary...

How else could I have Xander boss around Spike and Angel

;)
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [21 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ghostrider
Review:
Be afraid.

Be Very Afraid.

It's O'Neill and Harris!

RUN!!!!

*snorts* That's the reaction any badddie will have that KNOWS these two. I'm pretty sure General Hammond will have upped his Maalox and Advil intake.

This is very cute and I'll be following the insanity that will be ensuing.
Comments from author:
Thank you...

I hope I will be able to update daily...

:)
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [21 Mar 10] • Not Rated
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