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Review of chapter "Many a Mile" from WolfiousOne
Review:
This definitely needs more added to it. It sounds like the beginning of a very good story.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it and there might be more added, muse permitting. Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [WolfiousOne] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Many a Mile" from (Recent Donor)mpop
Review:
Sounds like the beginning of an interesting story.
Comments from author:
At the moment it's just a story, but hopefully the muse feels the need to add to it someday soon. Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [(Recent Donor)mpop] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Many a Mile" from deathgeonous
Review:
Please don't just end it here, this is, well, it's just too good not to continue. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
It might be continued, but that all depends on the muse and I have no control over her. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for taking the time to review.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Many a Mile" from QOShea
Review:
Very interesting. I do hope to see more.
Comments from author:
Thank you and I hope to see more too. :) Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [QOShea] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Many a Mile" from Bugeyedmonster
Review:
More please?
Comments from author:
Hopefully. Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Many a Mile" from oldgirllost
Review:
Put me on the "I want more" list. This is very good and I love the portrayal of Joyce.
Comments from author:
Your name has been added. :) Thank you and Joyce is just fun to write.
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Many a Mile" from Lize
Review:
I'm intrigued and would love to see more of this verse.
Comments from author:
There might be more, muse and real life permitting. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [Lize] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Many a Mile" from LeaFairy
Review:
Wow, this was sooo good! I totally enjoyed reading from Joyce's POV, I've really never read a fic from her POV, or even with her as the centric character before, but I really liked this.. a lot.

I loved how she's willing to sacrifice almost anything for her girls, Faith included. I also love the idea of Dawn and Buffy as werecheetahs and Faith as a werelion. Brilliant!

I wonder if the bounty hunter that saved them was Edward? That would be so cool if he was. But on the other hand if he was, he may have killed Buffy and Dawn because of their possible were-ness. Oh well. *shrugs*

The interaction between Micah and Joyce was nicely done too. I wonder how he's planning on protecting them? Maybe joining his Pard? I don't think Anita would like that though...

Anywho, amazing fic! I hope you write more, I would love to read more from this world!!
Comments from author:
Thank you! Joyce had her moments of brightness on the series and I have a soft spot for her. It's always fun to try out new characters and see what happens. I can see Joyce taking on the entire pride of Los Angeles werelions if it meant getting her girls out safe and sound.

I'm not sure on the identity of the bounty hunter and I think for Edward it would depend on which book this ficlet takes place in because he's evolved over time. I think nowadays he'd be more willing to allow the person attacked to live as long as it wasn't a vampire attack because those can come back wicked crazy.

The Coalition works with all the wereanimals of St. Louis and with Jean-Claude's backing so Micah could over them safe haven in the city, but that doesn't mean they'd join his Pard. Glad you enjoyed the story and thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Many a Mile" from leelaa
Review:
Superb. You simply must give this a sequel as fast as you possibly can. This is too good a start not to have the rest of the story. Fabulous.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I might write a sequel, not sure on how fast though. LOL There's more to this story, but I have to get the muse in the right mind to write it. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [leelaa] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Many a Mile" from FireWolfe
Review:
I like it and I would love to see what would happen if Buffy and Faith still become slayers as well as their animals. I also think it be interesting to see Joyce changed.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it and unfortunately you won't be seeing Buffy and Faith as Slayers. Mainly because the BtVS side of this story is AU, but secondly because they both would have been called already if I was going to use the Slayer concept. :)

Joyce changed how? I'm not sure I follow the last thought. Though I won't be changing Joyce into a wereanimal or into something magical if that's what you mean. I like her better as the humanizing influence on the girls and, hopefully, the rest of the Anita Crew. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Many a Mile" from (Past Donor)Catlimere
Review:
Marvelous! I celebrate a new story to read, especially as yours are so original and well done. I adore Joyce in this story. Completely out of her element, dealing with being newly widowed, her daughter's becoming weres, and absolutely willing to do anything to keep them safe. I love, love that you included Faith, having Joyce consider Faith one of her girls is a great touch.

As always, beautiful job done with the characters' voices. I love the way you showed Joyce's nervousness and concern for her daughters. Micah trying to put Joyce at ease and being willing to help as much as the Coalition can.

I really do hope you'll have more stories in this verse. And were-cheetahs...so very awesome!

*hugs and smooches*
Comments from author:
*blushes* I try to be original and it's always a treat when others think I've accomplished it. Joyce is one tough cookie and I can see her struggling in this situation, but at the end of the day she's going to come out on top - and dragging her girls with her. ;) I think Faith would have easily become one of Joyce's girls had she not taken the turn of the dark in season three.

Thank you! I was attempting to think things through from Joyce's prospective and I'm glad that it came across as her. Micah had the easy task of just listening, but then he's a good listener. Werecheetahs for the win! I wanted something different, but not completely outta left field and I think cheetahs work nicely in that aspect. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [(Past Donor)Catlimere] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Many a Mile" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent beginning. I really love your Joyce. But you have to continue your story. There are too many unanswered questions to stop here. I think this could be a great cross and I really, really would like to learn more about this universe of yours.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Joyce is fun to write because she's so very human and at times pretty damn formidable when it comes to an argument. There might be more, muse permitting, but I really have no control of her nowadays. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Many a Mile" from Whimsicality
Review:
This is brilliant and amazing and I so hope your muse inspires you to write more in this verse because I would LOVE to see more. Even though I usually prefer stories from Buffy's perspective, which you write so well(I'm bad at remembering to review but I adore all of your stories), this was absolutely perfect from Joyce's perspective and I love how you portrayed her and her intense desire to protect her family. I like that Hank was obviously a good husband instead the usual prick, a nice twist, and I love that Buffy and Dawn get to be the same for once. I also love your way of bringing Faith into the mix, that she gets to be the protector, and that Joyce has already adopted her into the family. If you do continue I would love to see a piece from Faith's perspective of how she feels about Buffy and Dawn and Joyce. And of course I would love to see some of Buffy's perspective of both the attack, the interactions with the Pride, and their arrival in St. Louis and any subsequent interactions.
This is a breathtaking little piece and even if the muse doesn't send you more I'm so glad you wrote this one. Great job!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. I like stories from Buffy's perspective too, but I'm trying out different characters to attempt to become a better, more well-rounded writer and thank you again. :) Joyce had her moments of strength, standing up Spike being one of the shiniest, and I can see her doing anything to keep her children safe as best she can. I'm certain she'd allow herself to be infected if she thought she could better help her girls that way, but I much prefer her as a humanizing influence on others.

I have a soft spot for Hank, mostly because so many others tend to vilify him and I like to buck the trend. Plus he wasn't always an inattentive ass. ;) Buffy and Dawn being infected together worked better then just one and I'd have felt bad if they didn't have each other to turn to and plus Buffy can be scary protective of Dawn which is always fun. I think Faith, of all the BtVS crew, would survive the Anita Blake world the best because she's very adaptable and for some reason my muse would not let me write this without bringing her in.

If I write a continuation it would probably be from Faith's perspective and how she came to be a werelion because I'm all sorts of curious about that. I honestly think Dawn's prospective of the attack and possible hero worship of Buffy would be more interesting then Buffy's. Dawn, especially young-bratty Dawn, always did have a way with words that would be fun to try and capture.

Hopefully one of those concepts can snag my muse enough for me to write it like this one did and thank you for taking the time to leave such a thoughtful and detailed review!
Review By [Whimsicality] • Date [21 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Many a Mile" from hangmansgirl
Review:
loved this...hope you continue with it...can't wait to see...

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Comments from author:
*pets the adorable bunny*

Glad you liked it and hopefully there will be more. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [hangmansgirl] • Date [21 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Many a Mile" from BlackPanther
Review:
Loved this story and would definitely like to read more in this universe. Possibly Buffy or Dawn's POV?
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it and hopefully there will be more. Though I'm pretty sure the next up would be from Faith's POV and how she became a werelion because I'm all sorts of curious about that. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [BlackPanther] • Date [21 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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