Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Whimsicality
Very interesting start, includes lots of players which could lead to a lot of potentially fascinating reactions later on, looking forward to seeing what comes next! (And while Buffy and Dawn are my two favorites and you've already included them, I must admit to hoping that somehow, magically, Oz survived as well.)
Comments from author:
Truthfully, I forgot Oz when I started writing this, however, you have given me some interesting thoughts on a plot line or two.
Review By [Whimsicality
] • Date [25 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]