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Review of chapter "doorways" from clarityfades
LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! Can you tell that I love it? *snerk* Whether or not someone else adopts this bunny, you should continue it yourself as well. I'd love to see where Buffy's landed, what the magic of the dimension does to her (& the baby), & how she adapts to her new world(s)--depending on how many times she switches dimensions. & I totally wanna know the pairing you have in mind! LOL Please continue telling this story. I think it's a great beginning w/ a lot of promise. :)
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [27 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "doorways" from (Current Donor)romero
I like your story and hope you continue.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [27 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "doorways" from rosalindmarie
Like! Is this going to be a Connor-esque fic, or something wildly different?
Comments from author:
I have no idea if this is even going to be CONTINUED! But it could either be a Connor fic, a Dawn fic, or a Dawn-and-Connor twin fic. I am unsure. This is, of course, assuming nobody wants to adopt the adorable bunny.
Review By [rosalindmarie] • Date [27 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "diner girl" from clarityfades
*raises hand* Yes, please! I'd love to see more of this...multi-verse Buffy or a return to Sunnydale or anything in between. I really enjoyed this, I especially enjoyed that it was entirely from Buffy's POV. I'm pretty glad that in this AU world, Angelus never discovered Buffy was pregnant (though would that have changed his plans to end the world? we'll never know). & I'm intrigued to see if the "unkempt teens" are Lily & Ricky, Xander & Willow...or someone else altogether who Buffy's never met. Wonderful one-shot (that I hope will get a sequel)! :D
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [13 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "diner girl" from (Recent Donor)Luna
I've never read a prego-Buff before. But I really liked how you wrote this, especially how Buffy's feelings about 'it' changed. Definitely shines a new light on her escape, esp:

Because of the baby, she couldn't contact her friends or family – they would force her to return, might even force her to get rid of her child, if only because it was also Angel's child.

So true.

I would def be interested in reading more of this!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [10 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "diner girl" from kiyo
intriguing...and i'm left wanting more. if you continue this, then i'll be glad i gave this a chance, since i usually skip fr13 and lower fics (not enough action for my liking)
Comments from author:

fr13 is all I write, usually - just cuz I judge it like movies are judged and movies are judge pureeeeeettttty loosely... but still, glad you enjoyed it despite the lack of action. Action scenes are intimidating! *nodnod* I highly respect those who can write them convincingly.
Review By [kiyo] • Date [31 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "diner girl" from Prometeus
Holy crap. Well this makes a lot of sense.
Comments from author:
I know! Why isn't there more prego!Buffy on this site?!

I think it's cuz Willow seems more maternal....
Review By [Prometeus] • Date [30 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "diner girl" from valdimarian
I'd kind of like to see Buffy go back to the Scoobies. In another fic I've seen her get pregnant during the season break, but I don't think I've ever seen her be pregnant by Angel. Plus in every other fic where I've seen her get pregnant she's always hidden it from the scoobies by moving away (post season 7) or the author's only shown it in flashbacks.
Review By [valdimarian] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "diner girl" from anyareine
This is great. I'd love to read more.
Review By [anyareine] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "diner girl" from Cutiepie
Interesting twist, although I can tell that you don't have much experience with the details of pregnancy.

I can give you the benefit of a doubt with Buffy hearing the baby's heartbeat (although only because of the Slayer package) but at two months, the fetus would be around the size of a pencil eraser (if that big), not the size of her fist. It is all the fluids surrounding the fetus that contribute most of the weight, not the baby itself. By five months, the baby reaches more the size of a chicken egg, and that is around the earliest that an ultrasound would usually be given (unless multiples are suspected).

Anyway, if your muse consents to continuing this, I would read it. It's good and has potential.
Comments from author:
Lol, thanks and I'll correct that. I looked up the heartbeat thing, so it's pretty close to accurate, but the rest I really just didn't think about. Thanks for the help!
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "diner girl" from CPTSkip
I like your setup. A pregnant runaway Buffy is an interesting variation I don't think I've read about before. I hope you follow up on this story. You mention Buffy possibly crossing dimensions. I wonder if she could meet and save Winifred Burkle before Angel and company did in the Standard Buffyverse. Fred would make a good replacement for Willow in the genius/sidekick category. But I would love your story a lot more if Buffy's baby does NOT turn out to be Connor. Always disliked that whinny git. Maybe a nice little girl? OK, a half Slayer/half vampire nice little girl? Or twins? Lol!
Comments from author:
If I continued this, the kid(s) would be either just Dawn, or maybe Dawn AND Connor... but that's only if I continued it and IF it was twins!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Not Rated
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