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Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from DennSedai
Review:
OH HELL...

damn it, evil author, no cliff hangers like that. Back to work, or I'll send the Xander muse chocolate *evil smirk*
Comments from author:
The Xander muse chocolate? If I *don't* get back to work?

So why am I going back to work again? I'll be waiting right over here for him ;D No teasing a girl about a thing like that because that would make you totally evil.
Review By [DennSedai] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from slmncpm
Review:
*falls over laughing* aspirin wouldn't help her any more. priceless! i still hope they let dawn and willow REALLY have their way with the stupid marine. *hands you scones*
Comments from author:
Scones! I love scones! You make the best scones ever! Thank-you! :D
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from lothlorien
Review:
well the shit certainly has hit the fan. on all fronts. please tell me graham is going to be reasonable and this misunderstanding is going to be cleared quickly. please continue soon
Comments from author:
Naked sketches? Terrible proposal? Rumours soon to be flying around? Bunny rabbits and an unconscious Willow? I'm glad you're enjoying the story and I hope I know what I am doing...
Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Genuka
Review:
Ouchie! That is one dead marine and John is soooo dead!
Comments from author:
Thank-you I am glad you're enjoying the story! John is just not having a good time these days.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [21 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Caliadragon
Review:
This is absolutely hilarious! I almost feel sorry for the marine, almost. I definitely feel sorry for John. Your take on Rodney is brilliant and I look forward to seeing what happens next.

Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
Thank-you so much, I'm glad you're enjoying the story and Rodney, he is my favourite on SGA.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [20 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this chapter, can't wait for the next
Comments from author:
Thank-you so much, glad you enjoyed the new chapter,

sorry about the wait!
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [20 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from micheela
Review:
10++ The dynamics between the "outcast" Scoobies and the Stargate:Atlantis crew is funny but believable. Interesting pairing of Andrew/Ronon. I adore that Andrew is totally clueless and Ronon is having his assumptions pulled from beneath him. The Scoobies "interrogation" by Carter is hilarious. I'm not sure whose I like better - though Andrew's gets points for stopping the interrogation before it actually begins. There are so many things I love about this story but I am simply in love with the scene where Graham asks for Xander's hand in marriage from his father-figure. Giles is pitch perfect. Thanks so much for a wonderful story (I read it in one sitting) and I am eagerly looking forward to the next installment.
Comments from author:
Thank-you so much, I am so happy that you like this story. The Giles/Graham scene was tricky and I wasn't sure how well it turned out so I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it.

Hopefully you will continue to enjoy the story, and sorry about the wait!
Review By [micheela] • Date [19 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from BlackRose
Review:
*Blinks.* Well that went as well as I picture it might go. The John and Rodney conversation had me snickering, and I do hope that everything gets straighten out.
Comments from author:
Thank-you! though it won't be straightened right away, it will be straightened out, promise.
Review By [BlackRose] • Date [19 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from sabinbc
Review:
Gald to see you back! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Glad to be back, sorry about the wait!

Hope you it is worth the wait.
Review By [sabinbc] • Date [18 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from lothlorien
Review:
whoo, this is gonna be interesting. and things were going so well... i almost feel sorry for that marine. he's gonna get his ass kicked so bad... i hope xander and graham get over this little misunderstanding soon. please continue soon
Comments from author:
Thanks, so glad you are enjoying the story, although I think I am going to torture Graham a little... Just a little though I promise!
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [18 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from silvergaurd
Review:
Great new chapter. Finally john can learn what a moron he is. Blaming poor xan. Go get em willow!! Can't wait to see more.
Comments from author:
So happy you liked the new chapter, sorry it took so long!

Thank-you!
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [18 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from cryefourme
Review:
OOOPPPS Now John has definatly put his foot in his mouth AGAIN. Has a horrible habit of that doesn't he. Love this story.
Comments from author:
His foot lives in his mouth, not that I would have any first hand knowledge of what that would be like...

Glad you're enjoying the story!
Review By [cryefourme] • Date [18 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from calikocat
Review:
Aw, the confusion. And stupid phobie that was the wrong thing to say. Nifty chapter, with a bit of a chaos-type cliff hanger. ^^
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story, chaos seems to follow them where ever the Scoobies go!
Review By [calikocat] • Date [18 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from dreameralways
Review:
I can't wait to read what happened when Willow's powers flared. That should be a lot of fun.
Comments from author:
Thank-you, glad you're enjoying the story!
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [18 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story, please update soon
Comments from author:
Glad you like the story!
Sorry it took so long for me to update!
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [13 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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