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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)NotAGoauld
Review:
Howling out loud in laughter!!!! Your mean to sick Andrew on Col. Carter...What did she ever do to you? lol
Comments from author:
:) Glad you like it, I can just imagine the headache she'd get from trying to interrogate him. Thank-you!
Review By [(Recent Donor)NotAGoauld] • Date [3 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
Good second chapter, I like that the Scoobies have all adopted Xander's 'baffle them with bullshit' routine. Also, based on the glimpse we saw of him it seems that Xander and Graham might already be involved; hope we get more on them soon
Comments from author:
Thank-you for your review!
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [3 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from LordCorwin
Review:
It's all your fault! I got yelled at for laughing out loud from this chapter.
Comments from author:
I have to tell you that your review made me very very happy. Thank-you, and sorry(sorta)
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [3 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from silvergaurd
Review:
great new chapter, can't wait to see more! Hopefully soon, so amusing.
Comments from author:
Glad you are enjoying the story!
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [3 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from silvergaurd
Review:
Fantastic fic, can't wait to see more.
Comments from author:
Thank-you hopefully soon!
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [3 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MavenAlysse
Review:
hee hee hee

Lovin' it! This is hysterical so far, I'm really enjoying. Thank you so much for sharing.

Looking forwaed for the next installment.

-MavenAlysse
Comments from author:
Glad you're finding it funny, sometimes I worry that the things I find funny other people just find confusing, you know? Thank-you :)
Review By [MavenAlysse] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spacey
Review:
'grey, g-man, big guy now'? i translated that to mean 'allert grahm, giles and the prez (whoever that may be)'. was i close?
Comments from author:
Bang on, totally smart. I chose the president form the stargate world after doing some searching on the internet for ideas. Thank-you.
Review By [spacey] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from slmncpm
Review:
i can see giles reaching for his glasses to polish. *smirks* yay a new story to read!
Comments from author:
Sweet Giles and polishing his glasses is classic, glad you're enjoying it so far. Thank-you
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
Review:
Hello my name is Evan. We have your kids on Altlantis in another galaxy. Want them back? Do the Scoobies know about the Stargate program? Just because they have the highest clearance wouldn't necessarily mean that they know about other top secret programs. They have enough of their own problems and threats to deal with. When Sam and Shepard find out about Earth's big secret, they are going to faint! I get that they feel that Evan is siding with outsiders, but I wonder if Shepard feels let down personally or professionally.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review and I hope to answer some of your speculation within the story. :)
Review By [kayron] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from churkey
Review:
This is great. I really enjoyed this first chapter. Hope the next one is up soon.
Comments from author:
Thank-you! I hope to post regularly.
Review By [churkey] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MissE
Review:
Interesting set-up. Do they get to stay?
Comments from author:
Thank-you, and I don't know yet. Hope we all find out soon!
Review By [MissE] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ladyfiana
Review:
Love this beginning. I really like the pairings you've chosen. I feel for Lorne, conflicting loyalties has to suck. Glad he's protecting the Xan, Faith, and Andrew. Please, please write more soon.
Comments from author:
Thank-you I hope I can. :)
Review By [ladyfiana] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)LisaF
Review:
This is fun! I like the way you've shown Lorne's competing loyalties, and it's clear that he's torn up over the necessity of taking sides. I'm really enjoying the Scooby interaction, and would love to see one of the SGA's point of view of the great Star Trek debate. I'm looking forward to seeing what's next.
Comments from author:
Thank-you very much :D
Review By [(Past Donor)LisaF] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
Ah, very intriguing so far. I have to say I'm a big fan of the pairings, you don't see either of those enough. Hope the Scoobies stick around on Atlantis for a while- there has to be a *reason* they were dumped out there, right in front of the one guy who'd go to bat for them...
Comments from author:
I love the pairing too, totally my fave's. Thank-you very much
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
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