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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from banner
Review:
I just assumed it was Cameron. Watching Xander work his magic - his ability to make friends is some sort of superpower - was so very in-character. Strong and kind and faithful and willing to do what is necessary, Xander *would* impress someone who works toward efficiency.

Edited to add:
A whole new take on, "I want to give you the world," eh?
Review By [banner] • Date [11 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sandi
Review:
And that is one very scary idea. Is it better if Skynet saves just 'some' of us? And 'Sky' sounded like Cameron the whole time. Bravo.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [11 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LittleRedShoe
Review:
Oh, wow, that was good.
Review By [LittleRedShoe] • Date [11 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SmacksKiller
Review:
Okay, this story was awesome. I really liked your reason for Skynet launching a war on humans.
Review By [SmacksKiller] • Date [11 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Review:
Great start. It has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [11 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DrDamage
Review:
OMG! That's horrifying!

Cool story, but I'm still horrified.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [11 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Whoa doggies! I thought Xander was talking with Cameron not with the Big Kahuna 'herself'! Well done and I find it amusing that Xander has yet another unusual 'girlfriend' and that his charm and 'Xanderness' has possible altered the time-line to Judgment Day. I would be interested in reading a followup to this very interesting story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [11 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dusel
Review:
Right on.
Review By [Dusel] • Date [11 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheMaskedLurker
Review:
--'{@

Recognized early
That this was a "young" Skynet.
Loved what fic implied.

-[ When I saw Sky as the chat name, I suspected it was Skynet. As the story progressed, it was clear it was Skynet long before everything went to hell. I'm glad you confirmed it was Skynet and not a red herring at the end.

Anyways, knowing what I can remember from the original timeline of Terminator 1, how Skynet "matured" due to its interactions with Xander while he was in high school amused me and intrigued me. The "demoness magnet" strikes again. ]-
Review By [TheMaskedLurker] • Date [11 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tammin
Review:
Very interesting. At first I thought that Xander was chating with Cameron, finding the plot twist at the end of the chapter was a nice, though unexpected, conclusion. It makes me very interested in how the future is going to turn out on.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tammin] • Date [11 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Questara
Review:
Dang, that was cool, finally a Skynet I can wrap my brain around.
Review By [Questara] • Date [11 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from slytherinwithwings
Review:
Wow, that was a really good little one-shot. Enjoyed a lot.

FlyingSnake
Comments from author:
thank you. I thought it was an interesting challenge, and no one else had stepped up to the plate.
Review By [slytherinwithwings] • Date [11 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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