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Review of chapter "To a Place we Belong" from GreySerenitatis
Review:
Very nice. The mask thing you've got going is very powerful. I really hope that with The Doctor she can put that aside a bit and let go. Seems like she's holding in a lot and it might just explode one day, you know?

Glad Martha knows that Buffy remembers. Even if Buffy might still hold everything in, at least someone is there that knows what's going on.

Also hope we can see a Buffy/Jack reunion soon, but probably not in this story.

Hoping for more whenever that may be! =]
Review By [GreySerenitatis] • Date [1 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To a Place we Belong" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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I freakin' love it!! I love this Doctor, and I kind of hope he won't die. Buffy can keep him around. : D though maybe I need to give the new Doctor some time to work his way into my heart before I start a serious campaign to keep my favorite (and first Doctor Who I ever watched a whole episode of)

I am so freaking excited that this will be a long story and a series. I hope the Doctor finds out that she remembers too. I hope Buffy called or left a note that she was going on a vacation. I am afraid that she is going to end up with everyone trying to hunt her down and maybe calling Willow to see about getting her back. LOL.

I have to laugh that her father still doesn't know about her knowing the Doctor.

I love her reaction to him. I have to wonder what Buffy is becoming. Part immortal human, part Time Lady and Slayer to boot. I am already ready to beg for the next update. Please please please. : D I have Dr. Who fever. I bought the first 4 complete seasons, though I don't know much of what happened before with the other Doctors I have gone through almost all of the seasons I bought.

Now I need to get the specials. and maybe Torchwood. (it sucks that each season is still so darn expensive).
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [1 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To a Place we Belong" from hellbells
Review:
Absolutely fantastic. It made me happy to wake up to a new update. Hope to see more when you can. When will Jack find out about the Doctor and Buffy?
Review By [hellbells] • Date [1 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To a Place we Belong" from kerrykhat
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:D Loved this chapter, Jez! I like how you allude to the time that Buffy spent with Martha and the Doctor before she returned to her normal life, and how Buffy would think that running away from aliens would be a vacation ;) Can't wait for the next update!
Review By [kerrykhat] • Date [1 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To a Place we Belong" from Romanak
Review:
Yes! Finally, Buffy off with the Doctor. And I wonder how long she'll be away from Torchwood? When will the Doctor find out about her and Jack, and vice versa? And what's happening to her?

You see? All I have is questions!

Really enjoying it.

Response to author's response:
Not complaining, just noting. Reveal in your own time. :-)
Comments from author:
lol. They're all good questions and important ones too. But if I answer them then I'll give away some very important plot for later in the story and you know what River Song says "Spoilers."

Thanks for the review and I promise all will be revealed, eventually.
Review By [Romanak] • Date [1 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "All the Shattered Ones" from TheGirlWhoWaited
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I've read all of the stories in this series and i LOVE them!!! I can't wait until the Doctor and Buffy meet up again--or when Jack comes back and sees his 'new' Torchwood team. PLEASE update soon!!
Review By [TheGirlWhoWaited] • Date [21 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "All the Shattered Ones" from RocksandGlass
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Another great instalment. I'll admit, I had to go back and re-read the story before this one, so there's a little bit of dissonance, going straight from the year-that-never-happened to the aftermath of reversing the paradox, but I guess that kind of fits.
This is looking really good so far and I am intrigued by the idea that the mini-slayers are apparently tied to the time lords in some way, is that Buffy's connection to the time lords, her second connection as well as the watch, or something that she imparted on them because she was the focus of the spell and was already connected to the time lords? so many possibilities. Buffy remembering the year is well handled to, yet another thing to shove under a new mask and hope it doesn't crack at some point, should make Jack's return all the more interesting, especially considering the rest of the team only has memories of their time under Buffy's leadership whereas Buffy knows more of the story.
Mostly, I'm looking forward to reading more, particularly the bit where John hart shows up.
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [20 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "All the Shattered Ones" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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So the Dr and her Dad on their way? : ) I still keep hoping you are planning a little love and romance for her and the Doctor. But why was she out longer then anyone else? Slowly watching the series season 2 I love that cute Dr. and I am sad that he is going to die and become the next one, but it looks like that one might turn out good too. (I hope) Enjoying this series, as with all your other stories/series.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [20 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "All the Shattered Ones" from kerrykhat
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I'm so excited to see the start of this next story, you don't even know. I'm really looking forward to all the fun you have planned for us with this new story. Great job as always, Jez!
Review By [kerrykhat] • Date [20 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "All the Shattered Ones" from hellbells
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I was so excited to see the series continued. I hope you update soon!
Review By [hellbells] • Date [20 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "All the Shattered Ones" from Jerri
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I'm delighted with this next step in this series. Great and enjoyable work, as always.

Jerri
Review By [Jerri] • Date [20 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "All the Shattered Ones" from GreySerenitatis
Review:
Wow, what a great start. I was worried there for a moment that Buffy wouldn't remember the events of the year that never was, because she went through so much and experienced so much. And I see she also didn't come out of that unchanged. I really like how you've described the feeling of Time on her skin.

I can't wait for a little father-daughter interaction. It's been a while since those two have been together, even longer considering that she hasn't "lost" the year. I can see Jack wanting to hug her and just hold on for a long while, curl up on a couch, stare off into space. Though I'm sure he'd want to do that same with Ianto.

Looking forward to more! =]
Review By [GreySerenitatis] • Date [20 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "All the Shattered Ones" from zimes
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I re-loaded the page, saw your name, read the first chapter and then just kinda gaped at my computer. I have no words beyond awesome and hell yeah. Thank You Thank You Thank You for putting this out, especially because I'm still in denial about Ten leaving. (Even after seeing the first episode for Series Five and finding Eleven kinda wonderful.) Can't wait for more, and am really looking forward to the meeting of Ten and Jack and Buffy.
Review By [zimes] • Date [20 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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