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Review of chapter "Stress points, part 3" from Downery
Review:
Good try. Enjoyed the story greatly till this chapter. Went from humorous crack fic to wtf? If the whole spark thing with Hermione didn't happen it would've still been good but that just kind of destroyed the story for me.

Don't hate the story but killed my interest now. Weird how it only takes one twist of the plot to make something unreadable for a person.
Comments from author:
Huh. Interesting. Does it help if I say it's not a pivotal point? Well, Hermione isn't; the main three (H/R/Hr) are *supposed* to be incidental. It's just fun to write her!
Review By [Downery] • Date [22 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fractures" from Bill
Review:
Very well done!
Review By [Bill] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So Very Unlucky To Be You" from Zyanadryn
Review:
this is a great story! love xander bacially taking over hoggywarts!!!
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [28 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fractures" from jujukittychick
Review:
so glad to see more of this, and the conversations with the elves was hilarious and i give you high marks for havign type all that mess lol and what in the world did luna manage to do now? keep up the good work, i look forward to more :)
Review By [jujukittychick] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fractures" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fractures" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It Begins with a rather Absurd Situation" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Happy New Year and god bless.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fractures" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Let's do the time warp!" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
I saw the whole Half-Blood Prince potions book as a major failing on Hermione's part - a predictable one, given her preference for deferring to "official authority" sources. I was continually amazed, throughout the book and the movie, at how she didn't arrive at the obvious conclusion that since the HBP potions book demonstrably gave *better* directions than the official book, and produced demonstrably *better* results, then perhaps the official school potions text was not displaying the most optimal potions formulae and ought to be revised accordingly?

But no, it wasn't "official," and therefore we must pay it no mind at all. Sigh...
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [30 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fractures" from Eureka
Review:
Good chapter. Glad to finally see an update...*Looks at you with a stare before cracking up.* Was starting to wonder if you gave up on us readers.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fractures" from ChaosLady
Review:
I think I've lost track of what happened in the previous chapter.. but the last part was interesting.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fractures" from borgrabbit
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'M gonna have to reread th' last few chapters, 'cause...is Hermione a Heterodyne?

Jaeger Hykoo:

Der Kure for bordom
Is hyu condishun a plague
Tauntin' de heelur
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fractures" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fractures" from lothlorien
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Might've miscalculated just a little bit :P I'm glad you finally updated. Please don't leave us hanging for that long again :P
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fractures" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
Miscalculated? No, really?
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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