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Review of chapter "Chapter 4: First Impressions" from (Current Donor)Blackswordzero
Review:
SLYTHERIN! Honestly I didn't see it coming. Great chapter!
Review By [(Current Donor)Blackswordzero] • Date [1 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: First Impressions" from banditdoz
Review:
ooooooo cant wait to see her and Snape at it lol :D

EDIT: OMG thats terrifying lol
Comments from author:
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: First Impressions" from deathgeonous
Review:
And again, a nice fic here. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: First Impressions" from Starfox
Review:
Intriguing beginning, and a novel idea with the two wands. I do hope you'll keep this going, I would love to see how Buffy, who experienced deadly battles and modern egalitarian values in the US, changes Hogwarts.
Comments from author:
thanks!
Review By [Starfox] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: First Impressions" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
thats interesting, and probably a good place for a slayer. :)
Though it may complicate friendships.
Comments from author:
When has anything been simple?
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: First Impressions" from borgrabbit
Review:
Well, its been a while. I had to start over from the beginning and was the usual impressed with the quality of your storytelling. I will be waiting patiently, sort of, for the next installment. In the meantime have a haiku waffle.

ยบ_O

Tale of two wands haiku:

Double the trouble
Dark light and the shiny dark
Pode and antipode
Comments from author:
It would take more time
for me to write a haiku
than you would expect

thanks!
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [19 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: First Impressions" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
I think Buffy's going to go with:

"Not just No, *HELL NO*!!!"
Comments from author:
I don't think you get to turn the hat down unless it propositions you.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: First Impressions" from Valkyrie
Review:
Nice. Wonder how they'll overcome the divide between Gryffs and Slithers.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: First Impressions" from brokenmimir
Review:
Interesting -- didn't expect that. I just hope this doesn't turn into one of the Buffy/Draco pairings ::shudder::
Review By [brokenmimir] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: First Impressions" from (Past Donor)BuffyFan
Review:
Buffy sorted into SLYTHERIN. Fantastic. With the darkness of the Slayer how could she not be.

I have always liked stories based on the struggle of fighting to be good while accepting the darkness within.

Looking forward to more chapters.
Review By [(Past Donor)BuffyFan] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: First Impressions" from starwolf
Review:
the age thing I think your just going to have to sort of ignore (willingly disbelieve) I think Hogwarts is sort of jr high and high school in one. with Harry's birthday right before school, he would be twelve now. the rest of the story so far looks great. loved how she handled what are soon to be housemates. thanks
Review By [starwolf] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: First Impressions" from AllenPitt
Review:
Ah, you have Buffy age 13, ok, that makes everyone's reactions more understandable. At first I was thinking "what, nobody notices she's 17?" etc.
Hm, Rupert G. probably has a whole fake background prepared wherein she's at least a half blood, maybe a pureblood. Two wands are going to be tough to conceal. Presumably only uses one while in class?
Her new friends are going to be very conflicted to find her in Slytherin. On the other hand, Snape won't be quite as mean..... any chance Luna is (distantly) related to Drusilla? It'd be fun.
Comments from author:
1) yes, there is a fake persona prepared and more will be revealed as we go alone

2) luna is not related to drusilla, because I hate that sort of thing.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Oops I did it again" from Thedruid
Review:
Interesting concept, but only fair excution. From reading the first chapter and reviews here, you are trying to hard to make everything go the way you want it to go. Reactions charcters are having to events is entirely sterotypical, and they're just showing up when convient to you. Also you are rewriting already published chapters, and changeing cannon on the fly.

I would suggest either continueing this story until you get bored with it, or starting over with a new revision of it.
Comments from author:
I'm sorry you feel that way.

1) Rewriting a part when someone points out a serious flaw to me doesn't bother me at all. Really. I think it only makes a stronger story. If the review had been private, and you didn't know about it, would you care? All that matters is the product.

And really all that changed was I took a scene out - I've cut angel out of the story because Buffy is too young to be "involved" with him, and it was my bad that I even included him. I should have thought that through to begin with.

2) I'm not sure what you mean by stereotypical reactions, but I guess I'll have to live with your judgement.

3) I couldn't really care less about "cannon". This is fanfiction - you're allowed to change whatever you want! If you want to read canon harry potter, go read harry potter!

Anyways, I hope you enjoy what there is for you to enjoy in it. I'll certainly be writing more of it, eventually.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Farewells" from banditdoz
Review:
Ive just started to read this and so far it looks great thank you :D
Comments from author:
thanks! update coming soonish (whatever that means)
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [18 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Farewells" from Martin
Review:
I love the character you have given to Buffy, but I don't really care for your story. Lots of oddities. She missed 2 years of magic schooling, so she should be 13 instead of 16 in the show, which means she should be in Middle School not High School. She was getting perved on while she was 12 or 13 by Angel. It simply doesn't fit. You are trying to jam things in to fit your story idea. And if you wanted to fit things you should have just had magic school start at a later age, say at age 13. She would have been 3 years behind but able to catch up 2 of those years to be in the same classes as the golden trio.
Comments from author:
You are entirely correct.

I have completely removed the part with Angel, there was never anything between them now.

And In this story I have Buffy now at age 13, I've put a little forward in chapter 3. I'm thinking of doing a bit of rewriting of this to slip it into chapter 1, somewhere.
Review By [Martin] • Date [14 Jan 13] • Not Rated
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